Sunday, July 10

Book Progress - I'm to be Flogged

Thought I'd give you all a little update, on my book project and on my sex life. Amongst other things, I'm to be flogged at bedtime!

Book project is still coming along grand. I got through my first pass of editing. I deleted some stuff, rearranged some stuff, rewrote some stuff, edited it all, and tightened it up. My new page chapter count is 51 and page count is 466.

To make sure I was getting the flow right, I listed all the chapters out and then grouped them thematically.

  1. Teaser
    David in the corner, crying, recently spanked bum on display.

  2. Setup
    Background on David, his family, Aunty Sue, and Aunt Chrissie her younger bi wife. It is arranged that David will stay with Sue and Chrissie. Sue lets him in on the fact that she and Chrissie live a domestic discipline lifestyle.

  3. Moving In
    David moves in at the start of the semester. The domestic routine is established with Chrissie as housewife. Aunt Chrissie wakes David up for Sunday pancakes by pouncing on him in bed. David soils his sheets and Aunt Chrissie is none too pleased with him.

  4. Chrissie Misbehaves
    Chrissie forgets some important dry cleaning for Sue. She is scolded in front of David, and then taken to their bedroom for a spanking. She is sent back to the living room in panties and a T-shirt to do timeout. At the spur of the moment, Sue decides it will be panties-down corner time for Chrissie. Sue has to leave, so David is pressed into massaging her aching cheeks with cold cream. The two get frisky with one another. David gets his first-ever handjob.

  5. David Misbehaves
    David snoops in his aunts' bedroom. He is discovered after the fact. Sue is on the verge of sending him home which would be a disaster for him. He begs for an arrangement like the one Chrissie has, and confesses to being a spanking fetishist himself. Sue phones David's mother for permission. Sue will punish him for his snooping, and then take him in hand to correct his failing schoolwork, all with his Mom's blessing. In addition to his spanking, David is severely grounded for a full two weeks.

  6. Life as Normal
    Spankings become routine for both of them. Many little incidents.
    • Chrissie's dance friends, Tamara and Mandy, witness David doing bare bottom corner time during his two week grounding period.
    • David's Mom visits and brings the strap that was used on her and Sue as they were growing up. Mommy displays her own displeasure at David's snooping of his aunts' bedroom with a severe strapping in front of Sue and Chrissie.
    • David's Mom is spanked behind closed doors by Sue for past transgressions.
    • Chrissie spanks David for tracking in mud. Sue walks in on them and puts Chrissie across her knee for overstepping. Then she spanks David herself.
    • Chrissie messes up by failing to drop off an important assignment of David's. Sue spanks her in front of David for the first time.
    • David is caned when Sue discovers he has been surfing porn and masturbating midday when he should have been studying.
    • Sue spanks Chrissie in front of her friend and David when she comes home to no dinner on the table and Chrissie and her friend a bottle of wine in. The friend is allowed to take Chrissie to the bedroom to apply the cold cream and be frisky with Sue's consent.

  7. Guests
    Sue invites David's English Lit professor, Beverly, and her Gender Studies professor lesbian wife, Joyce, over for dinner. While they are there, David is punished for failing to complete some homework on time. The guests are fascinated and stay to watch. Beverly knows about "figging" and as Chrissie happens to have a ginger root on hand, David is figged. The figging results in a strong erection after the pain subsides. David is sent to his room red-faced to take care of it.

  8. Diapering
    Chrissie complains about the "skid marks" David leaves on his underpants. Sue sentences David to a week of post-toilet inspections with remedial wiping instruction. When he still cannot keep his underpants clean, he is punished with a week in diapers.
    • Chrissie takes him on an embarrassing run to the drugstore
    • His week in diapers
    • Beverly is invited over to babysit and change him when Sue and Chrissie need to be away overnight
    • Tamara and Mandy see David in diapers. they both help change him. Tamara takes pity and gives him a handjob before putting his cock away.

  9. Coming Out party
    Chrissie wishes to become a spanking youtuber and blogger and wants to "come out" as a spanking fetishist. They arrange a party for all her friends where she makes a speech and is spanked by Sue as a demonstration. The party guests are invited to swat Chrissie's bun as she serves. At the party, Chrissie is given a full-on panties down spanking by Lance, the handsome gay fitness instructor, for spilling a drink on his new shirt. With Sue's blessing, he confiscates her panties for the duration of the evening, leaving her serving in only her very short skirt. The other party guests take full advantage.

  10. Gay Sex for David
    Chrissie offers to get David laid by his "crush", Tamara. But before that, David's male-on-male homophobia is uncovered during a movie. Chrissie and David fight over it. Sue washes both of their mouths out with soap and spanks them both in front of each other. David is told he will only be allowed straight sex if he consents to gay sex first. David reluctantly agrees. Lance, the handsome gay fitness instructor takes David's gay virginity, making him cum from just cock as Chrissie watches.

  11. Caught in Panties
    David tries to rationalize his interest in gay sex in his own mind by saying he gets turned on identifying as a girl. He tries on a pair of Chrissie's panties, fascinated with the concept, and is caught red-handed. He is punished for stealing Chrissie's panties. Chrissie takes him to Victoria Secret to replace her panties, and buy him a pair of his own to play in.

  12. Straight Sex for David
    David gets to have straight sex with the cute and freaky Tamara. He is disappointed when she tells him he is much too young for her and she's in a gay relationship anyways.

  13. Girlfriend for David
    Chrissie arranges a girlfriend from dance of the same age as David. She arranges a fun first date for them which winds up with David losing a bet and being publicly paddled over his pants by his date. The girl likes that David is such a good loser and begins dating him. David is punished by Sue for missing curfew, and punished by his girlfriend for lying about having a curfew.

  14. Happily Ever After
    David and his girlfriend stay together. He moves in with her. They marry. She is in charge.

Lots of spanking action and kinky stuff. Something for everyone. A good story arc. The scenes themselves are hot, hot, hot!

Speaking of hot.

David and I were cruising Netflix and came across this gem:

It's pretty bad, but sort of fun and kinky too. The first couple were pretty cute. They learn that the wife likes getting her ass spanked (oh my!). They try out a flogger at a sex shop:

I wake up this morning bright and early. I change into my gym clothes to go downstairs and do some weights. David stops me. He loves me in spandex.

He pulls me over his knee and spanks me over my pants. It's one thing I love about being married. I mean, come on, when a woman puts on clothes like that, she's sort of asking for a spanking, no? Well, it is when I do, and he was only too happy to oblige.

It was a short spanking, but he promised me a really good flogging at bedtime. Ass, tits, pussy.

I find myself looking forward to it! Will report back.

37 comments:

  1. 3 or 4 syringe enemas administered after his bowel movement will clean him out completely. This is my wife’s cure for skid marks and I’m ready for a plug or pegging as well.

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  2. Any sort of bondage frame or special flogging area Jules?

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    1. No, just butt up over a pile of pillows, then the flogging.

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    2. That’s “Daddy’s belt” strapping position sweet girl. Flogging needs to be different and removed from that domestic spanking feel. Buy one of those decorative ladders people hang quilts on. Great for ankles and wrists to be bound. A flogging frame and hidden in plain sight ;)

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    3. Ah ha! That's what those are for!

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  3. If you're open to a suggestion, I think David's spanking fetish should be in its infancy, or even more nebulous and should only come out farther along. Maybe he is excited watching Chrissie get her spankings, and is maybe curious about them, but when he gets it, he finds it humiliating... but exciting after the fact. Like someone we all know. Then as more time passes he comes to realize he needs them, then comes to crave them.

    But you know..."if you don't like my story, write your own".

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    1. That would be fun too, but for this book I wanted to explore how spanking can make a real life difference for a fetishist. Poor David gets a lot more than he counted on, and is taught discipline and how to properly mind his Aunt, and yet... his penis remains persistently hard.

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    2. It is something along your lines, though, in that he's only a theoretical spanking fetishist with no experience. He gets a rude awakening when he gets the real thing. Plus he's constantly crying, and the waterworks really open up, much to his embarrassment, during a bum warming.

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    3. My wife finds a spanking in front of others adds to the punishment. As mentioned been spanked when mother-in-law present, a couple of her best friends. For a male this is the worse, especially standing facing the wall, naked or just with pants pulled down. Jack

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  4. In your preview of your book scene created in no. 10 is a first in your blog (...correct me if I am wrong).
    I am not gay...but reading that David was required to have gay sex as a condition before sleeping with Tamara is really kinky...

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    1. Correct. Never done in r/l. But it's a big fantasy of mine (I actually watch male gay porn imagining that - blush!). The scene in the book has a decade of pent-up, unreleased, fantasy longing behind it. It's a very hot scene!

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  5. Putting the spank in spandex :)
    Maybe literary David would try the same trick with Chrissie, with rather different results...

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    1. Sue would skin David's hide if he smacked Chrissie's butt like that without permission. 😉

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  6. Impressive, seems like you managed to fit so many different kinks into your book while still keeping the story fairly realistic! And I'm pretty much into all of them. I guess you couldn't fit watersport in though, right? That one is a bit on the extreme side, but very hot! Maybe in a sequel ;)

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    1. Maybe, at the very end, his newlywed wife can "baptize" him :-)

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  7. Did you receive your flogging young lady?

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    1. I did! Need to blog it now. Mostly written!

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  8. Greetings Julie.

    I do hope that you did have fun with your bedtime flogging. Your book project looks very interesting. I'll have to definitely check it out when it is completed and released.

    In the meantime I do have a question in regards to the very lovely picture you have as a header for the flogging you mentioned.

    I was wondering if you had any more pictures from this set, or know where to find them. I have two shots from the original website collected years ago. Foolishly I didn't collect them all and when I went back to get them that entire photo set was gone. Which was really sad because despite other photo on that site, this one was always the best and nothing has compared to it ever since.

    I tried on several occasions to reach out to the site's photographer asking him what became of this set but I've had no reply.

    It was a truly beautiful set I would like to have my collection hopefully you can help. If not thanks anyway and I look forward to the book once more

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    1. I saw a few of those posted somewhere on bdsmlr, though not sure where anymore.

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    2. That might have been me trying to find the rest of the pictures by posting what I have of them.

      The set was the first set originally posted on the Red Charl's website. I am still not sure why it was removed. While there are other good photo sets there, it was the best on site.

      Well nothing ever truly disappears online. It's out there somewhere and maybe I will find it again.

      Thank you once again and I look forward to reading this book.

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    3. Ah ha! It was from you, then.

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  9. A woman is so good at making a man feel like a little boy when he crosses the line. I feel this is an important point when it comes to
    spankings. I act as my wife saids just like a little boy and more so when being spanked in front of others. The 'corner time' just adds to that feeling. Jack

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  10. So how long of flogging you think you can take and how long you feel nauighty boy of bad girl should be flogged

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    1. Not much for me - boredom more than anything else!

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  11. Spanking paddling and flogging can do load of good if ask me what would you tell someone if they feel ashame they like to be spanked or into spanking a spanko. i know u mention before never had convo aabout spanking with some one else but if you have or do what type comment would give about spanking

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    1. Oh sure. Great for mental health and stress relief if you're into it. And can have some real disciplinary effect if the spankee wants it.

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  12. Can't wait to read when you spank David in front of others and make him feel like a little boy who 'Mommy' needs to spanked because he was naughty. Females unlike Males do not hold back, when it comes to sexual desires, Males have much to learn. A woman is so complex for me it is when they become 'Mommy', the spanking that they give and you wanted it to end, not going to happen, 'Mommy' is going to insure her naughty little boy learns his lesson. Jack

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    1. I actually have David's real Mommy give him the short strap across her knee!

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    2. David must really feel like a little boy when his Mommy spanks him, your watching. I feel very little when my mother-in-law has me over her lap and applying the hairbrush, my wife smiles. What is worse is my mother-in-law baring my bottom, scolding me. The little boy comes out and they both really enjoy it. Jack

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  13. Well, you finally got David into the M/M scenario you've dreamed of. Bravo.

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  14. Teaser, chapter 1, got my attention. My wife saids that this is the best punishment for my attitude, behavior. After a good sound spanking, facing the wall showing her work is the topping on the cake. She really enjoys when my mother-in-law drops in, a friend, adds to the punishment. I just stand, say nothing, except if asked, I then must say I was a naughty little boy and Mommy spanked me. Jack

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    1. Does your mother-in-law have the right to spread your buttocks in order to punish you more?

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  15. When is Miss Julie going to end up in diapers? I wouldn’t hesitate to buy your book.

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