It recounts the story of a young man who was strapped on his hands at college, which then required that he also be paddled at home by his Mom afterwards, a fact that all the student body seemed to know about thanks to his little sister's blabber mouth.
To make things worse, his sister had stealthily arranged for her two best friends to be at home with her working on a "science project" when news of the strapping was sure to arrive in the form of a phone call from the college.
Through some tactical lies, the girls got the boy into even more trouble, which resulted in his spanking taking place in the living room where all the girls could see.
However, the spanking was only the start of his humiliations. His inability to control his arousal in front of the girls earned him the ultimate embarrassment that is every boy's worst nightmare...
I hope you enjoy it: The Bargain
I actually got into big trouble as a kid when my little sister blabber-mouthed in school when the principal made an announcement at Assembly asking if anyone knew who was breaking the school windows. She was too little to know the difference.
ReplyDeleteAfter the police came to our apartment my mom showed me a side of her I never knew about before. I literally could not sit down.
Breaking school windows, Tomy!? You certainly deserved what your mom gave you!
DeleteI believe that when I was a kid the premise on which the story is based-- that a strapping at school meant a spanking at home--was common in many families. It was certainly an explicitly stated rule at our house, and I know it was the same thing in the families of a couple of my friends. Thus, having big mouthed sister at school always added an additional level of embarrassment to getting the strap, even if the sister's friends didn't actually get to come home to watch.
DeleteI would like to thank Julie for the wonderful additions and alterations she made to my story.
Darryl
No, thank you Darryl, for the wonderful base story! And btw, as I re-read it just now, I felt I needed to add even more to it, so you may want to go back and try to spot the new bits!
DeleteCan you tell us anymore, Tomy? We want details!
DeleteI had no trouble spotting the "new bits", Julie...er, um, Miss Julie. Wow! I am too inhibited to have written the new parts myself, but I love what you have done with the story. (It's weird how inhibition can affect fantasies, even when there is no audience, as there isn't for most of the stories I write).
DeleteDarryl
“Miss Julie”, much better!
DeletePart 2 of that story could be the mother finding out what the girls were doing and they were spanked bare bottom in front of him, equal justice. Jack
ReplyDeleteNope!
DeleteAnonymous, although I can see merit in your idea of "equal justice", I have to agree with Julie's "Nope!" For me the erotic power of this story is in its extreme inequality, and equal justice would ruin the effect (for me). I love the way Julie was able to see the effect I was aiming for in my version of the story and push it further. Maybe I should address her as "Miss Julie" from now on. ;-)
DeleteDarryl
I’m with you. The “owning” needed to be complete and irrevocable.
DeleteReally enjoyed the story. The best was how those lying girls made things oh-so-much worse for Darryl!
ReplyDeleteOh yes!
DeleteSuch extreme injustice requires redress! Besides, I am much more aroused by M/f spankings. I agree the truth must come out, and retribution land on the appropriate rear ends! Perhaps darryl's father finds out the full truth and adds punishment to the excessively severe mother?
ReplyDeleteMiss Julie, your stories are truly kinky beyond king! I can hardly wait for your next!
Thank you for the encouragement!
DeleteHow about if in part 2 the mean girls cage him? Due to his constant erections pressing against the cage he doesn’t sleep well and he falls asleep in the class of the haughty and beautiful Madame Dubois. She decides that sterner measures are called for and after class takes him OTK whereupon she feels the steel cage pressing against her stockinged thighs.
ReplyDeleteMadame forces a confession from
him concerning the cage and the key holder, Ms Julie, is summoned to unlock him. But once released his full erection springs forth glistening with pre cum. Such disrespect for a teacher! Madame and Ms Julie agree that the cage is an appropriate measure to protect the school’s women from his confronting and unpleasant erections and decide to punish him before locking him up again.
During the punishment these two dominant women bond with each other while bending him over Madame’s desk and taking turns to swing the cane. Mr D
Nice! You should write it and send it to me.
DeleteI have some plans for Madame Dubois too.
DeleteDarryl
You wrote:"For some reason, I've been the lucky recipient of a lot of stories in my email from fans recently. I took one of the best of them, from a fan named darryl, and turned it into a collaboration.
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First it means, my story i sent you wasn't good enough ;-) But hey, Daryl's story was really good in it's way, even though i don't get turned on by some of the settings, the scene itself was really hot, how it was described.
As to your other comment, that you are maybe a bit baffled to receive so much mail. I think it is because of you. You are honest and you enjoy talking and writing about spanking and even giving and receiving it.
That speaks to a lot of people as it seems, because you are real and take part in what we tel you. So yes, the mail you are getting is because of you and how great you are in your handling of this blog and for just being real.
So thank you so much for doing this and being who you are!
Not “baffled”.I well understand why and am extremely grateful when my readers share with me. As to other stories, such as yours, it’s much more a function of timing than anything else. You need to catch me at a time when I’m inspired, which simply cannot be predicted. I really enjoy ALL the stories that are sent to me!
DeleteMs Julie,
Deletemy story not being good enough was more of a joke :-).
Yes it is this way with inspiration. It hits you at the most unusual times.
It is still really splendid of you, that you enjoy all the stuff we send you and enjoy reading and taking your time for it. It's not something to be taken for granted, so still: thank you for being who you are and for taking your time for all of this.
PS: What do you get in return from reading and commenting..? That's a question that lingered in my mind for quite a while.
Well, it keeps my "kinky sex drive" primed for my husband and gives me all sorts of fun ideas to try on him. Also I enjoy being you boys' "confidante" and helping where I can. Kinky charity!
DeleteSounds like a win-win then for everyone.
DeleteDoes keeping your kinky sex drive primed include watching spanking videos or are you more a person that works best with words (i do for example)
I LOVE words, but every now and then a good spanking video can excite me as well...
DeleteVery stimulating. That's the kind of nightmare you wake up from with an uncomfortable erection.
ReplyDeleteI can understand the attraction to the extreme inequality here, and not wanting to weaken that dynamic with any arguably justifiable comeuppance for the females.
Me, I'm imagining some serious retribution for both the mother and the girls. One reason, I enjoy the humiliation, within limits, of females as well as males. I also much prefer fair punishments. A fair punishment is a different kind of humiliation that involves shame for the transgression and not simply being a victim. Darryl was in so many ways a victim in this story, and while that's a valid kind of humiliation to enjoy in fantasy, it is the females here who would so richly deserve the highly embarrassing public spankings and associated domestic punishments that are possible. OTOH, you then probably ruin the dynamic of Darryl's submission to Miss Leslie, which is full of squirmingly erotic potential. So at least Leslie needs to escape her comeuppance so that she retains the upper hand. :)
We’ll just need a different setup, then. In this case, Darryl did cheat and deserved his spanking. I would prefer a setup where the sister did something wrong and blamed the totally innocent step-brother who got spanked by his step-Mom for it. Eventually the truth comes out, and Father IS NOT pleased with either his step-daughter or his wife!
DeleteI like it! The fun of spanking stories is how everyone will have their own take on it. It's a kink that can involve so many different circumstances, settings and characters, techniques, visuals, suspense, moral dilemmas, and then most important to me, the psychological strategies and ordeals that are a special home-grown brand of sadomasochism. I think Darryl must have written it as he wanted to imagine it, and the poor kid truly suffered.
DeleteI enjoyed the involvement of the sister's friends, as that opened the lurid family dynamics up to, not only public scrutiny, but to the last people in the world the boy would want witnessing his humiliation. They were "bad girls," in their ruthlessness, which is a provocative idea. If I was writing a story with the same basic premise, I'd be inclined to focus on one of the friends, and it would be about her experience at least as much as it was the boy's. Many possible ways to tell a story.
Yes indeed! Although I must say that a lot of "extra suffering" was added by yours truly!
DeleteBrett, I agree with you that it would be intriguing to tell the story through the eyes of one of the sister's friends. I centered on Darryl's consciousness because Darryl is me. For me the real kernel of the fantasy is Darryl's consciousness of the power the situation has given the girls over him and his realization that they have successfully contrived to heighten his embarrassment and their amusement. I figured the girls enjoyment of the situation was revealed through their teasing and their plotting together. As Julie mentioned, she turned the heat way way up in the story, making the suffering way more intense. She also greatly enhanced the role of Leslie. The wonderful thing about collaborating with Julie is that she IS the kind of "mean girl" that has always haunted my fantasies. I love that she changed the name of the sister in my original story, thereby inserting herself my fantasy sister. That was a wonderful gift! By the way, you might want to reread the story, Brett. Julie has made some nice improvements, with some input from me.
DeleteDarryl
I am getting to like my “mean girl” persona more and more!
DeleteJulie, please check your email asap.
ReplyDeleteDone and done!
DeleteI dedicated some time trying to recall a few more details, per Julie's request. It was a long time ago, so it was an interesting exercise for me. It was like a meditation.
ReplyDeleteOne was her expression when she answered the door and it was the police. She was shocked and later embarrassed that the neighbors saw what was happening. Neighbors in NY apartment building were nosy as hell.
And I remembered also being shocked finding myself in the situation because up until that time it was years since I got spanked as a little kid. I seriously got away with so much it was incredible.
She was furious and that alone intimidated the hell out of me. I got slapped a few times with her looking right into my eyes and shouting. She used the belt that I was wearing; started over my pants and was not satisfied with it.
It is still kind of a blur. But I tried to get away while she gripped my wrist and whipped me with the belt; most landing on non-butt parts of my body. I ended up lying on the bed in surrender for a long session of repeated strapping.
I had welts on my welts. But bless her heart, she didn't tell my father.
Youch! Hope she at least targeted your butt when you presented it.
DeleteTomy, if you lived in an apartment, do you think neighbors in the adjacent apartment heard your punishment through the walls? Were you conscious of that aspect?
DeleteMy wife will remind me that it is the female who brings the males into this world. It is as a mother that they raised the males. It is as a wife that the husband will bring out the mother and find himself over her lap hoping he will be able to sit. This male wants the wife to be in charge, at times needs to act like a naughty little boy, accepts the spankings, feels much better afterwards. I know that some females prefer to be spanked, rare to find ones that prefer to give. I also feel that the times are changing and that the females have had enough of the males running the show. My wife also reminds me and it is when I'm across her lap pleading for her to stop that if more wives would spank their husbands, the marriages would last, and there would be less stress. Jack
ReplyDeleteI see it more as play, and whoever wants the spankings ought to get 'em!
DeleteDo you ever feel like putting yourself in these story or the one doing the humilation and spankings to the naughty boys like myself or have your own idea or plan you would of done if was you instead?
ReplyDeleteOh yes!
DeleteSome how i knew answer be Yes lol i know you too well lol
Deletei am trying think of story with you in it as the spanker doing punish and humliationkind like story i share before with you
There is a Part 2 in the works, isn't there?
ReplyDeleteI'm sure Leslie will have many ideas of what to do with our poor boy.
Tomas
There is!
DeleteA proposal :
DeleteThe girls plot to have Darryl punished again by Madame Dubois.
They subtilize an object in her bag and make believe that Darryl, enamored, is the thief.
They suggest to Darryl's mother to invite Madame Dubois to come and watch, exceptionally, the spanking, since she is personally involved.
Darryl begs his mother in vain. Madame Dubois « yes, sure ! if you think it can do him some good, he is still so immature !»
No, let's move on from the adults.
DeleteThe girls need to take center stage and explore their sexuality, using Darryl mercilessly.
Jerk him off -- over and over again!
Sit on his face until they come for a first time --then over and over again.
Put him over their laps, spank him, then discover how exciting it is to own his virgin ass.
-Tomas
And later, the girls may want to charge other girls to play with their boy -- $10 / hour to play with his cock--
Delete20/ hr to use his mouth or cock --
30 for an hour of licking anything--
Tomas
All of the characters in the story are, in fact, adults.
DeleteA little fictional tentacle.
ReplyDeleteDarryl has to expect a spanking by his mother when he gets home because he has been punished at school.
Admittedly, it's his cheating that will earn Darryl a spanking, but Madame Dubois is the second element in the chain of consequences. We do not know what she feels when she discovers that Darryl has committed a serious fault. She is strictly following the school rule, but that may not prevent her from feeling a bit of heat in her belly and behind her neck when she tells Darryl to go out with her into the hall.
Maybe she does not like this boy very much. She finds him hypocritical, he has a way of looking at you that is not straightforward. Maybe he looks younger than his age and is not yet well developed as are other boys in the class, more athletic, willing, attractive.
She may be thinking that she has this incredible power over Darryl. A simple phone call to his mother and he is gonna receive a spanking. She has this power and the image it creates is extremely exciting. This boy whose eyes are already filled with tears with only four strokes of the strap, she can imagine him pants down across his mother's knees, red bare bum, crying like a baby. A simple phone call.
As to the picture, the luminous thighs from which all these letters escape are certainly not Darryl's but the whole story is a pleasure :-)
Madame Dubois doesn’t like me? :-(
DeleteDarryl
Maybe positive feelings are more sexy. So...
DeleteDarryl is the favorite of Madame Dubois. She finds him pretty, a little fragile, sentimental. She tends to consider him sometimes as a baby, his baby. She does not understand why he cheated because he is a good student. She is sorry but she has to apply the rules.
When she saw tears in his eyes fog on the fourth stroke of the strap, she almost caressed his cheek to comfort him but she interrupted her gesture when she saw at the same time the bulge in his pants.
She thought how much it could be embarrassing for him to have this teen body that he didn't control.
Looking at him so demure in class, she remembered what Darryl's mother once said to her: "punished at school, spanked at home". Still, she was going to have to call her mother, that was the rule.
And she could not help imagining her little Darryl, pants down to the knees, lying across his mother's lap receiving a severe spanking on his bare bum. His little Darryl. The more she imagined the scene, the more she thought that phone call was needed ... :-)
Much better!
DeleteYes, I like that better too! LOL
DeleteDarryl
The best passage is :
ReplyDeleteThe spankings were delivered forcefully, and did not end until his mother was positive that the lesson had been thoroughly imparted, which invariably wound up with his bawling like a six year old, begging for mercy, and promising over and over again to never ever repeat the bad behaviour that resulted in such a big boy being punished across the maternal knee.
His bottom, penis and testicles do not belong to him, they are own.
He does not rebel. He accepts to be possessed, that his body is possessed and that his mother can dispose of it according to a rule he has accepted. That is humiliation. He accepts it and more, he enjoys it.
J.Stern
Yes!
DeleteAlmost as good a writer as you are Miss Julie. Can't wait for part 2
ReplyDeleteOn its way!
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