Oh no! Dilemmas! After publishing my Spanking Short Stories Inspired by A.I. (Vol.1 F/M), I was excited to finally start in on Vol.2 featuring M/F short stories inspired by A.I. I copied the MSWord file for Vol.1, kept all the structure and formatting, deleted everything, changed the cover and title, and started writing! You like my watermelon panties?
Nice, bookends. Blue for boys, pink for girls.
I'll tell you my problem in a moment, but let me first digress and give my thanks to Lion over at his blog for buying my Vol.1 book and writing a great review: A New Fun Spanking Book. Lion says,
Julie isn’t a typical porn author. Her stories have surprising and sexy twists that manage to surprise me every time. Julie knows how to push all the right buttons.
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Thank you, Lion!
Paying it forward, I just noticed that Tina over at Die starke Frau / The strong woman, has put out a new book Embracing Her Lead: A Guide to Thriving in Female-Led Relationships. I'm looking forward to reading it!
Okay, but here's the problem with Vol.2. I started in on a short story involving a 30-year-old woman who is forced by economic circumstances to move back in with her small-town Mom and Dad. Short stories should be short, of course. But when I got to my short story page target (around 20 pages), she did not get even her first spanking! But it's a GREAT setup, so now I'm thinking of putting Vol.2 on hold and writing a novella based on this premise. I mean, it's that good! The girl is totally me, and the Dad is totally my Dad, and I was getting sooooo turned on writing it!
Of course, I'm also excited by the dozen other short story ideas in my head, many of them I worked out with ChatGPT. So, I'm very conflicted. An embarrassment of riches!
Here's my lead up. It's a total first draft and I'd definitely clean it up and maybe take more time to flesh things out if it's going to be a novella (I was trying to keep it concise for a short story).
Let me know what you think!
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Lucy Reynolds is a spunky 30-year-old woman who finds herself in an unforeseen circumstance. After losing her job and relationship, and facing a mountain of debt, she is forced to move back home to live with her parents until she can get back on her feet. She had moved out to make it in the big city before even graduating high school, chaffing at her dad's strict rules and even stricter punishments. So, she's pretty embarrassed that it has come to this.On her first day back, as she's unpacking her suitcase into her childhood room, her dad steps in to have a private word with her.
Mr. Reynolds is a tall man with graying hair and a stern demeanour.
"Lucy, you're very welcome to stay as long as you need to, we only ask you contribute to the household work as best you can."
"Of course, Daddy."
"And remember young lady, when you're under my roof, you're under my rules."
Lucy rolls her eyes and says, "Dad, I'm 30-years-old. I'm not a kid anymore. You don't need to tuck me in and read me bedtime stories."
"Age is just a number, Lucy. You mind what I said."
"Fine," she says in an exasperated tone.
Mr. Reynolds looks back sharply at her, as if to tell her to watch her tone with him, but just nods and steps out of her room.
Lucy closes her bedroom door gently and throws herself on her bed. She didn't know what to expect coming home, but she should have expected this. Her dad was never one to be trifled with, and certainly not by "some snip of a girl", his last words to her when she refused his discipline and moved out, as was her right. Now here she is, she thinks, tail tucked firmly between legs. What did she expect?
But surely, at her age, he wouldn't still spank her, would he? The thought both horrifies her and does something else, something more confusing, for her. After being on her own for so long, cycling through subpar boyfriends (nothing like her daddy), she mentally began to associate boundaries and discipline, even spanking, with being loved and cared for, something she always enjoyed from her mom and dad, despite their strictness.
She had debated with herself for weeks moving back home. While she really didn't have much choice in the matter, she probably could have figured something out. But the truth was, she found herself craving her childhood boundaries. She even guiltily fantasized about her childhood spankings. And not just childhood. Right into her teens. And always, always, on her bare bum. She blushes as she has the thought. It's ridiculous. She's 30-years-old. He wouldn't. He couldn't. But the way he said, "my house, my rules". Could he? Would he? Of course, he wouldn't. She shook her head and put it out of her mind, getting on with the unpacking.
Sam Reynolds has mixed feelings about their daughter moving back in with them, however temporarily. He didn't approve of her decisions, her lifestyle, or of the company she kept. And look what happened. He had tried to raise her with discipline, but that child was always trouble. Too spunky for her own good, he thinks, chuckling to himself. It was actually her best quality, her spunkiness, but it got her into a lot of trouble growing up and earned her an awful lot of spankings and many hours with her nose in the corner, right up until she left home.
She had figured out the age of majority in their state was seventeen if she is no longer at home attending school. Her spunkiness caused her to refuse his discipline. He said she was right about the age of majority, if she moves out. But so long as she was living under his roof, it was under his rules and his consequences. She said in that case she was moving out. She'd move to the big city and get a job.
Sam was no hypocrite. "His roof, his rules" meant just that. If she was out from under his roof, she could do as she pleased.
Edith Reynolds, his wife, didn't see it the same way. She begged her husband to relent, terribly worried about her in the big city and what might become of her. Sam had no such worries. Sure, he was concerned, but they had raised a tough and resilient gal, and knew she would figure it out for herself. It might even be just what she needed.
Edith, in Lucy's presence, had pleaded with Sam to give up on his rules so she could stay. That's when he had said, "no slip of a girl sets the rules around here," and that was that.
They did go so far as to offer her a little financial support to get her started, but Lucy, spunky Lucy, got a job, finished high school by correspondence, got a better job, put herself through college, and got an even better job. Even so, she somehow managed to squander it all, not setting up a nest egg, and generating huge credit card debts with the help of her useless boyfriend. When the recession hit, and she lost her job, and her boyfriend abandoned her to her credit card bills, she was in dire straits.
Her parents didn't have the means, or the desire quite frankly, to support her financially, so rather than declare bankruptcy and couch-surf at her age, she asked to move back in. Her parents did help her to re-finance her credit card debts and were carrying the payments on the debt for the time being, which she is very grateful for.
Despite his daughter's calendar years, Sam still considers her an immature little girl based on her actions. Fine, she could come back to the nest, but "his roof, his rules" still applies, and in spades. Even as a supposed "adult", if she acts like a child, he'll lay down the law as for a child, and punish her like a child. If she doesn't like it, she knows where the door is. Even Edith had reluctantly agreed, eager to get her baby girl back home, if only for a while.
After a pleasant supper, Sam asks the women to join him in his study after they finish the clearing up. As they clear and wash, Lucy asks her mom what's up.
When done, mother and daughter make their way into Sam Reynolds' sanctum sanctorum: his study.
Sam Reynolds is an accomplished and published amateur historian, as well as a somewhat famous author of historical fiction. In his stories, the heroes are men of virtue who rescue damsels in distress, though sometimes a particularly spoiled young damsel may just require a firm hand.
Lucy is quite possibly her dad's biggest fan, though she never lets on. She's too embarrassed to have him know she's dogmarked all the passages where the girl is spanked and later made love to, and that she frequently masturbates to those scenes. She knows it's weird to masturbate to her dad's fiction, but it is what it is.
Sam is behind his desk, writing, as the women enter. They each take a seat across the desk from him and wait for him to finish up his paragraph.
Lucy is intimidated by this room. Some of her more serious spankings, when the belt was taken off, happened in here.
He turns to them and says, "I asked you both here to discuss the rules for Lucy. Understood?"
"Oh, Sam," says Edith, sounding disappointed in him.
"Don't you think I'm too old for rules, Daddy?"
"What do I always say?"
"Age is just a number," Lucy rhymes off by rote.
"And...?"
"Your roof, your rules."
"Exactly."
"Yes, Sir," Lucy says, intimidated by her stern dad.
"First of all, you'll help your mother around the house. The cooking, the cleaning, and suchlike. High time you learned how, young lady."
"Yes, Daddy," Lucy says, expecting it. She knows this discussion is her price of re-admittance, and she swallows her pride.
"Secondly, we won't be having you go idle. You'll get a part-time job if you want any spending money, and you'll enrol in some continuing education."
Lucy knows her dad is a stickler for life-long learning.
"Yes, Sir."
"Curfew. Curfew is 10pm weekdays, lights out by 11pm; 11pm weekends, lights out by midnight."
"Dad... no!"
"You need to establish a healthy sleep rhythm, young lady. No exceptions."
Lucy's cheeks burned with humiliation. A curfew? At her age? She's 30-years-old!
"Daddy... please."
"No exceptions."
"Dear," says Edith, "don't you think..."
"No exceptions. I require you to acknowledge that, young lady."
"Yes, SIR," Lucy says, sounding surly for the first time.
"Next, regarding your attire. I expect you to dress modestly and appropriately, especially around town. Nothing too short or too low cut or tight. None of those leggings or tight pants."
"Dad!"
"Which brings us to men. You're not to be alone with a man under my roof. And I remind you that curfew is curfew, date or no date. A little kissing is fine, but nothing more. Any gentleman wishing to date you will ask my permission first."
"That's pretty old fashioned, Daddy," says Lucy with a smile. Indeed, after what she's just been through, she has zero interest in men. Had her dad vetted her boyfriends, things might have gone better in fact, her last boyfriend spending her money freely, racking up debt, and then blowing off.
"What can I say, I'm an old-fashioned guy," Sam says with a grin, indicating his antique-filled wood-panelled study.
"Finally, substances. No smoking, no drinking, certainly no recreational drugs of any type."
"Dad! You drink," Lucy says, in an accusatory tone, indicating his well-stocked bar of top-shelf liquor he keeps in this very room, under lock and key.
"In moderation, unlike you. You may have a drink when I offer it to you."
"Fine," Lucy says, knowing it's for her own good. She had been abusing drugs and alcohol and knows it's not good for her.
"Any questions?"
"No, Sir," Lucy says, still blushing and even a bit angry at being treated like a child. But she knew what she was signing up for when she asked to come home. She just had not expected the rules to be so rigid and voluminous, especially with regards to curfew and drinking and dress. She also smokes weed to calm herself. Though she was sure she could sneak in a toke behind Dad's back. She had become quite adept at it as a teen, after all.
No consequences were mentioned for breaking the rules, and Lucy had dared not ask. Was spanking the understood consequence, even at her age?
The next few weeks pass harmoniously. Lucy really enjoys her time with her mom, learning amazing cooking and household skills she had never developed as a kid. She even prepares a solid dinner all by herself, receiving much praise and encouragement from her mom and dad.
She also, against all odds, loves her time with her dad. What a little shit she must have been as a child, she thinks to herself, not appreciating her dad. By contrast to her loser boyfriends, dad is amazing. She can listen to him for hours going on about history, bringing it to life for her.
For their part, her parents are also mightily impressed by Lucy. Her quick wit, her raw intelligence, her broad interests. They always knew it, of course, but her mischievousness and boundary pushing as a teen made her hard to deal with back then. Despite Sam's initial reluctance, he's actually quite delighted to have his little girl back under his roof.
All the while, in the privacy of her childhood bedroom, more than ever Lucy reaches for her dad's juiciest fiction, pleasuring herself to her dad's spanked damsels and the rugged men who lay down the law for them.
These several weeks later, she can't help but wonder if dad was just bluffing with his big "my roof, my rules" act. Though in truth, she had broken none of his rules. Would he actually put her across his knee, as he did before, if she broke a rule? He had not threatened that explicitly in the laying down of the rules, so she is left wondering. Wondering what would happen if she broke a rule. Maybe just a small one...
Eventually, Lucy reconnects with some childhood friends. They organize a girl's night out. It's a Friday night and she knows her curfew is supposedly 11pm, but it had not been mentioned since, even when she had casually told her mom and dad her plans. She was also banned from drinking except when offered by her dad, but he fairly routinely offered her a sherry for their after-dinner history and world politics discussions. So again, she wasn't sure how serious he was about it all.
She goes out, dressed modestly and determined to stick to non-alcoholic beverages. However, a bit of that teenage boundary pushing is still with her. What if she's just a few minutes late for curfew? What would happen? Would it go unnoticed? Would she get a talking to? More than that? She wanted to find out, even though the butterflies in her tummy told her not to. Her main thought was, would Daddy spank her?
The watering hole was only a short walk away. Ten minutes at best. She walked there after supper and behaved herself at girls' night out, even though her friends got pretty inebriated. She had to repeatedly refuse their offers of alcohol. When 10:45 rolled around, the others seemed to be just getting started. She knew she should leave to make it home by curfew. But she needed to see. She wanted to see.
Well aware of the time, Lucy begins her walk home at 11:15pm, not wanting to push her luck further. She sheepishly enter her house, quietly as she can, just before 11:30pm, one half hour late for curfew.
"Lucy!" calls out her Dad from the study as soon as she shut the door.
"Oh, shit," she thinks to herself.
She walks to the open door of his study. He is behind his desk writing.
"You're almost thirty minutes late for curfew."
"I'm sorry, Daddy. I lost track of the time," Lucy says, eyes downcast.
"Were you drinking?"
"No, Daddy. "
"Go to bed. We'll discuss this in the morning. 10am sharp."
"Yes, Daddy."
"Oh my gosh," Lucy thinks as she hurries up to her bedroom, goes in, and shuts the door breathlessly. "What's he going to do to me tomorrow?" Lucy has a very restless night, her hand on her pussy for much of it.
Next morning Lucy rises, goes to the bathroom, showers carefully, and dresses. She carefully selects her panties and dons a thigh-length dress keeping her legs bare.
She goes downstairs for breakfast at 8:30am. Only her mom is there. Her dad is already at work, writing in his study.
"What were you thinking, Lucy?" Mom asks.
"I wasn't thinking. That's the problem," Lucy says gloomily.
In truth she had wanted to push boundaries. She wanted to know.
At 10am sharp she knocks on her dad's study door.
"Enter."
Lucy goes in then shuts the door behind her. She approaches his desk and stands there, eyes downcast, fingers fidgeting in front of herself. She waits for him to finish up what he was doing.
Her Dad turns to her.
"You were thirty minutes late for curfew, young lady."
"I know, Daddy. I'm sorry."
"Have you any explanation?"
"No Daddy. Just careless. I'm sorry."
He contemplates her for a moment.
"You didn't drink?"
"No, Daddy. Not a drop."
He contemplates her some more as she stands there squirming.
"I set you these rules for a reason, Lucy. It's not about a half hour here or there. You need to learn how to set rules for yourself and then follow them. Because you're not yet able, I'll set the rules for you, and you will learn how to follow them."
"Yes, Sir."
"I'm going to let it go this time, young lady. But next time you break a rule without any good reason, there will be consequences."
"Yes, Daddy," Lucy says, the butterflies in her tummy doing backflips.
"You're dismissed."
Lucy turns and walks toward the door. On the way, she gets her courage up. She turns back and asks, "Daddy?"
"Yes," he says absentmindedly.
"What kind of 'consequences'?"
He looks back up at her, meets her gaze, and with a steady and steely voice says "the over-my-knee kind of consequences."
Lucy feels a strong blush rising in her face, and a tingling in her pussy.
"Y... y... yes, Daddy," she says, quickly making her exit.
Sam Reynolds turns back to his work, the smallest smile on his lips unseen by his daughter.
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- Her first spanking.
- Her getting picked up by cops for possession of marijuana.
- The cops sitting awkwardly in the living room as Lucy gets her spanking in the study.
- The cops running into Lucy later at a coffee shop and gently teasing her.
- Lucy pushing boundaries during Dad's poker night.
Love the pink cover! Reminds me of some other pink things on girls.
ReplyDeleteLove the Lucy novella idea. You must be missing the chance to flesh out the characters more. I really loved that in "Julie's Spankings" and you were really good at it there.
Ha ha! I actually hadn't thought of that. You have a dirty mind! Pink spanked bottoms. Poking out pink pussies.
DeleteThank you for the compliment. I do miss the fleshing out and also the chance to deliciously extend the anticipation and the embarrassments.
I can understand your quandary. My suggestion is to finish the story and then do some serious pruning. I think you have a great short story going. The temptation to publish it as a novella may be strong, but I think hat once you finish, you will be able to edit it down to 20-25 really tight pages. Just my 2cents. Thanks for the kind mention. I could be the daddy in your story -- just saying.
ReplyDeleteGood advice.
DeleteAnd, yes, you're hired!
Are you going to have to take any practice spankings for this book?
ReplyDeleteOh yes! Lots and lots across Daddy's knee!
DeleteAt this rate, I think you'll be finished by Sunday.
DeleteDon't forget the spanking break to reduce the steam!
I am writing furiously!
DeleteI am liking this as it plays out to chapters. Each one covering a spanking or a change in behavior or even a change of rules. I can see a point mom takes a spanking or two. Maybe mom volunteers to take one of Lucy's spanking. The idea that we don't dive right into the spanking in the first transgressions, means more are to come. We might even see mom give a spanking to Lucy, say she failed to help with cleaning. The part time job could lead to opportunity to get into trouble.
ReplyDeleteI agree. Lots of scopes for all sorts of adventures and story arc.
DeleteAh enfin une histoire pour moi, car nous avons chez nous passé le stade, que vous n'avez pas oser franchir alors que je sens qu'il est en vous …
ReplyDeleteNous avons franchi, bien sur avec le temps de la vie, de la fessée punition, à la fessée punition plaisir, et enfin de la fessée punition plaisir sexe, donc je sais que je vais dévorer votre livre, en pensant qu'un jour pour vous, au lieu de la fiction sera la réalité avec vos parents, c'est tout (le mal) que je vous souhaite...
Donc pour faire court, merci pour ce futur livre qui je sais sera comme d’habitude parfait , mais qui pour moi sera un plus, qui me permettra de penser à votre livre lorsque je fesserai mes filles...
Grand merci et très bonne initiative....
Merci! C'est bien exactement pour vous!
DeleteHello Miss Delmar,
ReplyDeleteIn a few pages, you gently introduce us to the life of this 30-year-old woman and her parents.
If your real father never really did it, Sam spanked his daughter well into teenage.
Is she too old for him to spank her again? Has he already spanked her completely naked? Would it be appropriate to do so now? These questions could be the subject of an argumentative conversation between Sam and Edith.
Many other chapters, including those you cite, could enrich the character of Lucy, to whom you say you are so close.
I vote for a novel.
Louis
Yes! You captured my own excitement at the prospects for poor Lucy!
DeleteThe foundation of this has a lovely, old-fashioned feel to it, combined with the way she is made to dress. I think “Daddy” needs a woodshed out the back. A place that both the mother and daughter were familiar with in their younger years.
ReplyDeleteMistress Andrea xo
Woodshed indeed!
DeleteThe period of time this is set, a woodshed was already there. Wonder if the wife had made a visit or two. The man being in charge is why I feel this is a period that maybe in the past, but could still be true today. A trip to the woodshed is one thing, the trip back from the woodshed, well that is the worse. Jack
DeleteAbsolutely!
DeleteI recently saw a picture, a man naked, very red bottom, kneeling beside his wife reading something on a paper. I was thinking this could be a written agreement that when he misbehaves, or naughty, his wife has the right to spank him or some other form of punishment. Have you heard of this. Jack
DeleteMore likely a list of all his misdeeds over the past week!
DeleteMagnifique histoire, j'ai hâte de lire la première fessée déculottée de Lucy , que son papa va lui donner !! 🍑🔥🍑
ReplyDeleteYes! The anticipation!
DeleteMaybe, after she gets her first spanking, she understands that it is not really something she wants. She tries to be a good girl. She spends a lot of time with her mom and learns all of the domestic arts. Still, her wild past means that she sometimes screws up and winds up over daddy's knee. Eventually, her dad realizes that, without an education or job skills, her economic future is very limited. So, he arranges for her to marry a well to do friend of his. He knows what he wants both as a housekeeper and in bed. She becomes a dutiful housewife to a firm handed man. He keeps a strap hanging above the bed to remind her of her place.
ReplyDeleteTommy
She hates it... but craves it at the same time.
Delete(That's me).
Since it is fiction, we can imagine an escalation in the punishments that her father will inflict on Lucy.
ReplyDeleteThis one for example
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Punishment assfucking.
Rather assertive father.
Rather embarrassing for Lucy.
We imagine her running and throwing herself on her bed, holding her buttcheeks and ashamed to begin to cum as she feels her father's liquid beginning to flow.
Turns me on!
DeleteHe makes his point logically, rationally, finishes the scolding and starts his fatherly job without beating about the bush.
DeleteIt must be so humiliating for a daughter in her thirties, especially if her mother attends the punishment.
Yes! Nothing NOT humiliating about a punishment ass fucking!
DeleteI like a novella idea for Lucy. I'm sure at some point, if she keeps going out with the girls to bars, she is going to strike up a relationship with a guy that she fancies but that her father does not approve of.
ReplyDeleteOr maybe one he does approve of!
DeleteThere are romance novels and there's erotica. These days romance novels sometimes include very explicit sex scenes. There's lots of buildup. In the case of erotica, the story is aimed more at making the girls' pussy wet or the boy's cock hard. Too much lead up gets in the way of the erotic punch.
ReplyDeleteWell that's porn culture, I guess.
DeleteI have a humiliation fetish more than anything, and that requires me to create elaborate at least somewhat plausible situations in my mind before the boom is lowered!
I look forward to reading this. Can’t wait for Lucy’s first “big girl” spanking.
ReplyDeleteSlick
Yes!
DeleteOf all the the ways you mentioned for being spanked, I have this question. A male wanting to be spanked and in a particular way, will the female grant him his wish or will she do it her way, which may or may not go well with the male, but yet the spanking is what he wants. Jack
ReplyDeleteI like to do it the way he asks. Men are often very specific about their kinks!
DeleteMy wife agrees with you, but some women knowing a man wants a spanking, like herself, decides how the spanking will be given. Males may want to be spank she saids but a woman knows how a man needs to be spanked. Jack
DeleteDo more males purchase these books or is it the females? When a woman spanks a male, does she get sexually satisfied, any particular way the spanking is given does this get her sexually satisfied. I ask my wife that question, she said both are good questions but it best to ask you, there is surly not one answer that will be had. She said for herself, spanking me brings out the Mommy in her, she feels satisfied in ways I as a male would not know. She said some women growing up look forward to be a Mommy, and that can happen with or without children. In our case she knew from the beginning that she had found what she wanted in a man, one who needed direction. She reminds me our sex life is good, the spankings well that brings satisfication that a male will never know. I'm sticking to the subject, I hope, these books open up so many questions. Jack
ReplyDeleteIn different ways, but, yes, I get turned on doing the spanking.
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ReplyDelete"“His roof, his rules,” her mom says by way of explanation."
Lucy's mom, when she talks about the rules in force in their home, says "His roof, his rules", as if she doesn't necessarily agree with what her husband thinks. Is it possible that she is also subject to these rules or others, unknown to her daughter, and suffers the consequences if she does not respect them? Was this the case for your mother?
Jesse
Yes, I think Mom thinks the rules are a bit much for a 30-year-old. I too wonder if she is under the same regime...
DeleteAs a subby cucky 36yo w a 27 yo hot wife I wanna be put into a toolshed by your burly cop or david and you both take my fiance while im crying and fluffing cock..begging an alpha to let me cum while he uses me..
ReplyDeleteSounds good to me!
DeleteHehe convince her, and I’m on a flight to be your slave at long last!
DeleteI love being her fiance but I desire being made to be gay/dommed..
So far she isnt into other folks joining in on sex. Shes grossed out when I say she can do whatever she wants with anyone.
She is getting a feeldoe and we’ve acknowledged a FLR. Shopping chastity cages.
-SissyDreams
Keep at it! Gift her a massage by a male therapist. You'll have to do your research by getting massages from males yourself until you find one you think she will like!
DeleteThanks so nice to hear from you goddess julie..I love your advice!! Ill buy her a massage and hope she gets horny for a big stud. She adores me and will dom me so thats me winning finally at life! Sadly she may be disgusted by outside persons but well see someday maybe..meantime Ill take it up my ass in a dress as shes a fashion maven. Youd enjoy her as a young gym disciplinarian for me and and David (;
DeleteThat was so hot
Still, your stories on forced bi are my dirty fav
Never been with a guy nor wish romance with men
Yet a woman laughing as she comes from stud who then cums in my ass to save my girl from a second hard fucking is top fantasy
I actually desirer gayer as i want to be made to be the gay man bride at a party and all watch and tease me in cage begging a man or fucked my girl to allow me to masturbate as he plows me
I can never decide, this as top or as you forced another “straight” man to 69 me in a contest..
The forced bi really turns me on as well (only when I'm in charge and is guy on guy). If the tables were turned and it was "forced" bi on me it would not be very forced!
DeleteI have just found your blog and I love it! You have all the hottest stories and I love seeing you post pics with your comments too - so naughty!
ReplyDeleteWelcome! And thank you!
DeleteWell I just bought the FM book, just get more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteWould love to read more like your stuf.
How about, age play. She acts like a girl, she get girl treatment and need to earn the privilegie of getting older.
Make it humiliating, as a way to learn the consequences of her naughty (adult) behavior. Having both mum and dad participate in the fun. The adults actually enjoying the treatment of her...
I love that fantasy. Really strikes to the core of my spanking fetish.
DeleteIs this still going to be a standalone or just a chapter in the ai book?
ReplyDeleteBeen looking forward to it.
Slick