Thursday, March 28

F/M Fiction with Grok: The Poolside Reckoning


It was a warm summer afternoon, the kind of day that begged for a trip to the public pool. David, a middle-aged man, had agreed to accompany his beautiful but strict wife Julie to the pool. They had been married for over fifteen years, and Julie was well aware of her husband's wandering eye and had warned him about it in the past.

As they settled in at the pool, David couldn't help but let his gaze wander to the younger women in their swimsuits. He admired their toned bodies and youthful figures, a stark contrast to his own aging form. Julie, ever vigilant, noticed her husband's wandering eye and felt a surge of anger. She was not going to let him get away with this behavior, not today.

Without warning, Julie grabbed David by the arm and led him to the women's changing room. The few women inside gasped in surprise as Julie pulled down her husband's swimsuit, exposing his pale bottom. She then proceeded to put him across her knee and began to spank him, her hand cracking against his bare skin with a loud smack.

David yelped in pain as Julie's hand reddened his entire bottom and right down the backs of his legs. The women in the changing room couldn't help but giggle at the sight of the older man being spanked by his wife. They whispered to each other, admiring Julie's strength and determination to discipline her husband.

When she was satisfied that David had been sufficiently punished, Julie stood him up and slapped the fronts of his thighs, causing him to jump and yell in pain. His wife's hand barely missed his exposed, bouncing genitals, and David was humiliated beyond belief as the other women looked on with broad smirks. Julie then restored his swimsuit and led him back to their spot at the pool, his upper legs, fronts and backs, and lower bottom cheeks poking out beneath his swimsuit, still red from the spanking.

As they returned, the women who had been the object of David's stares saw his spanked legs and low bottom cheeks and laughed. One woman, a tall blonde named Rachel, approached Julie and David, congratulating the wife on her actions.

"Good for you," Rachel said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "Maybe now your husband will think twice before he ogles other women." She then turned to David, her eyes narrowing. "If you ever do that again, I'll personally make sure your wife spanks you even harder."

David nodded, his face burning with shame. He knew he had been caught, and there was no way to escape the consequences of his actions. Julie then made him act as a waiter, serving the women he had ogled, buying them their requested drinks and serving them.

As David served the women, they each took turns slapping and pinching his bum. His wife looked on approvingly, satisfied that her husband was being punished for his indiscretions.

One of the men in the young group was Steve. He was handsome, young, tall, with broad shoulders, a chiseled jaw, piercing blue eyes and a charming smile that could melt the heart of any woman. Steve, approached Julie. He asked Julie for permission to spank her husband himself, and she agreed, much to David's horror.

Steve led David to the most central and exposed area of the pool, where everyone could see them. He then put his leg up on a bench and effortlessly lifted David across his elevated knee.

David's swim trunks were pulled down, revealing his bare bottom. The girls at the pool began to giggle and point, their eyes wide with shock and amusement.

"Please, no!" David cried, his voice cracking with fear. "Don't do this!"

But Steve ignored his pleas and began to spank him soundly. David kicked and squirmed, his face contorted in pain and humiliation. As he kicked, he managed to kick his lowered swimsuit right off his ankles.

Now completely exposed, David felt tears streaming down his cheeks as he realized that the girls could all see his penis, testicles, and bottom hole as he writhed around over Steve's elevated knee. He kicked and begged tearfully, but Steve showed no mercy.

As Steve continued to spank him relentlessly, David's bottom hole gaped open and closed repeatedly with each impact. The girls at the pool gasped and laughed, pointing at the obscene display.

"Look at his bumhole!" one of the girls shouted, and the others joined in, chanting "Bumhole! Bumhole!"

David's humiliation was unbearable. He felt a strange heat rising in his body, and to his horror, he began to develop an embarrassing erection from all the female attention.

The girls at the pool couldn't help but notice David's growing member, and they began to comment on it.

"Oh my god, look at his tiny dick!" one of the girls exclaimed.

"He's getting hard from being spanked!" another girl added.

"Maybe he likes it rough," a third girl chimed in, and the others burst into laughter.

As the spanking continued, David's erection grew more and more pronounced, bobbing up and down with each impact. He felt as though he would die of embarrassment.

Finally, Steve stopped spanking him and set him back on his feet with a big grin. David was nude, and he was forced to collect and put back on his swim trunks with his erection still standing at attention.

Steve followed the waddling, erect David back to Julie. He asked her if he could take David to a private room and have him sexually service him as added punishment for his inappropriate erection. Julie agreed, but made him promise to take photos. Steve brought Rachel as a photographer and took the crying David away.

Steve opened a door at the side of the pool and ushered David inside. The room was dark and cold, and David shivered as he looked around. He could see a table and a chair, and a few other pieces of furniture, but there was nothing to indicate what this place was used for.

"Take off that swimsuit," Steve ordered, and David did as he was told, his hands shaking as he removed it.

He stood there, naked and vulnerable, as Steve looked him up and down.

"You're a pathetic old man," Steve said, his voice filled with contempt. "You should be ashamed of yourself."

David hung his head, unable to meet Steve's gaze.

"Get on your knees," Steve said, and David did as he was told.

He knelt on the cold floor, his heart pounding in his chest.

"Close your eyes," Steve said. He could feel Steve's presence, and he knew that something terrible was about to happen.

"Now open your mouth," Steve said, and David did as he was told.

He felt Steve's hand on the back of his head, and then a moment later, he felt something hard and warm in his mouth. He realized with horror that it was Steve's cock.

David tried to pull away, but Steve's grip on his head was too strong. He was forced to take Steve's cock into his mouth, gagging and choking as it hit the back of his throat.

Steve was large, much larger than David had ever imagined, and he felt his jaw stretching to accommodate the thick shaft. He could taste the saltiness of Steve's pre-cum, and he could feel the heat of his arousal.

David tried to breathe through his nose, but it was difficult. He was forced to take Steve's cock deep into his throat, his eyes watering as he struggled to take it all.

Steve began to thrust his hips, forcing his cock deeper into David's mouth. David could feel the thick shaft sliding in and out, and he could hear Steve's moans of pleasure as he used David's mouth for his own satisfaction.

David felt humiliated and degraded, but there was nothing he could do. He was at Steve's mercy, and he knew that he would have to endure whatever punishment Steve had in mind.

Finally, Steve pulled his cock from David's mouth and stepped back. David gasped for breath, his throat raw and his eyes streaming with tears.

"That was just the beginning," Steve said, his voice low and dangerous.

All the while, Rachel had been standing to the side, taking photographs. Rachel was beautiful, with long, curly hair and sparkling eyes, and David felt a wave of shame wash over him as he realized that she had seen everything.

"We need some lube, Rachel. Take off your clothes," Steve ordered, and Rachel did as she was told.

She stood there, naked and vulnerable, as Steve moved behind her. He grabbed her by the hips and bent her over the table, positioning her so that her ass was in the air.

David could see Steve's cock, still hard and glistening with David's saliva, and he knew that Rachel was about to suffer a similar humiliation to the one that he had.

Steve positioned himself behind Rachel and spread her legs wide. He grabbed her hips and thrust forward, his cock sliding deep into her sopping wet pussy.

Rachel cried out as Steve began to fuck her, his hips moving back and forth as he pounded her pussy. David could see her face, contorted with pain and pleasure.

Finally, Steve pulled out of Rachel's pussy. He told Rachel to dress and pick up her camera. He led David to Rachel's place. He grabbed David by the hips and forced him to bend over the table, positioning his ass in the air.

David pleaded for mercy, but Steve would hear none of it. Rachel, newly dressed, camera in hand, stood ready to document the humiliating event.

Rachel began snapping photos, capturing every humiliating detail of David's punishment. He positioned himself behind David, and with a single, forceful thrust, he thrust his thick pussy-lubed member inside David's tight, virginal asshole.

David screamed in agony as Steve's cock stretched his rectum to its limits. Inch by excruciating inch, Steve forced himself deeper, tearing through David's delicate flesh. Tears streamed down David's face as he tried to endure the relentless progress.

Rachel continued to take photos, zooming in on the distended, gaping hole that was once David's asshole. The sound of the camera's shutter was like a gunshot, punctuating each thrust as Steve ravaged David's ass.

The pain was unbearable, but Steve showed no mercy. He grabbed David's hips and began to thrust harder, faster, and deeper. David's body was slick with sweat, and his moans of pain filled the room. Rachel's camera never stopped clicking, capturing every humiliating detail of David's punishment.

Finally, after what felt like an eternity, Steve let out a guttural groan and pulled his cock from David's ravaged ass. He positioned himself in front of David's face and began to stroke his massive member. David could only watch in horror as Steve's cock swelled and pulsed, his balls tightening in anticipation of the inevitable release.

With a final, powerful stroke of his hand, Steve erupted, sending thick ropes of hot, sticky cum shooting onto David's face. David tried to turn away, but Steve grabbed his chin and forced him to look into his eyes as he unloaded his seed all over David's face.

When Steve was finally spent, he stepped back and admired his handiwork. David's face was covered in cum, his eyes red and puffy from crying, and his once-tight asshole now a sore, gaping, distended mess.

Rachel snapped a few final photos, capturing the humiliating aftermath of David's punishment.When David had put his swim trunks back on and they returned to Julie and the rest of the girls, David was not allowed to wipe the cum off his face.

David swallowed hard, his face burning with humiliation. Thick strands of Steve's cum clung to his cheeks, his chin, and his nose. He could feel the sticky mess drying in the warm sun, and he desperately wanted to wipe it away. But he knew better than to disobey Steve.

Julie stepped forward, her gaze locked on her husband. "So, David," she said, her voice cold and hard. "I hope you learned a lesson about ogling other women and getting erections in front of them."

The young women giggled, whispering to each other as they watched the scene unfold.

David's face burned even hotter. He could feel the cum tightening on his skin, and he knew he must look ridiculous. He wanted to disappear, to sink into the ground and never be seen again.

"I think you should have to sit there with the cum on your face until I say you can wipe it off," Julie said, her voice firm. "What do you think, girls?"

The young women nodded in agreement, their eyes dancing with amusement. "Yeah," the blonde said. "Make him sit there and think about what he's done."

David's humiliation was now complete. He knew he had no choice but to comply with his wife's demands. He sat there, his face covered in cum, while the young women continued to tease and mock him.

"Look at him," one of the girls said, her voice full of scorn. "He's just like a little bitch, getting punished like that."

One of them, a petite blonde with bright blue eyes, spoke up. "Yeah," she said, her tone mocking. "He's just like a porn star, getting a facial like that."

"Yeah," another girl chimed in. "He's not even a real man anymore. He's just a pathetic, cum-covered loser."

David's heart sank as he listened to their cruel words. He knew he deserved their scorn, but it still hurt to hear it. He felt small and weak, a shadow of the man he once was.

The minutes ticked by, and David's humiliation only grew. The cum on his face dried into a crusty mess, and he could feel it pulling at his skin. He longed to wipe it away, to rid himself of the evidence of his shame, but he knew he had to wait for Julie's permission.

As he sat there enduring the women's scorn, his tears brought the ejaculate down to his lips and chin.

Finally, after what felt like an eternity, Julie spoke up. "Alright, David," she said, eying his tears, her voice softer now. "You can go clean yourself up."

David's relief was palpable. He stood up on shaky legs and made his way to the pool house, his head hung in shame. The young women watched him go, their laughter ringing in his ears.

Once inside the pool house, David scrubbed his face clean, trying to erase the evidence of his humiliation. But he knew the memory would stay with him forever. He had been punished, and he had learned his lesson. He would never again ogle other women.

But the damage had been done. David's reputation was in tatters, and he knew he would never be able to look the young women at the pool in the eye again. He was a laughingstock, a joke, a pathetic excuse for a man.

As he made his way back to the pool, David's heart was heavy with shame. He knew he had brought this upon himself, but that didn't make it any easier to bear. He had been humiliated, punished, and reduced to a shadow of his former self.

And as he sat down on the lounge chair, the young women still watching him with amusement, David knew that his life would never be the same again. He had been humbled, and he would never forget the lesson he had learned.

52 comments:

  1. Fantastic story but a huge missed opportunity to force David to wear a bikini for extra humiliation.

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  2. I never would want that to happen to me, but what a story, covered all bases and the reader is left with no What If's, How About this. My wife made a comment the spanking in the women's restroom, there are still women's restrooms that have a chair set aside so that Mothers can address naughty children, some even have a paddle hanging near by. That would be the worse spanking of all time, strangers seeing me spanked by my wife, and how I react to her spankings. Jack

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    1. I've yet to see a women's room with a paddle but will keep my eyes out!

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    2. This was sometime ago.

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  3. Wow. How thoroughly punishing. peter peter

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  4. Wonderful story in so many ways. Is this a signal that someone is ready to push the envelope again with David at Mistress Violet's?
    Larry

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  5. Perhaps David needs to experience this for real? Looks like his last m/m experience wasn't enough.

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  6. Exactly my fantasy, hope you can do this to me and cuck my wife too.

    For me I’d want encouragement to take his load in my throat or ass.

    Also I’d crave a humiliating encouraged self facial as the ladies prod me to take yet more cum while Im upside down and pegged

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    1. Much underutilized resource, a gang of girls!

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  7. The application (like the others) produces a text without surprises as if everything was already written in advance (like in the Lego game, the basic brick determines everything possible later).
    Humor and cruelty have no place in this production.
    What remains is the accumulation of scenes.
    As for the Sims 4 you can zoom infinitely because there is nothing behind the characters
    ex-jerry

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    1. Yes, there is a worry that writing becomes banal... but most porn written by humans is banal as well, we like it more for the scenes...

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    2. You are of course wrong. What we like is the style, including in pornographic literature.
      ex-jerry

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  8. An alternative epilogue
    David leaves Steve and Rachel downstairs and returns to the pool, swimsuit in hand. Julie allows him to put it back on, and then go wash...
    David returns, buttocks hidden and face cleaned. He recovers a little when he sees Steve who had remained in the showers with Rachel, appear. Steve walks forward, hitting his left palm with a bath brush.
    Panicked without even knowing precisely why, David jumps up and runs away towards the bottom of the pool. Steve's deep voice ring out
    “David” “Come here! » David stops.
    Steve “I’m warning you David, if I have to go get you, you’re going to regret it.”
    David, terrified, stops and returns to Steve. When he arrives in front of him, Steve says: “Pin your hands to your sides."
    Steve gives David a good slap in the face.
    Steve: “Did I permit you to put your trunks back on? »
    David “No, but my wife allowed me.”
    Steve "But I'm not your wife! David, so you're going to start by taking off these trunks, and since you seem to have already forgotten the first spanking I gave you,I think a second one is necessary."
    Steve turns to Julie “What do you think? »
    She nods, impressed by the raw authority that emanates from Steve.
    David, taking off his swimsuit again, turns a pleading look towards his wife and begins to cry.
    Odeparture

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    1. Hasn't poor david suffered enough already?

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    2. Absolutely not.
      When a perv boy like David receives a spanking from a man, he must always receive a second spanking to find it truly detestable.
      Odeparture

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  9. Wow! What a story! Soon enough, our pool will be open and I will be trying not to get caught ogling a tall blonde not named Rachel who will be there frequently during the summer. I definitely need to be spanked for my ogling and all my thoughts about her. Hopefully before the pool opens someone not named Steve will be giving me a spanking. I won’t have to worry about my tiny dick becoming erect, because he has indicated he wants me to wear my cage, along with bra and panties, so I will be completely focused on his pleasure, which will cum after my spanking. My mouth and bottom hole will be used until he is satisfied. Both holes for the first time by a man. I wonder if he will send me home wearing a facial? And yes, I think there will be photos to share with somebody named Julie. I am desperate for all this to come to fruition soon! - david

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  10. I dearly hope that, while you are enjoying your M/M fantasies, the real David is keeping your holes and bare bottom well used and trained.

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  11. Our niece is staying with us and I got into trouble/spanking for “ogling” her wearing a tiny bikini at the beach. Since then I suspect a cock tease set up as her clothing has become ever briefer around the house. My wife periodically pulls me aside for an erection test and if I’m not soft I get a spanking later. I think they’re colluding to get me spanked. Not fair!!

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    1. Not fair? You are living one of my biggest fantasies. - david

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    2. Must be nice to be cock-teased by your pretty niece!

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    3. I wish there was a way for her to know what she does to me…david

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  12. Wouldn’t it be delightful to see David forced to show and then swallow another man’s cum? He owes you after all. How many times have you had to deal with his sticky mess? Bet it’s a lot. Fairs fair.

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  13. So in a future FMM scene David plays himself and gets spanked hard by Steve for ogling.
    Then you, as Rachel, are fucked in front of David to lube Steve’s cock and simultaneously receive your own spanking for either providing too little or too much lube (more likely).
    Then David is fucked and gets a facial.
    Captured it?

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  14. I think Ms Violet plays Julie, Matt plays Steve, Julie plays Rachel and david plays himself?

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  15. Hi Julie! I'm an old geezer who is very much in love with you. My wife is gone, so I'm free to let my heart wander as it wants. And it wants you. Girl, I would spank your pretty behind until it was red and sore. Then I would give you oral pleasure until you begged for mercy. Only then would I enter you and release my seed into you. Of course to finish I would carry you to bed and kiss you goodnight. An old goat can dream, can't he?

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  16. Excellent. Can I propose an alternative scene? At the lake, Julie wore a tiny thong bikini that barely covered her smooth, obviously shaved pussy. Her teenage nephews were quite discombobulated. As a result, when the youngsters were in bed, the adult members of the family (led by daddy) intervened. Her tiny bikini was lowered and her bottom spanked. Instead of “bum hole” the family chanted “pussy, pussy, pussy” as everything was on display. The next day a chastened Julie wore an appropriate, conservative one piece costume. A slut was converted. MrD.

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  17. Thought David was going get real life of fashion otk Spankings & padding bu you the female lifegusrd & other female wife/ Gf Hibby bad bot David looking ar

    If i gi poop or beach i am going try get spanked spanki g from a Julie & Rachel

    Mike Pahula
    Madison ohio

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  18. Julie, write some real romantic spanking stories. Please. Would begging help? Thanks.

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  19. Update on teasing niece colluding with my wife to provide grounds for spanking me. It’s becoming more overt.
    Niece was modelling her recent online summer clothing purchases in front of my wife and I. Lots of skin exposed. No bra.
    Straight after my wife said, “Are you erect?! Really? That’s a spanking and maybe I should let my niece watch so she knows she’ll be safe in this house.”
    Later that night niece says, “I heard about your control problem uncle. Sounds like it might be a painful lesson for you.”
    Nervous.

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  20. I’ve recently been having some fun with the gab.ai that you had previously posted about. I managed to get it to come up with some interesting stories and scenes.

    I’ve also been giving the image generator a whirl. It takes some patience and finding the right character, but you can get some decent erotic images.

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  21. Curious how much of this was Grok and how much was written by you..as well as what prompts work well for spanking stories in Grok.

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  22. In fantasy things are so erotic, in real life perhaps not so much.

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