My pen-pal darryl has been hard at work (under my demanding lash!) writing a continuation to our story, The Bargain, first presented in Fiction: The Bargain.
So we now present The Bargain (Chapter 2) for your reading pleasure! The action moves along, very very, slowly, just the way I like it! But there are some really, really good teases in there that had me wetting my panties. I made very few edits to Chapter 2, as darryl is beginning to mind meld with what I like.
I should also point out that I created a page that collects a number of my fictional works together and linked it top right. The index page is Fiction with Julie in case you are interested in catching up on anything you may have missed previously.
Omg what I would give to feel the pubic hair of Ms Julie brush across my face and to smell her musk. Gotta go splooge on the carpet right now.
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DeleteWow! Certainly didn't see THAT coming. What a wonderful development. Shocking! I'm sure young darryl's mind is spinning.
ReplyDeleteVery well done darryl and Ms. Julie. More to come, I hope?
vic
Working on it, but it may be slow!
DeleteI have read Your blog for some time but this is my first comment. Your are amazing and thank You for taking the time to make Your submissive jealous of Your dominance and amazing sex life ! (and at times Your submissiveness). Great story!!! I am also very curious to hear about Your e sub and if he took cock for You and if so the aftermath of that. I had an online Mistress who requested I see a TV. I took cock for her and had an amazing time. I think that having “her” feminist helped but it was an amazing experience. I expected a lot of guilt afterwards but it ended up helping me accept certain desires and is an erotic memory for me.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteNot yet. His original guy fell through but he is looking for another.
Quick niece update. I took her shoe shopping and acted as shop assistant. So hot to rest her pretty feet against my thigh and cradle them in my hand while guiding them into lovely new shoes with “fuck me heels”. I stared at her lovely long tanned legs while she modeled each pair and tried to peek up her skirt when she bent over to adjust the straps. I could see the outline of her thong against her skirt though. Must borrow that next time she’s out! I’m thinking of offering to paint her toenails. Burgundy would be a good colour for her. Bad Uncle.
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That was so hot and intoxicating. I had to read it twice and edged myself about 10 times on the second read. I wish I could find some videos likes this rather than all that typical femdom stuff. But there is something to be said for words getting me so turned on. Thank you Julie
ReplyDeleteI agree about words. You THINK you want video, but then it becomes just a passive exercise in watching. Words allows your imagination to fill in the details exactly as you want them to be! I love that you edged 10 times to the story! I hope you spurted on the 11th?
DeleteIt is nice to think of the reader edging because writing is an exercise in prolonged edging for me. That effect has been heightened for me in writing this story because of the feeling that I am doing it under Julie’s guidance, trying to please her. In order to keep up the momentum, I didn’t allow myself to cum the whole time I was working on it. I imagined that Julie would be displeased if I squandered my erotic energy on orgasms. As a consequence I had blue balls at a couple of points. I much prefer words to videos too. I think it is easier to project yourself into a written story because words force you to use your own imagination.
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Ha ha! And NO CUMMING until I get another chapter to edit, young man.
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OMG this is so delicious. It made me go upstairs and masturbate before I went to sleep. I so thought that she was going to make him put the lingerie on and u just left us hanging at the perfect spot. This story can just go so many ways and I’m eagerly awaiting the next installment. Our hero is so outmatched. Hoping you write in a wedgie scene at some point Just a great job though and so well written. Bravo
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Glad you liked it. This one was all darryl's talent with minimal editing from me. I also love the super slow build up and tease! We'll see what we can do about the wedgie...
DeleteThanks, Sgirard. I’m glad you like it. I am curious about your interest in wedgies. Is that based on some r/l incident for you? I’ve never given much thought to wedgies because I’ve never had one. I guess I can see how the humiliation of it could feed a kink. Am I right in imagining that a wedgie could be quite painful as well as embarrassing?
DeleteJulie, I think this story is as much yours as mine because it has been so thoroughly shaped by inspiration from your blog as well as direct guidance from you. Imagining that you wouldn’t allow me to cum till I had completed the chapter to your satisfaction helped.
Darryl
Daryl,
DeleteThanks for replying. To be honest I find receiving a wedgie to be highly erotic as well as very humiliating when given by a girl. My first wedgie was from a guy and just after I hit puberty. As the underwear (tighty whities) went up my ass all the pressure from the front of my underwear tightened up on my cock and balls and I pretty much came in my pants. might have been my third or 4th orgasm. the boy did not know it at the time though. As I grew I always had a passion for them and most of the girls I dated as well as my wife gave me one when I either asked for it or I brought the conversation around to it and let them do it to me if they never had given one. Now with my wife being fully aware of my kink, she regularly engages me with them and even on the nights when she's not into playing she will pretty much hang me off a hook or doorknob while on my knees and leave me there, very much the same as getting corner time before or after a spanking. these days most of my wedgies come when I'm wearing panties as I regularly where boxer briefs normally which are not conducive to a good tight fit up the crack. The thought of getting one from a girl as shes laughing at my predicament can pretty much bring my over the edge quickly. I'm not trying to high jack your story and look forward to reading future submissions but naturally with the boy having a good shot at being dominated by several girls it just falls into my kinks. Love what your doing and thanks for taking the time to write what I find to be a highly erotic tale. thank you as well Julie for letting Daryl use your blog to get it out to us.
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sgirard
Thanks for the response, sgirard. I can see how a wedgie given by a girl could be wonderfully humiliating. Or given by a boy in front of girls! I need to do some experimentation to see how it feels physically, and how it looks. Don't worry about highjacking our story. Your input is appreciated. We'll see what we can do. Actually, Julie likes the wedgie idea, and what Julie wants, Julie gets.
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I so agree, I found that since a spanking was not going to happen I would find such stories and yes it was satisfying. It was also the reason I got my first adult spanking. A girlfriend found my magazines, knew I was masturbating, and shocked me. So this is what you want, a spanking, I said nothing. She said off with everything and now, and soon I stood naked, erect before her. Oh that will be gone shortly she said holding my erection. It was a spanking I wanted but did not know how hard it could be. She really gave me a sound spanking, made me stand in the middle of the room, arms on head as she scolded me. A few days later she brought up the spanking and I said I've always wanted to be spanked, yes it hurt and still does but accept it. She smiled, said as long as we are dating, I will spank if needed and then from her purse pulled out a large wooden hairbrush and it was not long before I felt the sting of it. I still need, not want, to be spanked, I'm a better person.
ReplyDeleteI too love it when I know she is hitting me as hard as she can. It has to be a total power trip. She knows it must hurt but I will take as hard as she gives. Sometimes I offer up my ass if I know she’s having a bad day and just needs to blow off some steam
DeleteShe has taken on the role of head of household and trust me the spankings get my attention. She has informed her mother of the spankings. There is nothing sexual about the spankings. I need to be spanked and spanked properly and when she is done I'm just like a naughty little boy dancing around, rubbing, saying I'm sorry and soon facing the wall. Oh she does care if one of her friends drop in and see me. I now must say when asked why I was spanked and also state that I have been a naughty little boy.
DeleteDon't tell me there's nothing sexual about it! Ha! ;-)
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Merry Christmas to you and all your readers Ms Julie! I hope Santa gives everyone a lovely red bottom. Cheeky Elf.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas, cheeky elf!
DeleteI enjoy this story and others like it, I must insure that my wife does not catch me. She said I'm a slow learner for she has caught me. It is her "Mommy Stern Voice" and I plead not to be spanked. The last time she caught me I stood in the bedroom, naked, erect, getting a long scolding, then holding a towel I had to masturbate and insure I did so in the towel. The spanking was a long one and once done I laid over her lap unable to get up. When I did get off her lap, she spanked my bottom hard as she took me to the kitchen, she was going to insure I did not rub while she did the dishes. She continued the scolding and I said I was sorry, pleaded to get dress, fell on deaf ears. What matter the punishment worse was being told when I used the bathroom the door will be left open, I will sit on the toilet no matter what. When she felt I was punished enough she told me "Mommy" will spank naughty little boys and I said I know Mommy.
ReplyDeleteYes, you are a very naughty boy for reading such things when Mommy does not allow it!
DeleteI wish I could remember where I read this story, could have been another blog or in a spanking magazines. It was a about a older woman, not dating, but enjoying the company of a younger man. The desires of this young man was a spanking, but not just a spanking and naughty little boy spanking. The story was long and so what happened was this woman purchase pagamas that a little boy would wear. Not recalling exactly what he did, but he had to wear the jammies and was being sent to bed early. She prior to putting him in bed, put him across her lap, with a little fight pulled down the bottoms of the jammies and scolded him for being naughty. He said her name and she spanked his bottom very hard with her hand and said what did you call me. He then corrected himself, pleaded not to be spanked. She then used a paddle and spanked his bare bottom, all the time he was please Mommy, no more, I'll be good, but she spanked him and soon pulling up his jammies put him to bed. In the morning a pillow was his chair, she inspected her work, they ate breakfast he squirmed and when asked if he was going to be a good little boy he said Yes Mommy. The author ended by saying even though this was fiction, there are those out there that would like to be the one giving the spanking and those who wish to be getting the spanking. There is nothing wrong at all, we are here to enjoy life and how that is achieved is up to the individual.
ReplyDeleteYou should re-write the story and send it along!
DeleteWhere to?
DeleteJulie, credit must be given when credit is due. This is the best spanking story I've ever read, and I must have read hundreds. Truthfully, nothing else comes close. It is so delicious! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Take your time, if that's what it takes to make it as good as the first two chapters.
ReplyDeleteGreat feedback - thank you!
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Wow, thank you, Anonymous! That is a great compliment. I guess Julie brings out the best in me.
DeleteSo looking forward to the next edition.
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