Thursday, December 22

THIRD E-BOOK PUBLISHED!!!!

Yay!!!!! Finally, just in time for Christmas! I just published my BRAND SPANKING NEW E-BOOK!!!

Get it for free here

Major labour of love here. I think it's really, really good, and that anybody who enjoys my blog will LOVE this book, whichever way you swing, but with a definite bias to femdom/malesub.The book was censored on Amazon Kindle after release, so I am now making it free to download here.

Here's the Amazon blurb.

This tightly-written, full-length novel recounts the story of an eighteen-year-old young man, David, whose mother sends him to live with his aunt and her young wife for his first year of university. Unbeknownst to the family, his aunts are engaged in a full-time domestic discipline lifestyle.

Before allowing him to move in, his aunt privately informs David of their arrangement and seeks his consent as a passive participant. David, as it turns out, also has a fetishistic fascination – which he hides from them all – and readily agrees. He is not disappointed when his aunt's sexy young wife takes a more than sisterly interest in him and teases him ridiculously. He hears her being spanked and sees her sent crying to the corner.

When David does poorly at university and then abuses his aunts' trust in him, rather than being sent home, he asks if his aunt will help him with a similar arrangement. With his mother's blessing, his request is granted. From then on, his aunt takes him in hand, punishes him for his misbehaviour, and keeps him nose-to-the-grindstone on his schoolwork with strict domestic discipline delivered with love.

This story has something for everyone: spanking, cheek-burning embarrassment, witnesses, corner-time, grounding, mouth soaping, line-writing, figging, dildoing, hairbrush, strap, cane, slipper, belt, reluctant bi, strap-on sex, chastity, hand jobs, blow jobs, deflowering, intercourse, anal, you name it! Consent, including consensual non-consent, is emphasized throughout.

The story is fantastical yet remains believable and true to itself throughout. The reader is pulled along step-by-step into David's adventure.

In the end, his aunt's young wife finds him a beautiful and capable girlfriend his age who takes over with a very happy ending for this young man.

I invite you to immerse yourself in David's story and imagine if it was only you at that age!

I've been hard at it since March, so it's been about ten months in the making. The initial book came together quickly in the first couple of months. Since then it's been relentless revising and proofreading to make sure it's a super exciting, fast-paced, page-turning read. And so, so many kinky scenes. Massive value for your masturbatory dollar. A good dozen orgasms in there, minimally! And you know my rule...

I emphasize informed consent throughout, but in such a way that it takes nothing away from the embarrassing punishments. David's biological Aunty Sue, his Mom's older sister, takes David in for first-year university. Sue is the head of household over her much younger lesbian wife Chrissie. Eventually, David requests a similar arrangement from his Aunty Sue, and after getting his mom's permission, she agrees. Aunty Sue is a no-nonsense disciplinarian who gets involved in nothing sexual with David, of course. Chrissie, and all her hot dance friends, on the other hand, ...

Please go get it and have a read.

Enjoy! It's also my Christmas gift to you!

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays.

Julie

98 comments:

  1. Julie - Congratulations!! I'm looking forward to buying and reading it over the holidays!!

    Best,
    -T.

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  2. Congratulations and thank you. You've come along way since "Impromptu Shopping Trip" one of your first which I still love.

    Seriously, you write very nicely and about an important subject. I look forward to reading the book.

    Merry Christmas,

    Rosco

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    1. Thank you, Rosco. I remember "Impromptu Shopping Trip" - that was a fun little outing!

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  3. Atta girl! Very good job getting that out. I’ll definitely have a read to summon some ideas ;)

    Merry Christmas
    Mistress Andrea xoxo

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    1. I needed to get it out by Christmas, or else!

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  4. Congratulations!!!!

    I can't wait to read it.

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  5. Awesome, way to go girl! Christmas just got a whole lot merrier, for sure. I can't wait to buy it and read it with my gf and then act out the scenes irl. I hope there's a spanking with a sorority paddle somewhere in the book, I just got a sexy vintage paddle from etsy that needs to be used to turn my cheeks cherry red!
    I hope David gives you a proper reward for your accomplishment, a hard spanking straddling his knee and a pussy pounding, or submitting to an intensely dominant spanking and pegging and being conquered by your female supreriority.
    Cheers to you on finishing the book, you're amazing and your blog is wonderful.
    Merry Christmas,
    -Cheeky Chad

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    1. There is paddling with a sorority paddle!
      I will definitely collect my reward.

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    2. Enjoy your reward Julie! There's nothing sexier than a red spanked butt by the fire place at christmas time.
      Merry Christmas!
      -Cheeky Chad

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    3. Ooh, that's so hot, I'm glad you got that well deserved reward. I got a few paddle smacks last night before a face-sitting but I'm looking forward to a nice long bottom warming later tonight.
      I'm halfway through the book and it's amazing. The interplay between David and Aunt Chrissie. I won't spoil anything for any lurkers that haven't read it but It love how she's sometimes sweet to him like they're on the same side and then sometimes she double crosses him and he gets punished worse, I loved that. I'm having a hard time making it through the book, it's so hot I can't make it more than a few chapters before I cum.
      I can't wait to read more, I just got to the part where Beverly and Joyce show up. I had a huge crush on an English teacher that had a pretty dominant personality and always wore tall leather boots and sexy clothes, she was a total cougar. Something about a spanking from an intelligent college English teacher just seems so hot.
      Thanks again for the amazing book!
      -Cheeky Chad

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    4. Thank you for the kind words, Chad! Please go leave a nice anonymous Amazon review as well if not already.

      Yes, I had a lot of fun with the Chrissie character. Naughty and nice and free as a bird!

      I was hoping you would have a "hard time" reading it ;-)

      Beverly is exactly that English teach you wanted to spank you!

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  6. Amazing. This is easily the christmas gift I'm the most excited about.

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  7. Not my cup of tea, i am more into maledom, gonna pass that one, but i wish you sucess julie

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    1. No problems! You can go back and re-read "Julie's Spankings" instead :-)

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    2. Hello! First time reader here. I have an unrelated question for you. What do you think of CBC? It seems to be similar to American PBS,which is to say it's government propaganda. Is this what CBC is? I only watched this channel once years ago. An elderly Chinese man with glasses and a goatee was going on about the effect of pesticides on the loon population. I didn't know there was such a creature. Anyway, he was so boring that I fell asleep. When I woke up, a fellow named Ron James was telling funny stories that were totally unfunny. He too was boring and silly. Is this what taxpayers are paying for? You guys are in a bad way. BTW is that Chinese guy a politician or someone of note? Just curious. Thanks.PS keep up the good work for us spankos

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    3. Think more like NBC, but 100% govt paid for. Each Province has its own PBS thing. Ours is called TVO here in Ontario. But our govt is now "subsidizing" all mainstream media, so they are all to various degrees propaganda networks now. I'm

      I think you're referring to an elderly Japanese-Canadian guy, David Suzuki? He used to be good when he was on about real science and environmental issues, but he's gone crazy re the climate alarmism as he became senile.

      Ron James? Who cares. How about John Candy and Dan Akroyd? Now they were funny Canadians!

      And yes, Canada is in a very bad way. We have a piece of poop named Turdeau as our dictator.

      Thank you for the well wishes!

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  8. Hoping my grandkids don’t catch me sneaking a private read over the weekend…..
    Raul…

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  9. Your last comment about wishing you were that age. It was an older woman who introduced me to my wife to be. The spankings were the first part of the introduction, so I truly understand. Jack

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    1. I like older women. Good thing, as I now is one!

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    2. You're not old! Maybe though you could use a young(35) ward to keep you young and help with business, household, parties..
      -doyi(dreaming of your instruction)

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    3. Hi! I'm the guy that asked about CBC. Thanks for your response. I spanked my aunt when I was twenty and she was fifty. I know it's a bit cringy,but boy what a magnificent bum she had. Plump,white and inviting...I spanked her for wearing a blouse that showed more cleavage than a decent women should.show. Good excuse. Man,her behind was red and hot,and she was cumming like a very bad girl! My uncle never found out,and I had to spank her several times after that. Good times. Regarding Trudeau, he's the guy that froze bank accounts and trampled old ladies.We know all about him. Even the Europeans hate him. Now he's going after guns while letting criminals out on early parole. Trudeau is a younger Biden. Both are closet-commies. Hate them with a passion. And,oh,can we see more pictures of your bottom spanked. Thanks and Merry Christmas!

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    4. What a nice treat for aunty! Suddenly I'm fantasizing about a 20-year-old spanking me 💦 💦 💦

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    5. In this age of liability ( Bill Cosby etc.) I must point out that no aunties were harmed during spanking sessions. No woman was ever spanked by me who did not hotly lust for a spanking. Any similarity to persons living or dead may have a factual basis. But then again, maybe not. I am not the only young man who has a hot aunt. Okay? So leave me alone.

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    6. Never even had the thought. I guess I was just in your aunt's head and assumed she wanted that spanking.

      Given I'm definitely in "cougar" territory now, was thinking it would be extra humiliating to have to beg for sex from a hot young man, and have to submit to a honest to goodness, punishment grade spanking across his knee to get it. Gush.

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    7. Yeah,she did hotly lust for a spanking. No woman was ever spanked who didn't want it. I'm 27now,so will that do for your fantasy? Aunt Mabel says I'm ruggedly ugly. You fuel my fantasies and I'll fuel yours. Man,I'm getting a boner thinking of spanking you. You Canadian chicks are hot! I'll be seeing my aunt later today,but I won't be able to spank her. Too bad. She's a born-again Christian now. Thanks for your responses.

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    8. I will only admit that an older women given the spanking is truly the spanking you want and not want. My wife spankings get the point across, but my mother-in-law spankings I quickly feel like a naughty little boy over her lap. Jack

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    9. 27 and ruggedly ugly sounds perfect ;-)
      If she's born again, tell her she's a sinner and needs to repent across your knee.

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    10. Merry Christmas! Watching Bing's White Christmas for the third time..nephews and nieces crazy. Pop keeps telling me he wants grandkids...okay,three more years,Pop. I'm getting too much action. You wouldn't believe how many women whose husbands are pencil-necked white collar types like to get it from a construction worker with big rough hands! In school they said I was loser who never have a good job,but I'm pulling in more than these skinny pant goofs...and I'm banging their women. I got the last laugh! These women like it real rough,even up the ass. But I love my cock,and I love pussy too much for that. No anal. No way. Straight and rough,okay.With a good spanking before.Anyway I'm no intellectual,so thanks for listening to me. I know most of your readers are white collars. I like your stories about women being spanked.Thanks.

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    11. A good spanking followed by pussy sex is just fine by me!

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    12. Oldie but goodie from a book by Sonny Barger, .founder of the Hell's Angels. My friend bought a lion for a pet. I told him he's crazy. I told him to get a cat instead. Lions are dangerous, but a little pussy will never hurt ya... all the best for the New Year!





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  10. The first chapters are free to read. So I started by reading them without having bought the book, to see... The presentation of the characters and the context is fluid and without lengths but a little soft for my taste. When it was time to decide, I decided to buy it out of curiosity (and a little bit addicted already anyway).
    I do not regret : chapter 8 where I have stopped my reading for the moment is really a success.
    Looking back, I realize it's been prepared from chap 3 where Sue says to David in a way that sounded angry "you think a spanking is fun and sexy, really! »

    then chap 7 where Chrissie is really "angry" and breaks with the fun side of her relationship with David

    and finally chap 8 where David says of Sue "I have never seen her so angry"
    The spanking that follows is a real spanking, an anthology spanking.
    I think I'll read that chapter again before continuing.
    You are a very good teaser.

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    1. Ha ha! Wonderful! Yes, I go for the slow build to let you fall into the character and suspend your disbelief. When OUTRAGEOUS things start happening later, you're 'kinda bought in and it still doesn't shake your suspension of disbelief. At least that was my goal. But keep reading. If you like it hard and real, and extra embarrassing, there's still loads to go!

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  11. Big congrats! Just bought it and am a dozen chapters in. Can't put it down. And I can see the kink accelerating as I go. Love it!

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    1. Oh, it accelerates alright! Glad you like it!

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  12. Congratulations. I hope to get a copy before or just after the New Year and I'll give you my thoughts. Merry Christmas or Happy Holidays and I hope you get and give a nice sore and red ass :)

    Clarence (same as ClarenceComments)

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  13. Good luck with the book Julie.
    Merry Christmas!

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  14. Very well done! Already bought and paid for. Am anticipating several nights of naughty storytime imagining myself as young David.
    Merry Xmas, Julie. We love what you do.

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  15. Hi Julie - I bought it and am most of the way though it already. It's really well written, but I expected nothing less from you. Plenty for those who enjoy girls being spanked also. That naughty Chrissie sure catches it a lot. Is she "you"?

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    1. Hi Sandy. Yes, she certainly is. But I'm also all the other characters to various extents! Best to you and Tom.

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    2. Hello Miss Sandy. Lovely to see you comment on our favourite blog. We have not heard from you for a time. I presume from Ms. Julie's reply that you are still with Tom. Are you still being spanked? I was hoping you would start a blog of your own. Any chance of that? Merry Christmas.

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    3. Hi Bob - yes, still with Tom and still getting my spankings. Though "we" decided to keep it a bit more to ourselves. So no blog. We'll leave that to Julie. Happy New Year.

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  16. Is a paperback/hard copy going to be available ? If so is it also available for you previous work ? I just can't make it through more than a few paragraphs without..... well you know...
    Chris

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    1. Ha ha! You're a fan of sticky pages, then? My husband has an old spanking magazine where some of the pages are literally stuck together.

      There is a way to make it so that Amazon can print a paperback on demand. I don't know what the price point would be. I'll look into what's involved.

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    2. Thank you, kindness
      Chris

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  17. Just finished! I thought the entire book was great from cover to cover! David is a lucky guy ;-)

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  18. Bravo.....at last,and as promised published by Christmas.
    Thank you for the gift,and you will sure get my five star review even before reading, I already nominated you for a Noble prize in Erotic literature.
    Merry Christmas and keep warm in Toronto....I am writing from London UK were we are fine weather wise this year.

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    1. Thank you for your support! But do read it first, just to make sure it's worthy!

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  19. I wonder if read by wives, girlfriends that they would not for sexual pleasure or to control their man introduce spanking into their lives. Don't know if males will read, but if so, could they decide this is the life for them? Convincing their wife, girlfriend might be the problem. Jack

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    1. It will be mostly males who read it. They will imagine themselves to be David.

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    2. I just wonder how many males will accept a wife like mine, even my mother-in-law and knowing it is what I need. I've said it before, a woman is the key to life, without her man would be out of control. Jack

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    3. It's a lovely fantasy, for sure.

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  20. Readers, if you haven't started Chapter 12 yet, consider Sue's advice to her nephew at the end of the previous chapter, just before she gave him his first spanking:
    "You won't be injured by anything I give you though you'll believe you might be. Is that understood?"

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    1. Yes. Aunty Sue is no nonsense.

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    2. Hello. Why you don't show a nice brown auntie spanking a pretty brown girl.? Us girls of color need spanking too! I love your blog! In our community there is a thing against us getting spanked,but I would like to be spanked by a handsome masculine white man. Thankyou.

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    3. Hi! I'm surprised you'd not have many takers if you put yourself out there. You can't speak it aloud, but that is a power dynamic that is very taboo to explore and hence pretty exciting to some people, like all taboos.

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  21. Read a sample, only made it as far as the setting up of David's character. Bought it instantly.

    The setup is so relatable, as I'm sure it is to countless others, such is the proficiency of your research.

    So many things I could directly relate to, shy, small, introverted, software engineer, chronic masterbator due to lack of experience and an over active imagination, and more.

    Already hooked, will just need pockets of time to enjoy the setup and then a bit more privacy for where the setup leads :)



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    1. The character is a bit based on my husband that way. I figured it would not be realistic unless based in a real spanko!

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    2. Yeah I figured he might. Long time reader of your blog.

      Aunt Chrissy seems to be you, and Sue, well, aptly named :)

      So far I'm enjoying it a lot. Few nuggets of thoughts I have. Will share once I've read through

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    3. Definitely Chrissie is me, just younger, hotter, a great dancer, and more free! 😂

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  22. The passage when David's mother pulls down his pants and underpants is quite sexy.
    I also appreciate the attention paid to the anus in the book.
    It is always well exposed.

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    1. Poor David. To be ERECT in front of his Mom? Oh the shame! I thought it was a funny line when Mom sought confirmation from Sue and Chrissie that it was indeed a very fine cock, and that made her happy as the chances of her eventually becoming a grandmother went up. :-)

      And yes, I am quite anal erotic myself, and one of the most shameful aspects of a spanking is the inevitable display of that part of us, something the Sue character seems to appreciate as well as she always parts the cheeks to spank righ up in there!

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    2. Pulling of the pants down is the worse part, in my case it is done slowing. As for the erection, my wife, mother-in-law make comments, remind once it is deflated, the little boy will come out and they both enjoy that the most, The kicking, squirming, pleading. I have stood there, erection on display, a long scolding. My wife reminds me that I more embarrassed then
      she is seeing my erection. Jack

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  23. Very good story Julie
    Your a very good writer
    WC

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    1. Thank you very much, WC! High praise coming from you.

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    2. Praise well deserved
      You deserve a good girl spanking
      Naked
      In the diaper position
      Followed by a good firm rogering
      Right up your bare bottom
      While you vibrate your naughty wet pussy
      With your hitachi
      Well done
      WC

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  24. You said more males will read this, meaning more males who think about being spanked will have another source to address this. I just hope that these males will find masturbating is not fulfilling this need and from experience will take time to find that special woman to do just that. Men have no clue of what a female is opened to, no clue that they truly run this world, by controlling what is between a man's legs. Just a comment that is all. Jack

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    1. Some of the men already have committed relationships where it's not the wife's thing, and the guys are fine with that and enjoy a bit of fantasizing to enrich their lives.

      Even if not already paired up, it's hard to find the right person, and not everybody will be a 100% match. I would counsel not to make an interest in your fetish a show-stopper. Give your partner what they need, enjoy it, and also live a rich fantasy life. Win-win.

      I'm lucky that David and my interests match, and it's fun, but even with a partner, I still maintain a very rich fantasy life (as you know!) and enjoy that equally.

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    2. I realized that I'm able to have such a woman who understands, and your right in my interest. Once again you understand and you educate, Thank-You Jack

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  25. I find the description of Aunt Chrissie's pussy particularly successful during her first spanking in front of David.
    Mashing up against Aunty Sue's tweedy slacks. Gaping open at David. Noticeably damp. How humiliating.
    This figure of the crushed pussy open on the spanker's knee is not very often used in video because it is terribly obscene. (Mr M of
    realspanking does it sometimes)
    Do you remember when you were spanked in front of Best Man?
    Clit directly straddling David's thigh.. Pussy squishing into his knee.
    Or when you came on Sue's knee (the real Sue).
    I think it's about time you met the feminist lesbian couple again...
    I really like your book but i have only read half of it

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    1. Of course I remember all those things and used them as inspiration for this book.

      Hard to recapture magic from the past in real life. Better to move forwards!

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    2. Hi from Texas! Speaking of inspiration,can you write a sexy story of a Tex-Mex brat who gets spanked for lewd behavior. It might be in a small Texas town,and the hunky Anglo Texas Ranger is investigating all the naughty girls. He spanks her soft brown rump with his gunbelt,and then sells her tail to pay for his new Colt .45. You have such a way with words,I know you could write a story that would make this girl cream her jeans. Thanks for all the pictorials. Happy New Year! By the way,are Canadian men hot? I hear they're French,but a crude and rude sort of French.Lumberjack types. Lumberjacks are hot as hell! Thanks.

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    3. Guys up a bit North are like that. Very handy and self-reliant. A lot of them have hot little numbers for wives already, though.

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    4. Hello Texas girl! My late husband was a crude,rude.French Canadian lumberjack,and I resent your attitude. You have the right to say whatever you want, but if you were to try to get my man,I would spank your little brown rump (I assume you are the Tex-Mex brat). Henri was more of a man than any of your Texas Rangers ever can be . My man was tough,but never rough with me,unless I told him I wanted it rough. No one ever spanked me better,and no one ever will. Happy New Year, belated,Julie. Keep up the good work!

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  26. I like your spanking writing, in general, but unfortunately, I found this new piece kind of predictable. I feel like GPT-chat could have written it.

    Not bad; just not novel and interesting to me. I have read much of your other stuff, and this didn't do anything new.

    Sorry for the slightly negative review. I do like your spanking writing from way back; It felt fresher. This reads a bit worn out. I would have given it 3.5 stars. (but I don't know how to do that anonymously, and I don't want to hurt your rating.)

    But I still bought it... so you got $7 from me. (Not much, I know.)

    Happy new year.

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    1. Thank you for the comment, and for not trashing me on Amazon!

      I'll go ask ChatGPT to write me up a spanking story and publish it on my blog. We'll see how it fares compared to me :-)

      It's all original setting and scenarios, and an interesting mix of characters, and I know some people like it a lot (me included, but I may be biased), but to each their own. My favourite was the ping pong chapter. Come on now, how is that not fun and original?

      Happy New Year and thank you for your $7.50 Xmas gift!

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  27. There is such a thing as "masturbatory dollars"????

    Who knew???

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  28. Julie, a really hate to say this, but I was disappointed in the book. Maybe my expectations were too high… It didn’t have the fresh excitement that your writing usually has. I enjoyed Julie Delmar Spanks! a lot more - I still go back to Chapter 10: Next Door Neighbour when my libido needs a boost of inspiration. But there isn’t much in David’s Spankings that has as much affect on me. It’s kind of predictable, redundant and, well, doesn’t feel real. I really like the things you do best, like lively realistic dialog, good writing and grammar, use of implements (with a bit of education thrown in), emotions around the fear of the inevitable pain of a punishment. But I think you’ve missed a few opportunities that would fire up a submissive male mindset even more, such as:

    • David experimenting with self-spanking
    • Him playing with the Aunty Sue and Aunt Chrissie’s panties, and maybe accidently ejaculating on a pair, trying to hide it, having to take them to the store to buy a replacement pair, explaining why to the clerk, etc.
    • More emphasis on lingerie, such as silky nylon panties, how they feel – this is a common fetish of ours
    • David having to ejaculate into his panties, then Aunty Sue makes him wear them for the rest of the day, maybe with plastic diaper pants to keep him wet
    • More emphasis on what’s going on in David’s mind, how he is experiencing the changes he’s going through. This is very rich territory, and you may need to get collaboration, possibly from your “real” David to get the feelings right.
    • Aunty Sue is so emotionally distant – does she get any pleasure at all from the beatings? It seems this is territory you understand well, and it seems hinting at her own excitement from your experienced perspective would inspire David (and me…). A bit of the D/s dynamic. Also more on her clothing.
    • How does David feel when he’s required to wear panties, stockings, and a garter belt under his tux. The whole epilogue has material for a book in itself!!
    • Etc., etc.

    My main issue though is we readers don’t get to experience what David is going through. It’s just a bit too dry, feels formulaic, with little subtlety. Sure he cries and shouts, but what is going through his mind? What does he see as the strap is coming down on his inner thighs? What is the expression on Aunty Sue’s face? What is the sound of Amanda pulling off her belt for his belt-whipping? How does David experience the humiliations, the fears, the excitement, the pain – how does he imagine it later when he masturbates? How about some detail on describing his cock as it grows and shrinks?

    I won’t do a review on Amazon because I have too much respect for your talent and the effort you’ve put into this project. And I won’t do a dishonest review. I understand if you decide not to publish this comment, but hope you hear me, and keep writing!

    BTW, I noticed two little errors that should have been picked up on the copy-edit:

    “She smiled at my use of "Miss" To refer to her.“

    “It looked old, rough-hewn, and handmaid.“


    Raul…

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    1. Thank you Raul. One of my big struggles was keeping it limited in length and engaging, so I didn't have too much time to explore the themes you indicated, and even some description needed to be cut short. But yes, focussing more on David's inner world would have been good. Perhaps I did not occupy the character as much as I did my Julie character in my previous book?

      Now everybody will have to go buy the book to see if they agree with you! I still think the plot is very interesting with the cast of characters and their predicaments. And I did masturbate just as much as I wrote this book as my others! Ha ha!

      Yes, next-door neighbour chapter in my first book was a hard to beat masterpiece, I agree!

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  29. Dear Julie, I suspect that Raul’s comments demonstrate how nuanced our fetishes become and that it would be impossible for a book to reflect all of these. I know, for example, that a number of your regular correspondents will bemoan the absence of a diaper scene. For me, your book captured the excruciating embarrassment that one might simultaneously crave and dread. Ultimately, it is this that makes the book rather than the more technical descriptions of the punishments.

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    1. Yes, that was a major theme, the interplay between consent and non-consent, and between craving and dreading. I devoted a lot of time to that because I think it's so psychologically interesting and something I observe in myself in spades.

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    2. And did it brilliantly with a grown man treated as a naughty child, witnessed punishments and an alpha male. It combines my worst fears with huge excitement.

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    3. I had a lot of fun writing that scene. I'm not a guy, but I imagined the ultimate emasculation must be learning that, despite considering yourself completely heterosexual, you can be made to cum just from a man's cock up your bum. Ha ha!

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    4. For a few wonderful years, my partner indulged my desire to be spanked. I remember contemplating what would happen if relatives or friends were present and a spanking was threatened or indeed administered. Alas, things evolved away from matters spanking although one lives in hope.

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    5. There's always dreams and imagination. Write a story about it!

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  30. Like Raul, I hate to say it but, I’m a bit disappointed by the book. I’m half way through and, so far, I feel like the story is not super compelling.

    Maybe it’s just a personal preference thing though as if I had written it, I wouldn’t have made David a spanko. Same thing for Chrissie actually. Instead, I would have made Sue the only spanko of the bunch, and both Chrissie and David submissive (with some switch tendencies towards other subs like you did in the book) with an open mind, but not spanko per se. Then after the snooping incident, I would have had Sue forces David to accept to submit to corporal punishments from now on or to have to leave her house.

    Perhaps it wouldn’t have been quite as realistic (though let’s be honest, the premise is already not very realistic as it is, which isn’t a problem as far as I’m concerned haha), but personally I would have found it way hotter to know for sure that both David and Chrissie genuinely didn’t enjoy any of the spanking they received from Sue (and that even the mere idea of getting spanked didn’t arouse them in any way) and likewise that Sue did genuinely enjoy punishing and dominating both of them.

    I understand why you went with your plot with all the consent stuff and all, but yeah it didn’t really do it for me unfortunately. Still, it’s a good book and I’ll finish it and make sure to leave a good review as I can see all the great work that went into it. And also, it helped me understand more what I really enjoy in a spanking / kinky story so that’s nice too.

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    1. Thank you. Great comment. Even I agree with you!

      I find it realistic as it is, as that is how I feel about my spankings. I want them and don't want them at the same time, and tried to get that across.

      But when I fantasize, I am always spanked "against my will", no consent at all. Now, I may get aroused by it, but then I hate myself and am ashamed and don't at all understand my getting aroused because of it.

      I promise I'll do a non-consensual one next time, maybe set in a future where the rules and laws are different, such as my short story CE2047 - https://strictjuliespanks.blogspot.com/p/ce2047.html

      What genders would you prefer on the bottom and top?

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