A couple of days ago I posted a story, Tyler’s Trash. Usually, after a few proofreads I post it. Then I revisit it myself in the days following to assess it more objectively, fix any remaining minor issues, and give myself a grade. I think this one is a masterpiece if I do say so myself! (up to and including his first spanking - after that, it’s just good).
It’s in the M/M genre. A powerfully built single working class father and his only child, a more slightly built 18-year-old son (the photo of the spankee does not do the written description justice, but it was the best I could find). The boy breaks a fairly serious law on a childish lark and is caught by the police. Before court, his dad spanks him, the first time in 10 years, severely. The judge is apprised of the punishment, sees the contrition, and sentences him lightly: picking up trash as part of a juvenile work crew despite his age. I encourage you to read it if you have not done so already. A couple of F/M guys have told me they were turned on despite themselves.
As you know, I’ve been increasingly on a fiction writing binge since I discovered ChatGPT two years ago. This coincided with a steep drop off of my personal anecdotes due to my husband’s work schedule, our age increasing, and our slackening desire to act out our kinky fantasies. And, honestly, there’s not much new and exciting that we haven’t done anymore in that area - it was feeling repetitive to blog it.
However, my fantasy life remains high, confined now more to imagination and masturbation (thank you, Mr. Hitachi!), especially as I’m alone for longer stretches as David travels with no job of my own outside some light charity work.
I’ve really become addicted to working through my fantasies on ChatGPT and producing these stories. It’s my main sexual outlet. When I think of a rough concept and throw it at ChatGPT, I’m always very titillated with what it comes back with, especially as I can subsequently nudge it to elaborate on the bits that most “inspire” me.
I also think AI will be very important to all our futures, and learning to use it and being able to try each new thing keeps me very relevant. I’m probably (?) the most prolific and highest quality writer of AI-assisted spanking fiction out there, if not any type of fiction — I’ve written a lot of words with AI! Everyone should be good at something!
It’s too bad my reach is so limited. Ever since blogger put on age restrictions and then started marking the blog as not only adult, but also sensitive content, the views have been way down. And that on top of written-word blog consumption being way down overall and all these blogging platforms slowly dying. Plus, I did myself no favours by putting out my political views which got me blacklisted by a bunch of other spanking blogs that used to link to me, but oh well, I helped save the free world, so I’m cool with that trade off. All these things basically mean that anything new I put out is not indexed by the search engines and does not pop up in search results, so growing the audience is tough. But I still have about 60K annual visitors and 5K new ones each month, so it’s not that bad. But do spread the word!
For Tyler’s Trash, I issued about 100 prompts to ChatGPT-4o and stitched the responses together into a coherent narrative. As a result, I “wrote”, edited, proofread, and published 22K words in 4 hours, all on my iPad. That’s stunning writer productivity (average is about 1000/day for fiction).
The spanking in this one had tremendous anticipation built up, and then was very drawn out. I was 3600 words in before the spanking started, and then the spanking itself was 1600 words. By contrast, in The School Suspension, which also had a lot of anticipation, it was only 1000 words until the start of the spanking.
I was worried I had dragged it out for too long, but as I re-read it, I thought it was perfect. That anticipation kept building and building and building, driving the reader forward. The rich descriptions indicated the spanking would be worse and worse.
I went with M/M as it’s a genre that excites me a lot, but I don’t do too much of it as I know most of my audience prefers F/M, and I like that plenty fine also, or M/F, ditto.
To me, the strong, steady, working class, Alpha male is the most archetypal spanker. Others are reflections of this. I personally think (without proof) that a lot of you F/M types are closet bi, unwilling to admit it even to yourself. My hubby was one, but his reaction to being spanked by a strong man for the first time was amazing (David’s Man Spanking).
While I think the most archetypical spankee is female, I’ve been really socialized to think girl abuse is bad, so I generally keep those spankings on the lighter side (with a few exceptions!). But with a male spankee, go to town! Plus there’s the extra embarrassment of the humiliated male playing the archetypical female role.
And when I spank, I put myself into the role of the archetypical male. Using a strap-on dildo on a man is a great way to understand that role. Very empowering! It’s a feeling I bring with me to the scenes where I top.
The story continues with a healthy dose of courtroom humiliation, again, slow and drawn out, but very compelling IMO. By the end, everybody knows he’s been spanked!
The judge sentences him to ten weeks community service on an orange-jumpered juvenile work crew picking up trash by the roadside. In my world, half the kids are walking funny when they arrive for their community service, including our Tyler, where the judge suggested a strap to Tyler’s backside before each Saturday shift would have a salutary effect on the boy.
On work crew, he meets a pretty girl whose dad also spanked her, and they commiserate. But their chatting during work earned them a reprimand, and another spanking back home.
When they are caught repeating the offence during week 8, they get a side-by-side paddling from their dads as the female probation officer looks on.
The story ends after both their sentences are complete, and she turns Sweet 16. After her party they kiss and become boyfriend-girlfriend - Awwwwww!
I used a device in this story that I’ve come to like. I divide the story into relatively small sections (much less than chapter length), with a few word header before each. I find this helps drive the story forward, prevents reader fatigue, and gives handy bookmarks for stopping and starting. It also helps because ChatGPT likes setting the scene on each new response, and it minimizes my editing to allow a bit of that through (not all), and it doesn’t seem so out of place after a section break. At least all of that is my theory. I’d love to read your thoughts as well.
Let me know in the comments what you thought of the story and the mechanics I describe above. Any feedback is appreciated!
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