Sunday, January 11

tom's typos

As you'll recall from an earlier bog entry (A Husband Reminded of his Place), I introduced tom, husband of J, who requested I dream up a Christmas punishment his wife could do to him. That was mission accomplished, as recounted in the earlier entry so artfully illustrated by lill jo.

Only one problem, and I wrote tom as follows:
tom,
I published your account on my blog just now.
I found an even 10 typos in your notes to me that I needed to correct.
Please ask J to whip you 10 times with her new belt for each typo. That's 100 in total, plus any extras she wishes to deliver on her own account. You should let her know that I really didn't appreciate having to correct those. I'd have thought you to be more careful in your proof reading.
I am happy to report I was more than satisfied with the punishment tom received, as recounted in his note back:


Miss Julie,

I just saw my letter on your blog, it was quite a thrill! J loved it too and we both adore the sketches from lill jo. J has already picked out a couple of favorites and she was really overjoyed by everything! Thank you again, Miss Julie, for what has been a wonderful (and hopefully ongoing) experience with you!

And oh my god I am so sorry about the typos! I literally gasped when I read this and cannot believe I was so careless! J was mortified when she found out, I haven't seen her that angry in quite a while!

As soon as I informed her of my transgression to you she grabbed me by the hair, ordered me to strip and then dragged me into the bedroom and cuffed my wrists to the head of the bed. She then slid her belt along my naked, quivering flesh and WHAP! brought it down HARD against my ass. She relentlessly whipped me, stopping only to remind me that I deserved this as I had disrespected you and embarrassed her. I was writhing and whimpering, my ass on fire as I felt the welts start to form, and then be whipped mercilessly by J again and again.

Yet i knew i deserved them, and once the 100 ordered whippings were over J had me thank her out loud and also grovel out loud begging for your forgiveness and thanking you for the punishment. I wish you had been there to hear it!

J then said "so that was your Julie punishment, slave...and now you are to endure my punishment." J left briefly and I found myself shaking, as the tone in her voice showed she clearly meant business!

J returned with a few more toys...she clamped my nipples and twisted each roughly as the clamps went on. Then she stuffed a gag in my mouth, and when I felt it touch my lips I realized she had coated it in the liquid from a can of mushrooms! I haaaaate mushrooms and felt myself sicken as the taste filled my mouth and smell filled my nostrils.

"Now you will be whipped 100 more times for embarrassing me like that, slave. You are to take these without fuss, because you know you deserve them, right?"

I nodded, my heart beating fast and mind racing...the sharp burning of my ass made me shudder, and wonder if I could take it. But I knew I deserved it.

J began, putting her full force behind the first SMACK!! I screamed into my gag and J barked "quiet!" and smacked me again. And again...and again and again and again.

She gave me an additional 100 belt whippings and I'm not sure how I survived! At the end she released my cuffs and had me kneel before her, tears streaming down my cheeks, eyes wide and whole body shaking. She then ungagged me and had me thank her and you over and over again while kissing her feet. Eventually she asked me if I had learned my lesson...I nodded and she slid one hand down my cheek and smiled at me. My slave heart filled with adoration for her and also for you as well Miss Julie.

My ass is still burning and it is painful to the touch...I'm sure I will remember this punishment well for the next few days. My ass has been whipped raw, and I now fear that belt more than ever! Lill Jo's sketch of that was right on the money.

J has also said that I will be writing lines as another punishment, and she ordered me to give you a chance to assign me a line writing punishment of your own if you wish. J wants to be sure you know how mortified she was and that you feel as though my disrespect has been fully dealt with.

J says you can either send me an email with the line writing assignment and put "J's eyes only" in the subject and she will make sure it is done. Or if you are familiar with sites like linepunishment.com, J is more than fine with you creating a task for me yourself.

Also, J loooooved the New Year's activity you gave us, our sex shop has been closed the last few days but she has told me that we will be heading there this weekend so I should be sending you a full report on that soon.

Thank you again Miss Julie, and my sincerest apologies for my thoughtlessness.

Tom


So that's what happens to sloppy typers!!!


Yes, I know I occasionally let a typo slip in myself, but I think that's different. tom is supposed to be a slave boy, so he's supposed to pay attention!

And believe, me, I read this note from him very carefully as I was publishing. I have not found anything obvious. Yes, some grammar, punctuation, and usage may be a little "creative", but nothing careless so far as I can see. If any of you readers can spot anything truly careless, please point it out in the comments, and J and I will make sure tom gets the same again, if not worse.

I have not yet assigned tom his lines. That's still to come. And it will come with additional punishment, as having tom writing lines sitting on a sore (and potentially plugged) bottom is so much more fun for me (and for J as well, I am sure).

And you will note that tom references the New Year's activity I gave them. You'll have to wait until the next blog entry on this theme to read about that...

18 comments:

  1. I am sure he will never create another typo. Any word on jessica's next assignment as well?

    Emily

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    1. jessica did "out" herself to some female friends... One even checked out the brand of her panties by lifting up the waistband.

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    2. Oh wow. Maybe she can ask them for help when she goes to find a bra or even make a mani pedi girls day out.

      Emily

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  2. That was one strict punishment. If that is a picture of Tom's bottom I'd say it was very well spanked and sore and he did deserve it. As another submissive I believe when Tom does his lines his bottom should be plugged and possibility pegged when done writing. I can't wait to hear about the trip to the sex shop and what was bought and when used.
    archedone

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    1. That was not tom's bum. Just a random Internet photo...

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  3. Oh, there are at least 7 grammatical errors in his response, and I was barely even proofreading it that closely.

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    1. I agree, but grammar is a shifting thing with "style" and I would not characterize as "careless".

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  4. Thank you to Ms J and tom for the kind mentions of me above. It was a pleasure to add the sketches at Ms Julie's invitation. Although, as I mentioned to Ms Julie, I thought your original account was wonderfully visual, as was this edition.

    lill (Ms Julie's punished sketch slut) jo

    (Now I'm worried about my grammar!)

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    1. Indeed you should be worried, sketch slut!

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  5. Yes there is more than one grammar gaffe in Tom's reply. How many? It doesn't matter. He should have had "J" proof read it for him, or he needs to be taught how to use spell-check. Thus, my opinion, Tom deserves another 200 lash belt whipping, so, hopefully, he finally learns to be careful with his grammar. As for a writing punishment, lines should be hand written, not typed on a computer. Actually, if it was my Lady, I would be writing a five page college research essay on the importance of using proper grammar and punctuation. And trust me, i would have it proof read by at least two people. Why? Because if she were to find one error in it, forget about sitting... I would not be able to put a pair of panties on for a month when she was done with me. And, finally, if Tom has a problem with my suggestion of another 200 lashes - tough. I can't even guess at how many BELT whippings I've gotten over the last 30 some years for bad writing. Oh, and also the what seems like endless mouth soaping's for improper speech

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    1. Just re read my post, and I'm trembling. There is an i where there should be and I. Busted! Guilty! I already know my fate,but please confirm so there is no question. Address your reply to to Mistress Marcia will be advises her immediately of my mistake. I fear a dose of the martinet is order to resolve this gross error on my part.

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    2. Yes indeed mister high and mighty! A good session with the Martinet Mistress Marcia, if you please. As well as for the above reply which has several more careless errors!

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  6. Hello, Ms. Julie. I don't know what your standard for "truly careless" might be in tom's case. One reasonable expectation, however, might be that if he establishes a standard practice he should stick to it. In that vein, I noticed he sometimes expresses his slave status by referring to himself as "i", but then forgets himself and uses "I". Surely he should be required to use whichever form J finds most appropriate, and stick to it. No offense intended, tom--like you, I strive to remember my place, please my Wife, and accept my punishment when I fall short.
    Best,
    WhMs

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  7. My wife keeeps on telling me I'm a terrible writer in my home language. For this reason at the begininning of our married likfe she used to train me on saturday monday by makeing dictat. today I write lines each time I make typos. sometime she enjoys to lock me in our cellar with only a nice full diaper and beeing left writing lines for hours

    amazing blog.

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    1. Une dictée en français. Out of 20. One point off for every spelling error. If the marks go negative, you get a 0 on the dictée plus a spanking over the teacher's knee in front of the class whose length depends on how negative the mark. I should have loved to have been a French teacher!

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  8. you had gotten on me for my typoand i feel thanksfukfor you doing that i will admit my typo and such should rank high on list why i should be punish with good spanking for it

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