Overachievers

I've always been a bit of an "overachiever" as they say. I overachieved in high school, then I overachieved being naughty crewing around the Caribbean, then I straightened up and overachieved at uni. When I got my first real corporate job after uni, I overachieved again. One may argue I "overachieve" at being a total spanko slut?

What is an "overachiever"? It's working very hard, compulsively hard, unreasonably hard, a bit psychotically hard, to do as well as absolutely possible, beyond any natural talent would predict. I was a little mark grubber in school, devastated and irate at the unfairness of earning less than 100% on anything.

Little overachievers like me sometimes have a very particular dream. We dream that there was some mistake in high school where we didn't really graduate, therefore pur university admittance was under false pretences and that graduation doesn't count, therefore we get fired from our job which requires a degree. I'd wake up panicked in a cold sweat absolutely believing it was all true. I'd have to talk myself down, "no, you did graduate high school, you did get into and through uni, you are legit in your job". This was a recurring dream. Once a month or so for years when I was a young professional.

I've been working on my vol.2 of short stories, featuring M/F stories.

It's been coming along well. Feels easy-peasy as I had all the story ideas lined up and workshopped with ChatGPT. I just re-wrote them from scratch using my patented "pussy check" to see if I was hitting all the right notes. The gooey mess down below proved I was.

There was one extra story I wanted to add that brought my overachiever nightmare to life. So I workshopped it with ChatGPT and then rewrote from scratch. They are all really good stories, but I think this one may be my favourite in the book?

What is this "workshopping" you may ask. Well, I get an initial idea on how to start the story and engineer the first prompt:

Write a fictional story set in a time when bare bottom spankings across the knee was a common form of discipline. Write a story about a young lady who is about to graduate from University. She has a job lined up based on family connections that requires the degree, and is scheduled to start in September leaving her the entire summer off. The female Dean of the University calls her into her office. She brings her Mom along. When they arrive, the headmistress of the private school she attended before University is there. The headmistress says that recent information came to light that she had cheated on her final term paper. The Dean says as a result she was admitted under false pretences and she could not graduate University. They tell her she may graduate only if she goes back to summer school at the private school amongst the youngsters to redo the course she cheated on. However, she will follow all rules, and she must be caned for cheating as per school rules.

There it is, my "nightmare" succinctly stated!

The initial sentence puts CharGPT "in the mood" so to speak.

ChatGPT will generate an understated response. I'll iterate on that response, asking it to modify it in certain ways until I'm happy with it. I cajole ChatGPT into becoming more explicit and focussing on the embarrassment.

Then I'll ask it to continue, dreaming up a new indignity, such as,

Continue. During the summer course her teacher feels Amelia needs an extra dose of discipline and liberally spanks her with the slipper on the bare at the front of the class when she fails to live up to expectations.

Each new prompt is inspired by the previous one and by ChatGPT's response. It's like bouncing ideas off a kinky collaborator.

Continue. Coach Daniels, is the girls' gym teacher. When he sees Amelia fooling around and not paying attention while he speaks, he gives her a spanking.

I thought, maybe over the raised knees on the seat of her panties?

Modify that so the coach stands, putting one foot up on a bench, raising his knee. He lifts Amelia over and then lowers her gym shorts and spanks her over her too-tight panties.

Maybe end with a warning...

The coach warns her that any future disruptions will be dealt with by an even more extended spanking, across his knee until she's reduced to wailing like a little girl in front of the other pupils.

ChatGPT seems more happy warning about resulting consequences than being asked to write about them. But it's my little trap!

A week later in gym class, Amelia misbehaves again and receives the promised consequences.

Yes, hoist on its own petard! It really goes overboard for me. I modify it only a little...

Modify that to emphasize the deliberate lowering of her gym shorts and then her panties. Describe her losing her composure as her spanking proceeds.

For some reason if I tell ChatGPT to lower her panties it'll balk. But telling it to "emphasize the lowering" as if it was already implicit in the previous response which made no mention either way, brings it out of its shell.

After that, I give our unfortunate girl a full-on hyper-embarrassing caning at final assembly for her original cheating infraction that landed her in this situation.

As you can see, all the elements of the story are my own. As I read ChatGPT's response, it brings out of me creative new ideas and new situations to extend the story.

Once I'm done, I go to a blank sheet of paper and rewrite the story from scratch.

With the exception of this story that clocked in at 36 pages but contains four major spanking scenes, I kept all the others quite short, averaging only a smidge over 10 pages each. New situation, quick to the action, slam, bam, thank you, Ma'am! Twelve stories in total, 160 pages. I think I'm done. It feels done. If I did a thirteenth I'd have to do a fourteenth for superstitious reasons, so a nice even dozen feels right.

These are the titles and scenarios:

Story 1: His Roof, His Rules

A 30-year-old woman has to move back in with Mom and Dad after going bankrupt. They accept her, but it's his roof, his rules (and his consequences for breaking them).

Story 2: Brenda at the Beach

A budding older teen goes on vacation in Hawaii with her family. She hangs out at the beach in a daring string bikini hoping to catch the eye of a local surfer boy. She catches more than one eye when she carelessly swims out into the current and gets tossed by waves, losing her bikini completely. A handsome young surfer boy rescues her from the rocks and delivers her back to her angry Mom waiting for her on the beach.

Story 3: The Medieval Town Square

A young lady is caught stealing in a Medieval English town. The magistrate sentences her to a public spanking over her mother's lap. He then gets mother to apply a burning, stinging balm to all her most intimate places and leaves her naked in the stocks, writhing in extreme discomfort as the townspeople make fun.

Story 4: Lila's Humiliating Exposure

A young wife breaks a rule and gets a spanking from her husband Saturday mid-afternoon. He then sentences her to bare naked cornertime in the living room. The retired next door neighbour, obsessed with his lawn, spots her through the window in her corner. He knocks to make sure everything is okay. The husband explains the situation including his wife's willing consent to discipline, offers him a beer, and offers him a closer look at his naughty missus.

Story 5: Mary and the Mechanic

A young woman, ignoring her check engine light, needs to be towed. The mechanic who owns the shop tells her the bad news. Mary is furious and assumes he is cheating her. When a friend of hers talks to the mechanic, he tells her it's legit. She sheepishly apologizes. Before working on her car, the mechanic makes her write lines. She obsesses over the ruggedly handsome mechanic dominating her for a week. When her car is due to be picked up, she dresses the part and begs him for more, which he gives her in his office as his employees listen in.

Story 6: Whitewater Paddling

A young wife is taken by her husband on a whitewater rafting experience. He comes out of retirement to lead the expedition. When his wife endangers them all, he teaches her a very public lesson.

Story 7: Fight Night

A wife seriously misbehaves and is spanked by her husband. When he moves onto the belt, she begs him not to, asking for any other punishment instead. As there is a big PPV MMA event that evening, he says she can instead serve him and his buddies dressed in her embarrassingly skimpy ring girl outfit. That evening she gets completely humiliated by her husband and the guys. Her reaction indicates she might not hate it.

Story 8: A Naughty Christian Wife

A young Christian wife orders a sex toy online while her husband is away. Upon his return, the husband confronts her about her ungodly purchase appearing on his credit card statement. She is guilty and requests a spanking to make amends. They are both turned on by the spanking and worry it is Satan's work. They see their Pastor who informs them of the birds and the bees as far as marital discipline is concerned.

Story 9: School Uniform Violations

A teenager and her private school friends attend a coffee shop where they flirt with the local high school boys. They all "fix" their school uniforms to make them more sexy. One of the girls' Mom walks in quite by coincidence with her friend. She's outraged and fixes her daughter's uniform for her on the spot then takes her home for a spanking, making no bones about it. It's a very modest and embarrassed girl who joins her friends the next day.

Story 10: An Aristocratic Marriage

A young aristocratic daughter is married off to an old Earl. She resists mightily, but the Earl manages to tame her handily with a combination of discipline and newfound sexual delight. The marriage party revellers hear it all and then see a very blushing bride as they announce the consummation with the soaked and stained wedding bed linen cloth on display.

Story 11: Back to School

A near university graduate learns her cheating at her private girls' academy has caught up to her. She will not be allowed to graduate either high school or university unless she redoes her final term at the strict no-nonsense academy. The headmistress, determined to make an example of her, gives carte blanche to the teachers to use primary school discipline on her at their discretion. The equally aggrieved teachers take full advantage. The term ends with a public caning at final assembly for her severe honour code violation.

Story 12: Skinny Dipper Spanked

A new wife insists on skinny dipping at her husband's cottage much to the consternation of their devout elderly neighbours. Renewing their complaints after the husband was out, the husband decides to spank his wife in front of the soon satisfied neighbours. Later, by way of amends, he sends her to clean house at the neighbours where she is caught snooping and then stood in the corner by the elderly wife and subsequently spanked by the grandfatherly gentleman.

Nice collection, eh?!?

Just proofreading now and writing the forward.

Definitely out before Christmas!