Book Review

One of my long-time readers read my latest book very carefully (after I told him he had to - he fears discovery from his wife), and gave me a detailed review over email which I reproduce below.

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[The second volume (M/F) is coming out soon, just in time for Christmas, so stay tuned for that!]

Definitely my relationship with him inspired these stories to a certain extent, as you will read below, as he has a bit of a niece fetish! I've altered his reviews a bit to better conceal personal details of his, but thought it would be fun to reproduce his thoughts here for you all (and a bit embarrassing for him which is a bonus – "but, but, those thought were just for you and me, Julie! Wahhhhhh!" No, he knows his reviews are being published.). To he who shall remain unnamed, thank you for your marvellous reviews!

His self insights are interesting, sometimes profound, and amusing to me. He sent me each review in a separate email as he went through each chapter. We had a sexy banter back and forth which I enjoyed greatly. In the below, anything in blue is either something I wrote back or a reflection/comment I'm adding as I prepare this post.

Any other readers out there, reviews are always welcome so feel free to do the same! And, by the way, there is only one (really good!) written review posted on Amazon, and only 8 ratings (70% of them 4 or 5 stars, but an annoying 2 star without explanation, probably from a hater?). This despite about 300 copies sold. Please, please, please go to Amazon and rate it. Your name is not posted by default, and it's very tough for anyone who even has the account login to find your review, so it's pretty safe!)

Story 1: Spanked for Gawking

A niece visits her aunt and uncle for some pool time.

The setup for the story of Tim, Amanda and Tina is very believable and relatable. Thinking about it, I am in a FLR, as are many/most(?) men, minus the spanking, unfortunately. We make a pretense of shared responsibility and decision making, but the reality is,  my wife runs the household. I also have a long history of ogling and fantasizing about our grown niece. I’m a little surprised that there aren’t more Uncle/Niece fantasies out there. It feels like it has just the right amount of “taboo-ness” to it. Wrong enough to be exciting, but not so wrong that you’re feeling too guilty to be aroused. The swimming pool scene brought back memories of when my niece was in her physical prime. She truly had a “butt to die for” along with the rest of her body, and she didn’t mind showing it off in tiny bikinis.

I love how Tina progresses in the story from seemingly innocent to apologetic to giggling as she witnesses Uncle Tim’s punishment and embarrassment. By the end she seems to be very comfortable with the sexy, teasing niece role. It makes me want a chapter two to see how far Tina will go to tempt her uncle into transgression and inevitable punishment. Will she be interested in delivering spankings to her uncle? Will she take the cock-teasing too far and get her juicy bottom paddled by Amanda?

I didn’t know how I would feel about the belt whipping by Granddad. In my situation, it wouldn’t be necessary. My wife is a very strong and fit woman and would be very able to deliver a severe beating. But imagining being beaten by a man did not detract from my arousal, especially with the humiliation of three women witnessing it with their ears.

The story left me wanting more. I’m very sure Uncle Tim is very sorry he was beaten twice for ogling his niece, but I am just as sure he hasn’t learned his lesson. I think he will try to be more careful in the future, but will inevitably be caught again and again, with progressively more severe consequences.

I loved this story! Given that the word “niece” is now all that is required to tickle my erogenous zones, I was hard as I read it for the first time, even though my wife was sitting in the same room with me, sipping her morning coffee, having no idea what I was reading and thinking about. 

🍆 🍆 🍆 🍆  out of 5

This was in part inspired by his niece fetish, but also by that time when my husband looked at our niece's ass. In his defense, she was a dancer and was hanging out in our kitchen wearing ass-hugging leggings, and she never noticed it, but I did, and spanked him for it later!

Story 2: A Naked Husband

A husband is caught in the nude by his wife and her sister as they are touring their new house.

Wow! Have you been spying on me? Did you somehow get access to our Ring cameras? I feel like your stories are revealing that you know things about me that I’ve never told you. I felt so many connections to the story of Mark, Emily and Susie that it doesn’t feel like a coincidence. Maybe it’s just my confirmation bias showing. Maybe it’s my childish tendency to make everything about me. Or maybe I’m just not as unique as I think I am and lots of other people do and think like me.

It begins with the pocket door. We don’t have an elegant bathroom like Mark and Emily, but our house, built in the 1960’s has several pocket doors. I didn’t think of that as a modern feature. Then there is Mark’s below the waist shaving routine. I also keep my balls and asshole shaved. Not because I’m planning to receive a blowjob anytime soon and I’m never going to be pegged by my wife. (“Fuck no! I’m not gonna be your gay boyfriend!”) But I keep doing it because it feels like something I should keep doing.

As I went through the dialogue of Emily berating Mark, it occurred to me that my wife actually does spank me. Almost daily and quite frequently. But the spankings are verbal. Often deserved, sometimes not. They always hurt. Maybe longer than physical spankings would. I struggle to please her, but I somehow always fail to meet her expectations.

Another area where I diverge from the story is my wife has never been complimentary about my cock. Quite the opposite, she very freely and frequently intimates that I am inadequate. Usually in a joking way, but everyone gets the message. As much as my sister-in-law might think she wants to see me naked, I’m sure her thrill would quickly diminish into laughter once she saw how I am equipped. My little penis definitely would not be “flopping around” as I ran to clean up the mess. The humiliation of being caught naked has to be much greater when one has a small penis, no? 

As with “Caught Gawking” I found myself wishing for a second chapter. I imagine Susie would be very interested in learning more about Emily’s and Mark’s pegging. Perhaps she would like to see a demonstration or even participate? It’s just family, right?

🍆🍆🍆1/2 out of 5

P.S. he is not joking about his penis size. It's very cute! He sent me this gauge and identified himself as "Extra Small" on it.

Here is our reviewer's flaccid penis.

When it gets erect it's only about 4.5" long!

Compare that to my husband at just over 8". Past the 5" mark, past the 6" mark, and then 2" more after that!

So the angst he reports on is quite real, poor baby. Imagine being caught by a woman showing off that 'lil 'nubbin? You'd get the "little pinky" sign whenever you entered a room followed by the laughs from ALL the women present.

Story 3: A Difficult Husband

A wife has had enough of her husband's verbal abuse and misbehaviour.

I LOVED this story! It pressed so many buttons! It just kept getting better and better with each page as John sunk lower and lower into pain, humiliation and emasculation.

I’ve never treated my wife anything close to the way John has treated Mary, but I have acted like a child and I admit I still do sometimes. I definitely could benefit from having my attitude adjusted.

Ear pulling: It’s amazing how much pain and control can be achieved by ears. It made me recall a session with a pro. She really enjoyed pulling and BITING my ears while I was already restrained. It was such a different, intense kind of pain that I was truly afraid in a way I had never been before.

Overpowered by a woman: my wife is not just “strong for a woman”. She is just plain strong and would not have a problem overpowering any untrained man. I love the feeling of being helpless. I would love to experience the feeling of truly having no choice and no ability to stop what’s happening or even fight back. The image of John being carried, literally kicking and screaming to that couch by Mary and Sarah…I want to know that feeling of being taken to be raped by an impossibly sized dildo and not being able to do anything but cry and beg.

Attitude adjusting, true punishment spanking: I have never endured anything close to this level of beating. I truly wish my wife would vent her frustration and disappointment with me by using a paddle. I think it would definitely feel so satisfying for her to reduce me to a puddle of tears. And I think it would improve my efforts to be the person she needs me to be.

Small penis humiliation: Right on cue, after I mentioned it in the previous review, John’s laughably inadequate penis is put on full display for Sarah to evaluate. As I mentioned, my wife has no problem calling out my inadequacy publicly, albeit in a “joking” manner. But I’m certain that she has discussed my intimate shortcoming with her sister privately. I can’t imagine girls wouldn’t talk about those things. Mary even calls John’s penis “cute”. I remember when you did the same thing to me, publicly on your blog! How embarrassing and emasculating!

Exposed to family: I can feel John shivering and shuddering with embarrassment as Mary answers the door and welcomes Sarah in. It’s such a huge step when intimate, humiliating details are no longer private between a man and wife.

Sarah narrating his cocksucking and assfucking: Calling John a “girl” and making him look her in the eye while he’s being fucked. It forces John to face what is really happening to him. His life is changing forever. He can’t even close his eyes and try to make it all go away like a bad dream. The way things kept getting worse for John I’m sure has his imagination running wild, wondering how far Mary and Sarah will ultimately take things.

Strapon: What must John have been thinking when Sarah suggested the strapon, Mary went to look for it, and he watched helplessly as Mary put it on? “What have I done to myself?”

I REALLY would like to see a continuation to this story! I can’t imagine that Mary and Sarah are finished with John or that they are satisfied that he has sufficiently paid his debt for the way he has treated Mary. What else could be in store for him? Girls that have a clit and suck and get fucked need to be put in panties, right? Maybe fully feminized and crossdressed? Exposed to other family members and friends? Mary does deserve to have a real man with a real cock to satisfy her while John watches. Maybe John shouldn’t ever be allowed to cum again. At least, cum like a man. Chastity cage? Maybe Mary will graciously share her real man boyfriend with John and make him feel like a real woman?

🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆/5 Loved it!

P.S. I’m trying to go slow and savor these amazing stories. So far, I’m not letting myself cum so my ratings stay consistent and not dependent on my state of horniness. I need to admit, I’m surprised by how much I’m enjoying this book so far. I mean, i knew I would like it, but I didn’t imagine it would hit me like this. It’s never a good idea to underestimate Julie!

Yeah!

Story 4: Athletic Daughter Spanks Father

A College-age daughter, an athlete, lives alone with her verbally abusive father and decides to turn the tables on him.

Last night I read about Sarah and Fred. I love the idea of being “manhandled” by a woman. I would really like the powerless feeling of being forced to submit instead of consenting to it. Of course there is the chance that I could be forced by someone I REALLY don’t want to submit to. But, as someone once told me, “Submitting to what you like is NOT submission.” I imagine that is what poor Fred is feeling. Stripped naked and spanked and belt whipped by force by your own DAUGHTER is not something you could easily recover from.

I felt like this story needed more. Not sure what, though, without making it super-incest-y. As I said before, lust for a niece seems just the right amount of taboo.

I’m glad we didn’t have a daughter. Besides the drama and fearing for her safety, I’m afraid I couldn’t control myself around a young, beautiful woman living with us. I mean, she would be a younger version of my beautiful wife! How long could I keep myself from sniffing her panties? How old would she be before I couldn’t resist???

🍆🍆🍆/5

I'm sure if you had a daughter you'd have a totally different attitude towards her specifically.

My enjoyment for the Daddy/daughter dynamic is informed by my own fantasies concerning father figures and even my Dad in particular. I'd love to give my Dad a spanking if he was into it!

But I understand it's not for everybody.

Story 5: Speeder Punished

A working man is caught driving recklessly.

I really feel like I’ve seen this story or something quite similar before. False memory?

I had mixed feeling about this one. I felt some empathy for Pete. Even though his cock is twice the size of mine, he still rarely gets to experience Loraine’s pussy. Still, “rarely” is still more often than my almost pussy-free life. I would be ecstatic if my wife had me regularly lick her to multiple orgasms and allowed occasional supervised masturbation. Then add spanking… if that is all it took to get her to start spanking me, I would be testing the speed limits much more often. I loved the beatings and embarrassing exposure, but if I had nine inches, I would be looking for exposure! I’m still intrigued whenever I read about “more than you can take” spankings and have to take it anyway. Having one officer restrain while the other belted was a nice touch. I still want that experience some day!

Things that didn’t sit right with me: Why didn’t the officers have names? I liked the descriptions. It helped my imagination, but they should have names. Second, I was uncomfortable with Christianity being thrown under the bus. We’re just people, like everybody else, with lots of differences, including sex. Maybe especially sex. It was minor, but it distracted me. Finally, although the thought of two pretty law enforcement officers having their way with me is exciting, whatever that way may be, I’m also disturbed about the growth of the police-state in our countries. Maybe I’m reaching for something not to like here, but I feel it.

I would really like to have my wife be more like Loraine, though!

🍆🍆🍆/5

I love the theme of the big-cocked man being under the thumb of his woman. I mean, he could do some real damage with that cock if allowed to roam free. That's why men, especially large-cocked men, need their wives as keepers.

I was very respectful of Christianity in my story, I thought. I feel like a Christian in spirit myself, though I do not believe the more fairy-tale aspects of it.

Also, these cops were good cops! They made it a point of realizing their fantasy only on a man who truly deserved it and volunteered for the summary justice instead of a big fine, jail, and a criminal record. Blue lives matter!

Story 6: A Spanking by the Lake

A teenage boy, trying to impress his three girl-cousins, disobeys his parents and takes the canoe out unsupervised onto the lake.

This story evoked some memories for me. As a boy, I remember being so naive, and self-conscious while still desperate to attract the attention of girls my age. I think I would have died if my little penis and balls were exposed to girls then.

When I was about nine years old, I saw my first pussy! I was part of a group of neighborhood kids, all older than me. There was a lot of unsupervised time and some risqué games. Losers got spanked or exposed. I was terrified of losing these games. But the two older girls and one older boy weren’t interested in making me lose. So I was just allowed to watch. One day, a girl lost and the boy got to pull down the front of her swimsuit while the other girl and I watched. I remember Tammy saying, “Oh, Louise!” as the boy pulled further than he was supposed to. Probably all I saw was pubic hair, but at that age, I didn’t know there was anymore than that to see.

There was a lot I didn’t know at that age. When I got an erection in the bathtub, it scared me. Finally, at about age 13, I figured out how to masturbate by reading about it. After that, I jerked off for hours every day with my Dad’s Playboy magazines.

Back to the story. When Jimmy got his swimsuit lowered in front of the girls, I felt the embarrassment. I also got hard. Unlike Jimmy, I had no idea about women’s sexual arousal response at his age. I just knew they made me tingle inside. I also recall the term “bare bottom spanking” giving me similar tingles, just by reading the words.

Knowing what kids are like, I can’t help thinking about what Jimmy’s cousins will be able to make him do. Three against one. Their word against his. Poor Jimmy has no chance.

Somehow I envy him!

🍆🍆🍆1/2 / 5

This was a straight up disciplinary spanking of a young teen who took the canoe out onto the lake while his parents were away and when he had been specifically forbidden to do so by his parents. No life jacket even! It was apparent he did it to impress his girl-cousins. When his parents got home unexpectedly early and saw him on the lake, he was made to paddle in and then got his comeuppance, bathing suit down, on the lakeshore in front of the girls. He deserved it!

Story 7: Punished for Masturbation

A stay-at-home husband has been masturbating for hours every day and neglecting his household duties.

This one truly has it all! Right from the beginning, I, like James, tend to spend a LOT of time masturbating, leading my wife to become frustrated by my lack of productivity, and attention to detail, as well as overall forgetfulness. I’m sure she has her suspicions about what’s taking up so much of my attention, but I’ve never been caught with my pants down. Yet.

The thought of my wife and niece walking in on me makes me shudder. I know neither, and especially my niece, would look at me the same way again. My niece at 19 was at her physical peak. Modelesque perfection. Somehow that would make what happens next that much worse.

I make it a point to use a browser now that doesn’t remember history, but sometimes I forget to cover my tracks. If I ever left BDSMLR open and my niece and wife discovered it, I would have a LOT of explaining to do. No amount of apologies would mitigate the trouble I would be in.

To have to watch my niece discover ALL my fantasies – my wife using a strapon, my wife forcing me to watch a real man fuck her… i would desperately be hoping my niece didn’t make it to my fantasies about her. I would almost be relieved that she stopped looking when my wife came back with the strap. Almost. An angry spanking from my wife would be brutal. A strapping would be more than I could take. I would be mortified that my niece was being treated to a close inspection of my little penis and balls, but the pain would soon make me forget about that. To have my niece take pity on me and hold my hands down during the beating, having to look in her eyes as I screamed and sobbed would be emasculating to my core. Having her inspect the damage while intimately touching me would be too much to process. Being abused, degraded and emasculated by my beautiful, powerful wife while my stunning niece watched with amusement and pity would leave me mentally and physically broken.

I’m afraid the ship has long since sailed, but I think there was a time when my wife might not have been too weirded out at the thought of a chastity cage. I think it would have done me a lot of good. There would be a danger, though, in having a key holder that has never been that interested in sex. But it is the perfect punishment for excessive masturbation, which I have always been guilty of. Being locked in chastity while my niece watches and tries not to laugh. Then having to demonstrate my oral sex technique while she tries to coach me… I know I would be dying of embarrassment while also feeling my little penis struggling in its prison.

Truthfully, if I had to lick my wife to orgasm every night, while being denied my own, either by chastity cage or not, I would be more than OK with it. Seeing, feeling and hearing my wife cum is one of the greatest pleasures of my life. I even suggested it early in our marriage that I should have to give her 10 orgasms to earn one for me. She didn’t think that was fair and we never did it. Still, whenever we did have sex I tried to give her at least two orgasms. If I had to go without but could be with her when she orgasmed, it would be torture. But a good kind of torture.

Online pussy licking class? Sign me up! I’ve done plenty of independent study, but I’ve always felt I’m not as good as I could be. My wife says no, that I’m not lacking anything in that department, but why doesn’t she ever want sex with me then???

As the story continues to its climax, my only regret is that my wife doesn’t have a second sister with daughters that I could visualize participating. I love every teasing conversation Chloe has with James. She has to know what it does to him. Beautiful, cruel cock-tease. I love it! I also love how Emily intends to keep James pussy-free, at least for the foreseeable future. I certainly identify with that!

The big reveal of James’ original crime and punishment to the sisters and other nieces had me recalling the feeling I get every time my proclivities and perversions are revealed to someone new. I think I appear pretty boring and normal to most people. I just want to melt when my secrets are revealed. Knowing they’ll never see me the same way hurts. And I need it to hurt. I really am pathetic. If only they knew. My wife knows quite a bit. But her sister and niece don’t. Unless she told them!

Chloe volunteers to help supervise her father’s masturbation! Once again, I’m glad I don’t have a daughter. The sexual tension would ruin me.

I love how bold Chloe is, manipulating James’ cage as he is forced to stand for examination in front of all the women. Something tells me James’ is going to be Chloe’s bitch going forward, with Emily’s approval, of course. Will he be allowed/ordered to practice his oral skills on her? To improve his endurance, of course!

My penis is as hard as it can get right now, imagining my sister-in-law ordering me to bend over and spread my cheeks for inspection.

Forced masturbation for an audience. Fantasies exposed. Fantasies of being cucked and fucked by a man. Having my wife want to pursue it! Being forced to admit that I want it. I want it, Julie! OMG, I want to suck a cock! I want to lick another man’s cum out of my wife's pussy! I want a man to fuck me! I want my niece to know it!

Being driven crazy with tease and denial. Cumming on my wife's beautiful thighs. So horny. Not caring. Licking it up while they all watch me disgrace myself.

Strapon trained by my wife. Strapped by her sister. Threatened with forced bi relations giving and receiving, while they all watch?!

This was a perfect story. Loved every word!

🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆/5

Wow, so pleased that one hit on all cylinders! It's a classic scenario, having your secret perversions revealed. What spanko can't relate to that? 

Story 8: Beach Wedgie

A fully clothed man visits a beach and uses his camera in inappropriate ways.

I am loving going through this book with you!

I identify with Michael a lot. For much of my youth, I was a scrawny, weak, nerdy kid. I think my mind sometimes still thinks I’m that kid to this day. Of course, I didn’t have a smart phone to take photos, but I was caught looking many times by women well beyond my reach. I don’t know which reaction was more humiliating, anger or laughter. I still look and sometimes take photos today. I truly deserve to get caught and punished for looking at asses without permission!

The wedgie torture brought back two memories, one from around grade 7, where the boys in my class would have wedgie fights in the locker room. I was scared to death of these and avoided them at all costs. At about the same time in my life, I remember rigging up some ropes in the bathroom over the sturdy shower door frame and hanging myself by my crotch. This story has my wanting to try to rig something up in my gym to see if I can hang myself with an old pair of underwear.

Poor Michael helplessly hanging there, too weak to pull himself up for even a moment of relief reminded me of how intrigued I am by predicament bondage where you can only reduce one torture by increasing another.

The very public naked spanking had me very aroused while also thinking about how mortifying it would happen irl.

And the final photo they took on his phone to complete his humiliation…”Jerk off to that,” she said, tossing him the phone…I most certainly would! After the sand rash had sufficiently healed.

This one grew on me.

🍆🍆🍆🍆/5

The main female protagonist is a takes-no-shit Aussie lifeguard suited up Baywatch style. She sentenced him to a hanging underpants wedgie until he begged her for a public spanking to be let down! Fun to write.

Story 9: Women's Work

A man quits his job due to stress; however, he does not pick up the slack at home.

This one is special!

I’m not going to be so arrogant as to suggest that this story was written just for me or about me. I’m sure that other readers of yours share very similar fantasies and fetishes. But…this story contained so many “dots” from my real life and connected them to my fantasies in a way that I almost believe it could be true. Or could’ve been. It’s as if the dials on the control panels of Larry/me, Sarah/my wife, Mary/her sister, Elizabeth/our niece were tweaked, adjusted and fine-tuned to produce this different, but not completely different version of our lives.

I read another piece of erotic fiction where the sex lives of a couple were dramatically changed by their neighbors. One of the characters says, "What if…? is the most dangerous question anyone can ask." Because what you are really imagining is everyone, including you, is a different person than they are now, not the same people doing different things.

Still, I can’t stop wishing that this story was at least a little bit true.

The story hits so many of my fantasies: spanking with witnesses, small penis humiliation, forced cross-dressing and feminization (although I fit nicely into women’s medium panties!), strapons, even (gulp) castration.

I love Sarah calling Larry “girl” and “whore”. Being verbally degraded is still a huge turn on for me. Having to service her and then be allowed to go masturbate would be amazing having her watch me do it - even better.

I love the three women conspiring to take all of Larry’s agency away and beginning the process of emasculation so quickly. He can hope it stays “consensual” but he really has no choice but to comply.

I love the complete humiliation of being forced to strip completely naked and ask for spankings from completely clothed women. CFNM!

I love how the spankings get ramped up, starting with mostly “just” embarrassing to real punishment-level painful.

I love how Mistress Elizabeth is so bold about intimately touching Larry. Even her suggestion of castration was hot! This is a recently added fetish of mine. I don’t know what triggered it or how something so frightening can be so arousing for me. Plus the fact that Larry was completely guilty of the crime that the women agreed was worthy of castration…

This was the point in the story when I lost control: When Mistress Elizabeth started stroking Larry’s cock. As I’ve read each of these stories, I’ve edged to maintain the highest level of mental and physical stimulation possible and also keep my reviews consistent. But at this point in the story, I couldn’t stop it. I came. Hard. This is the first story I couldn’t finish without cumming.

I thought I was at least starting to get over my lustful infatuation, but now I can’t stop thinking about my niece as my Mistress! When I started the story again the next day, I saw that of all the characters, Elizabeth is by far the least like her real life counterpart. If only she was! If only my niece was more of a seductive tease, a cruel punisher, a mind-fucker like Elizabeth! If only there was a way for her to know my secrets and use them against me and make me her bitch! I can’t stop thinking about her looking at my naked body and smirking, humping against her thighs, her exposing my arousal for her to my wife, her caressing my bottom, asshole and penis, squeezing my balls, threatening castration, beating my bottom, thighs, and asshole until I am kicking, begging, and crying. Her breaking me…

I think there will be a strapon party in Larry’s future involving all three women. Since Mary and Liz seem to be the experts, it seems natural that they would want to show Sarah the ins and outs of pegging. Three women with huge strapons. Poor Larry with only 2 holes will be busy! I would be in heaven! At least until the dildo started stretching me more than I could handle. And my Mistress/niece laughing at my pain.

Larry being totally feminized and taken out in public is a step into humiliation I have never taken. There was a time when I had everything I needed to do it: bra, false breasts, panties, corset, dress, shaved legs, stockings, high heels, wig…just not the courage. Way before I knew you. I bet you could’ve persuaded me.

I wonder if the neighbors will use Larry for more than cleaning? I wonder if the hunky husband will give him more than his belt? Will the women watch "Larissa" lose her anal virginity?

I wonder if Sarah will keep Larry pussy-free forever? If she found him disappointing before, won’t she need to find a real man, not a feminized sissy, to take care of her needs? I would fully support it if my wife wanted to do that. I want her to be sexually satisfied even if it isn’t with me.

🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆💦💦/5

Thank you, Julie, for the opportunity to review these stories and share thoughts with you. I love your writing and I love what you do for me! I need to stay in better touch. I hope I’m worth your time. You certainly are more than worth mine!

So happy I got a big spurty midway through! And he knows my rule, so you better believe it was down the hatch like a slutty bitch.

In this story, the wife knows of (from their shared Kindle account), but ignores, his femdom proclivities. Until she gets fed up with his lack of initiative in the housekeeping department. Her sister and niece suggest she uses his proclivities against him. Good, realistic, plot for many of you!

Story 10: Wooden Spoon Punishment

A husband misbehaves and his wife makes him serve timeout in an unusual manner before his spanking.

It is always a special kind of thrill when I see a message from you in my inbox. It’s a little risky, but I have you on my VIP list so I’ll get a notification. That would be VERY difficult to explain if my wife happened to see it on my phone, but I don’t want to risk missing a message from you.

This one was short and sweet. I love the FLR where there isn’t even a question of who is in charge. The mind-fucking humiliating preparation got me thinking about why I have never really experienced anything approaching a real, severe punishment spanking experience.

Bringing his sister into the scene threw me off a bit. Thinking about my sister being invoked just makes me feel “icky”, not aroused. Not sure why. Sister-in-law, yes. Sister, no!

I did love the thorough spanking and ridiculously long corner time. I’m quite sure I would be unable to hold the spoon in for that long. What then?

Fun story. I love the thought of a witnessed spanking. I just would choose different witnesses. 

🍆🍆🍆/5 

I too thought "Wooden Spoon" was the worst effort in the book. I rewrote it several times, but it never really hit. 3 eggplants is generous IMO. I should have deep-sixed it!

Story 11: A Bed-Wetting Husband

A husband has a medical issue that causes bedwetting but refuses to address it.

When I read the title, I wasn’t too enthusiastic. “This is going to be about diapering,” I thought. Not one of my big fetishes. Boy was I wrong!

But first, about racism: I could virtue signal and say there isn’t a racist bone in my body. But that would be lying, by several bones. I have a hypothesis that racism is going away with every generation. My grandparents were much more racist than my parents. My parents had black recreational and business associates that they got along with well. And I think I’m a little better than they were on the racism scale. But not good enough.

Putting myself into the story, I thought about doing a role play as a racist. I determined it would be disturbingly easy for me to assume that role. Even as much as I would love to be Bill, being conspired against by Irene and Felicity, I got this feeling that I need to be a better person, even if I never am beaten, forced to lick the asshole of, diapered and masturbated by a beautiful black woman while my wife watches my humiliation.

My thoughts took so many directions while reading. I love the “reparations” angle. These are reparations I would actually support! At the same time “Brown Sugar” was my mental soundtrack as I read this! I regret that I have never been intimate with a black woman. Why? How would that be different? Maybe because I’m racist?

I loved the helpless man being aroused despite his pain and humiliation. I loved the almost certain threat of Irene fucking him with a big black strapon. I loved Bill having to worship Mistress Felicity’s asshole “up and down, back and forth, around and around” just as you have instructed your David and my niece instructed me in your fantasy.

I will be thinking about Felicity for a long time. I just love how much control she has. There is something about orgasm and the complete physical and emotional loss of control it brings. I love how she made it part of taking control over Bill. He had no say about either his pleasure or his pain. By masturbating him in the least sexy way possible, she also deprived him of any pleasure he could have during his punishment. Perfect! Also thinking about a “crossover” episode from my two favorite stories so far. Thinking about Mistress Felicity and Mistress Elizabeth combining to teach me some hard lessons makes my heart race!

Bottom line: I want to be treated like this, but I don’t want to be someone like Bill who really deserves it!

I think this is another one I’m going to enjoy for several re-readings. The first time, I was interrupted just as Mistress Felicity was taking control. (I love it when they demand you address them as “Mistress”.) 

🍆🍆🍆🍆 /5 for the content, + 🍆/5 for being MUCH more than I expected.

I was wondering if I could tackle racism with sensitivity. I think it worked. I don't buy the pervasive narrative. I think being colour blind is absolutely the only way forward despite the lingering presence of racism. Felicity, the jet black occupational therapist in this story, is my spirit animal in that regard. She sees racism and blows right past it, dealing with it, but not letting it impact her life.

Story 12: His Sister's Sleepover Party

A teenage boy is annoyed when his sister hosts a sleepover.

This one took me back to my childhood when embarrassment must have taken root as a fetish for me. I was mortified about being exposed in any way. Having a girl see me naked was the worst thing imaginable! Ashamed to be seeing crying. Scared to death of playground spanking as penalty for losing a game. And yet, all these things also gave me “the tingles”, and excitement in my belly even before I began having erections.

My Mommy fantasies have grown pretty strong lately. When I act like a child, I need to be treated like one, like bed-wetting Bill. Maybe to make it more comfortable, you could be my evil step-mother? 

🍆🍆🍆/5 for the memories it stirred.

It's clear our reviewer is less keen when younger teens are spanked. I included such content (without any sexual element) because I think there are many of us spankos who enjoy imagining ourselves back at an age when a real spanking was a risk we ran!

Story 13: Road Rager

A husband engages in a blatant act of road rage against what turns out to be a young learner and her mom.

Talk about pushing ALL of my buttons! This one grabbed me by the balls from the beginning, squeezed them hard, with some unexpected twists for good measure!

I’m sure you know who I was thinking of when Kevin went over Samantha’s lap. “Non-sexual”. OK, if you say so…

I don’t always get hard from humiliation, but I ALWAYS leak. I know I would have made quite a mess on Samantha’s lap as she warmed Kevin/me up for the main event.

“Bad, bad boy!” That REALLY got my juices flowing!

I need to digress. My flow of precum triggered a memory and took me back to a meeting with a pro-domme. It must be more than 30 years ago now. I’m pretty sure now and I was at the time as events proceeded that she was a cross dressed man. Pretty passable, but she had size 13 feet! That’s my size in women’s shoes. I don’t remember the session at all, but I do remember her leaving the room for what seemed like a long time. She instructed me to be face down on the floor, ass up, and hold that position until she returned. I was scared and considered leaving at that point, but I stayed and watched an amazing steady drip drip drip of precum as I looked back between my legs for the entire time she was gone.

The Victoria's Secret shopping trip! I really need to do another one of those. Unfortunately, the VS within reasonable distance from me closed, as have many of their stores. Bad marketing choices, but that’s for another email. Being measured for a bra always feels like complete surrender of my masculinity to a smirking woman while in a store full of women who know EXACTLY what’s going on. Drip drip drip.

Finally, wearing bra, fake tits and panties, getting a spanking from a man, forced cocksucking and punishment fucking. I remember. The exact scenario you painted for me to do for my deflowering. Drip! Drip! Drip! Unlike being spanked by a teenager, where I could easily rationalize sexual excitement while retaining my hetero identity, what if I started leaking or even getting hard while being manhandled in the worst imaginable way? What would my reaction be to such extreme humiliation? I’m afraid to find out.

Public exposure. Castration threat. Exposed while wearing bra and panties to unfamiliar women. Forced public nudity.

All my fantasies, fetishes and nightmare scenarios coming at me out of a firehose. By the end, I couldn’t contain my arousal any longer. Imagining my niece as a laughing teenaged genuine sadist was just too much. Yes, I licked it up!

Kevin’s ordeal inspired me to think that it’s time for some bra and panty training of my own. I just dug out my large bra and silicone breasts. It’s been too long. I get out of the habit, but there’s really no excuse for me not to be at least wearing panties on most days.

As soon as I hit send, I will be taking the dogs for a long walk around the neighborhood and into town with my very obvious and very bouncy breasts. Even under a shirt and heavy sweatshirt, they will be very noticeable.

Mistress Julie, your stories seem to be having a hypnotic effect on me. They are triggering a deep need for humiliation and risk taking. I wonder where it will lead.

🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆💧💧💧💧💧/5

So many eggplants! So many spurties!

Story 14: In Loco Parentis

A young man refuses to accept punishment from his mom.

One thing that strikes me about many/most of these stories is that the men and boys getting spanked are pretty shitty people. Of course there has to be a reason for punishment. They need to deserve it. But I would like to read about someone punished for being more like me. Selfish, forgetful, sloppy, not listening, no attention to detail etc.

Jeff is a nasty teenager. I guess a lot of them are. Disrespectful, rude, mean to his sister. I don’t think I was ever that bad. Anyway, it was fun to watch him taken down a couple of pegs and get what he had coming. I like that he was treated as a “woman”, including the panty reference. (There it is again-my mind turning me into a woman when I imagine myself being punished/dominated.) I love that Caroline got to finish what officer Thompson started. I loved the sister witnessing it. Would have loved to hear what she said to her friends. I love that the officer and Caroline got together in a spanking relationship. I would have liked to hear about her panties coming down, her bottom being reddened and her feet kicking while her children listened. And then Caroline submissively kneeling and opening her new husband's fly while she looks up at him through tears but with a smile…guess which role I’m imagining myself in here?

Like many of the other stories, this had me thinking about what would be in the sequel. But it stands as a nice, pure, spanking story.

🍆🍆🍆1/2 / 5

This one was a fun concept where a 1950's small town widowed mom is losing control of her teenaged son and asks for a policeman to come around and act in loco parentis to give him a spanking.

Story 15: The Punishment Enema

A mother is visiting her son and daughter-in-law. The son has always resented his mom and makes his feelings known.

“And now for something completely different!”

The title gave away the surprise, but poor Georgie! Yes, I envy him for being a spanked husband, but enema punishment! From his mother! Including being masturbated to orgasm by her?!? OK, my arousal struggled with that part. It had to be his mother doing it? Eeeewww! Ick! In my mind, I had to edit it to sister-in-law. I can imagine her giving me a very clinical, professional hand job while my insides feel ready to burst.

I loved George having to hold it in while the two women chatted, basically ignoring his distress. Having to expel it while they watched…the humiliation hits just keep coming! After two rinses, his squeaky clean bottom will now get strapped. George is just not having a good day. After the “Anal Pleasures” lube mention I was a little surprised that it didn’t foreshadow a strap on session. It seems a shame to not take advantage of such a clean rectum. I feel like Dianne should have returned the favor to Stella and let her be the spectator of a second assault on George’s bottom.

All in all, the story worked, despite the squeamishness I felt in the middle. It also got me thinking. Self-spanking is OK, but I’ve never felt I was able to give myself what I deserved. Self-administered punishment enemas are very achievable, though. I’m not sure my finger will work to hold it in. Relaxing enough to push a butt plug in may result in a premature mess. If I can solve that problem, a punishment enema may be just what the doctor ordered next time I’m “out of sorts”. 

🍆🍆🍆🍆/5

P.S. I couldn't resist! I sentenced him to an enema:

And yes, a punishment enema would be great. Those little Fleet enemas you can buy in drugstores are a "gentle" introduction. Go get one of those and hold it in for a full five minutes. No finger, no plug. Just stand in the tub so if you lose control it'll be an easier cleanup. Under NO circumstances may you sit on the toilet until after your 5 minutes are up. If you lose control, you mess yourself.

He wrote back after, including some rather "raw" pics I shall not include, but enjoyed immensely!

Perhaps if I had a real cock I wouldn’t even entertain the thought of becoming a cocksucker, the same way your David resists it. Maybe I would even say “fuck you”, instead of submissively running to the drugstore to purchase fleet enemas.

But that’s what I did, as soon as the opportunity arose. I bought 2 two-packs, not knowing how much it would take to have the desired effect.

I got home, went into the bathroom, stripped and opened the first package. I decided to start with 2 so I emptied them inside me and stepped into the shower stall and stared at the clock. I could definitely feel it, but there was no urgency during the required 5 minutes. I strongly suspected you were looking for more than that, so I waited 5 more minutes. I imagined you watching me. I played with my penis and balls as I waited. I imagined your taunting comments at my humiliating situation. As I hit the ten minute mark I was still not feeling anything approaching the distress that poor George felt. I felt like you would be more pleased with failure than “success”. So I decided to do more.

I stepped out of the shower and opened the second package and emptied them both into my anus. I would hold this for 5 additional minutes and then expel it into the toilet. But as I stepped back into the shower, it quickly became apparent during the first minute that I was in trouble! It hit suddenly and hard! I had to strain and squeeze and clench to try to hold it in. I knew I wouldn’t make it but I tried anyway. In less than two minutes I lost control, making a mess on myself and the shower stall.

I cleaned myself and the shower as quickly as I could and was able to sit on the toilet before the second wave hit.

I wrote back:

How delightful! Even the very raw pics to go with it! So embarrassing that you messed in the shower! Bad, bad boy! You'd get the strap for that in my house. The enemas are good for you, cleaning out impacted fecal material in your colon. Have some probiotics afterwards. Interesting that one pack had no effect, but two got you going. Glad you bought the second one! I wonder if one would have the same effect after a half hour or so? Imagine having to do bare corner time with that fear in you? Ha ha!

Julie

P.S. I'm glad you so thoroughly researched my next to last story, but I need your review of my last story!

Story 16: Skinny Dipper Spanked

A husband goes skinny dipping against his wife's wishes.

There’s this thing I find myself doing more and more as I get older. I avoid coming to the end of things I enjoy, be it a TV series, a recording artist’s last record, or a book. It must be something to do with the reality that I am closer to the end of my book than the beginning. I’m not afraid to die. I know an eternity of glorious life awaits because of my Savior Jesus Christ. Still, I feel a sadness when I see things winding down to the end, like 2023, or your amazing book. (Editor’s note: Sorry, was a little darker than I thought it would be. Have a great weekend!)

So yes, I have avoided reading the last story until last night. Here is my review.

"Skinny Dipper Spanked" was a perfect finale to this collection. It recalled all the elements that aroused me throughout the book and tied them up in a pretty pink bow 🎀 around my tiny penis and balls to remind me I need to read this again.

This story reminded me of my life in two ways, the first being the rich fantasy life unknowingly inspired by my wife, sister-in-law, and niece, while being nurtured and encouraged by you, Julie. The second connection is because the way this story was written, nothing too crazy, with “just” embarrassing exposure to women, humiliating taunting and spanking. It made me wonder about why my life didn’t turn out a little bit more like this, with the dials on the control panels of the women in my life turned 1 or 2 settings toward kinky and away from vanilla. But that’s not the way life or people work. If you change one thing, it changes everything.

Any story with a niece automatically gets my attention and arousal now. My fantasies about my niece are hard wired into my brain. Even the expression, “Uncle David” is as erotic to me as “fuck me”, “lick my asshole”, “put on panties”, or “wear a bra”.

I’ve also developed quite an exposure fetish lately. (I wonder if I’m taking too many chances with what I post on BDSMLR.) The thought of being seen naked by my niece and sister-in-law scares me and excites me. They would never be able to unsee my little embarrassment and I imagine I would be treated to smirks and teasing comments for the rest of my life. My niece might comment on my body, but it probably wouldn’t be about my ass. It’s also a very powerful scene to imagine my wife spanking me in front of them. Witnessed humiliation is huge for me too. Besides them, why not invite the beautiful super-fit women from my gym to see me naked and punished. I’m sure Marcy, Janette, Deirdre, and Ruthy would enjoy the show of someone they formerly might have respected as a man kicking and crying like a little girl.

I enjoyed the tone and realism of this story so much! As I said, it felt like something that might actually happen to me in some form. Like many of the other stories in this book, I didn’t want it to end. Coincidentally, the last line of the story was at the end of the page. I actually fruitlessly tried several times to go to the next page on the ebook, and then began to wonder what a sequel would look like.

🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆/5

Perfect concluding story to a collection I’m so glad you asked me to read. If I had said no…well you really shouldn’t have given me the option. What a great addition to my fantasy life!

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So there we have it! Great reviews, mr. reviewer. It makes it all the more worthwhile for you to take the time to be the proxy for all the other readers who don't provide feedback. Thank you for that!

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