I've been making gang-busters progress on the new book! Past 200 pages already. I thought I'd do a chapter-by-chapter synopsis for you (the numbers at the end are the current page numbers).
David's Spankings
A young man's journey into domestic discipline at the hands of his aunt and her submissive lesbian love-partner
by Julie Delmar
Preface -- 3
The whole book is written in David's voice. The preface is a little one page teaser that leaps into the future with him freshly spanked, nose in the corner.
Chapter 1: A New Living Arrangement -- 4
David introduces himself. We learn he is a bit of a nerd and is a spanking fetishist that he keeps very secret. He is going to university in the big city, and his Mom would like for him to live with his Aunty Sue and her wife Chrissie (the aunt is a professor at the same university).
Chapter 2: A Conversation with Auntie Sue -- 10
Aunty Sue and Aunt Chrissie drive up north to visit over Easter. Aunty Sue takes David aside and confidentially tells him that she is in a domestic discipline arrangement with Chrissie who is a spanking fetishist. David conceals his own fetish, worried he might not be welcome, but is now super-excited to go.
Chapter 3: Moving In -- 20
David's family drives him down and moves him in. The space he is living in is described. There's a little bit of spanking talk at the end to ease us into it.
Chapter 4: Housewife -- 23
Aunt Chrissie explains to David that she will take care of all of the cooking and housework, trad wife style, including keeping David's room tidy and organized and doing his bed sheets and laundry. Chrissie admits that if she doesn't do her job properly, Aunty Sue will spank her.
Chrissie is friendly with David. She is closer his age than she is to Sue. She teases him about girls and guesses his sexual experience level. She teases him that if he makes a mess in his sheets, she'll know and be very cross with him.
Chrissie makes pancake breakfast Sunday morning and wakes David up for it. She warned him night before that if he wasn't up in time, she'll pounce on him and shake him awake! She does this, in a long T-shirt and panties, which results in an erection for David that she teases him about.
As Chrissie is cleaning up after breakfast, still in her T-shirt and panties, and is bending over at the dishwasher, Aunty Sue asks David if he's checking out her wife's ass. She teases him a bit and tells him to ignore her, she dresses like that deliberately to get a rise. Chrissie sticks out her tongue, flips up her long T-shirt to expose her panty-clad butt, and shakes it at the pair. Aunty Sue says "do that again and it will get slapped." Chrissie goes right up to her and does it again, in her face. She gets a single very hard hand whack to her ass that makes her jump and yelp and rub her butt. David is enthralled.
That night David hears their first lovemaking session through the thin walls.
Chapter 5: Soiled Sheets -- 34
Aunt Chrissie's maybe tongue-in-cheek warning about soiled sheets circulates in his mind. He's constantly thinking about sexy Chrissie. He gives in and masturbates to thoughts of her. He deliberately ejaculates onto his sheets and leaves them for Chrissie to clean up.
Chrissie is furious with him. He tries to shrug it off as an accident and a natural function. If it's so natural, do it right now, in front of me, she says. She threatens him with telling Sue and his Mom even. He capitulates and humiliatingly jerks off in front of her. She stops him before completion, telling him he's been punished enough.
Chapter 6: Aunt Chrissie is Spanked -- 41
Chrissie receives her first punishment spanking for failing to pick up Sue's dry cleaning for an important professional engagement (TV interview) she has. She is severely scolded in front of David. She is sent to their room to await her spanking. David hears the whole thing. Later Chrissie is brought out in T-shirt and panties and made to face the living room corner. Sue considers, and drops her panties to her ankles.
Chapter 7: Cold Cream and Hot Hands -- 53
Right after Chrissie's hour-long cornertime, Sue has to leave for an evening engagement. Chrissie is disappointed she can't apply some cold cream as she usually does. Sue tosses the cold cream to David to apply to Chirssie, telling him to keep her panties on and watch where his hands go. Chrissie has other ideas.
After she enjoys her cold cream massage, Chrissie provides David with some hand relief, revealing that in her younger days she worked in a naughty massage parlour.
Chapter 8: Caught Snooping -- 69
The ladies are out and David takes the opportunity to snoop in their bedroom.
Later on, Sue notices some things are out of place and confronts David. Under her withering questioning, he admits it.
Sue questions whether or not to send David home. He would have to pull out of university. He begs for Sue to handle it by spanking him, as she does Chrissie. He admits to being a spanking fetishist himself, which feels like an additional betrayal of trust. He says he's been doing poorly at school and can use the ongoing guidance of a domestic discipline arrangement.
Sue calls Chrissie who is out and asks her opinion. She is all for it. Sue then calls David's mother, much to his chagrin, and clears the arrangement with her, It emerges that both Sue and David's Mom were strapped by their Daddy growing up. Mom admits that she sexualized her spankings from Daddy, but that did not lessen their effectiveness in keeping her on the straight and narrow, and approves the arrangement.
Chapter 9: David's First Spanking -- 84
David gets his first ever spanking, from Aunty Sue, for betraying her trust. It's done in the living room, naked, and is of the 'all over' variety (see First Research Spanking). Afterwards he is stood in the corner in timeout. Chrissie arrives home and is not surprised to see him there. Chrissie volunteers to return the earlier favour and apply the cold cream to him. Aunty Sue allows it.
Chrissie notices David is hardening. She asks in a whisper if she should take care of it. David says yes, expecting it to be their secret once again. Chrissie calls out to Aunty Sue and asks permission. Sue enters and gives her permission, observing Chrissie's quick, clinical style (so unlike the first!), and approving of it. They ruin it at the end and watch him spurt all over himself,
Chrissie felt violated by David as well, but has not yet had a chance to punish him. Suspecting he masturbated after violating her panty drawer, she asks permission to punish him by making him swallow his own sperm. Aunty Sue allows it.
Chapter 10: Spankings Become Routine -- 105
David describes his new routine and the many spankings he is now subject to, mostly revolving around keeping right on top of his schoolwork (no video games, no porn surfing). Some are recounted.
After a living room spanking, and feeling he is looking a bit unsightly with all his body hair as he stands naked, Chrissie asks Sue if she can shave it all off him, from ankles to armpits. Yes, she may. He's completely clipped and shaved and brought back out, red as a lobster, for Sue to inspect. After that, David must maintain his hairless state under threat of the paddle. He uses as many razors for his legs as does Chrissie. After multiple paddlings for it, he learns to beg Chrissie to shave his ass crack for him to avoid any more.
He also describes how the women have decided that due to all the pent-up sexual energy in the house around the two spanking fetishists, it is best if David's balls are kept well-emptied to allow him to focus on schoolwork. His various ball emptying routines, which are always supervised by the women, if not handled by them, is described.
Chapter 11: A Visit From Mom -- 115
David's Mom comes for a visit. She brings with her Daddy's old handheld strap. She punishes David in front of Sue and Chrissie to indicate how displeased she was with his snooping.
Chapter 12: Mom Is Spanked? -- 126
Both David and Chrissie are out. David comes home irst and hears the familiar sounds of Chrissie being spanked in their bedroom. She supposes his Mom went out for a walk to afford them some privacy for this spanking. But then, Chrissie walks in next. Who is being spanked???
David's Mom walks out, disheveled, red-faced, and flustered, and scurries away like a mouse while Sue is seen grinning and holding the hairbrush. They had some old family business that needed taking care of.
Sue and Mom reminisce in detail about their childhood strappings.
Chapter 13: Aunt Chrissie Spanked in Front of Me -- 130
Up to now, all of Chrissie's spankings have been behind closed doors. However, this time Chrissie screws up and forgets to drop off David's final English Lit essay. The penalty is a 25% deduction. Fortunately, Aunty Sue knows the professor and tells her what happened. They agree Chrissie will drop it off next morning and apologize in person. Chrissie is then given a severe and very humiliating spanking in front of David for the first time. It includes the 'all over' option, plus the 'fronts and tops' option. At the end of her spanking, Chrissie is made to straddle Sue's tweed-panted thigh and is humiliatingly spanked to orgasm in front of David who gets to clearly see her pussy spasming in orgasm with a slight squirting on Aunty Sue's thigh.
Sue makes Chrissie apologize to David for forgetting his assignment. Sue is not satisfied with her verbal apology, and orders Chrissie to take David to their bedroom and, behind closed doors, give him an 'oral' apology.
Chapter 14: Caned for Playing with Myself -- 154
David is slipping back into bad habits. He must maintain a work diary for Aunty Sue's inspection. He inflates the hours he spends working and salvages the extra time for video games and porn. Aunty Sue is suspicious of the amount of time it takes him to complete some simple tasks, and spanks him for his slowness. Still suspicious, she barges in on him when he least expects it and catches him masturbating to schoolgirl spanking and fucking porn with his dick in his hand.
She is furious over his deception and lying. She, for the first time, masturbates him roughly into the kitchen sink with dish soap and yellow rubber gloves. Balls emptied, she uses the Delrin cane to give him his worst beating yet. All of this is in front of Chrissie. Afterwards he is tucked and a belt is put around his thighs for humbled, balls-out timeout. Meanwhile Sue prepares a 'punishment mat' for him to sit on after timeout to write lines.
After timeout, Chrissie remarks that he looks like he has a pussy, tucked like that. She asks permission from Sue to draw a pussy on him in black and red marker. They get the idea to further feminize him in schoolgirl skirt, bra, and blouse. Sue sticks a dildo in the middle of her timeout chair and they make David first suck on it as his backside is lubed, and then sit on it, all the way down to the prickly doormat Sue installed on the high kitchen stool, balls still tucked.
He writes lines in that state. Chrissie realized the markers she used were intended for packaging and were indelible. Despite twice-daily scrubbings, David keeps his pussy for two whole weeks.
Chapter 15: Aunt Chrissie Spanked in Public -- 172
After Chrissie's first spanking in front of David, Sue decides all her spankings will be like that. Several are briefly described.
Chrissie has her hot friend Meghan over. They get a bit drunk and Chrissie neglects dinner prep. Chrissie is given her spanking in front of Meghan and David.
Afterwards, Sue suggests Meghan take her to the bedroom and apply the cold cream. She gives tacit approval for hanky-panky this once, as Sue cannot keep up with Chrissie's sex drive.
Chapter 16: A Revealing Visit -- 179
When Chrissie came to apologize to David's English Lt professor, Beverly, Beverly suspected there was
more going on than met the eye, and made Chrissie admit she was spanked
by Sue. She subsequently phoned Sue and more context was given. She also suspected some of what was going on with David, given his remarkable turnaround in her class, but this was not confirmed.
After final marks are tallied in English Lit, Sue invites Beverly, with her Genders Studies professor wife Joyce, over for dinner.
There the beans are all spilled, and the full extent of both arrangements is revealed and discussed at length.
Chapter 17: An Embarrassing Punishment -- 190
Before dinner, Sue wishes to check that David's final math assignment was done. It was not! Sue says she will deal with this after the ladies have left. Beverly and Joyce both express disappointment, and say they would love to see her methods in action. They get quite involved and egg on his punishment.
Chapter 18: A Dinnertime Figging -- 206
Beverly, knowing English Literature, brings up "figging". So happens Chrissie has a ginger root and they carve it and insert it into David's bum for the duration of dinner as an experiment.
After the ginger root has worn off, David is revealed to be sporting a massive erection despite himself. He is sent alone to his room to "take care of it" prior to dessert. The women tease him afterwards about his now shrunken penis which they take pains to inspect.
When the ginger root is taken out, David is revealed to have a messy bum. He is wiped in front of all the ladies. Chrissie points out that lately she has been seeing skid-marks in his undies as well. The women confer and decide David should be sentenced to potty inspection after every wipe for the next three days. If after that the skid mark situation does not improve, they decide he should be back in diapers for a week doing all his business in them, and they can redo his potty training from scratch thereafter.
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So that's how far I've gotten so far. I have a few more vignettes in mind to bring it to upwards of 300 pages.
- An "outing" party for Chrissie where she outs herself as a spanking fetishist to all her friends. I imagine she's wearing a sexy maid sex store costume for the event, everyone else dressed normally.
- Chrissie volunteers to get David laid by his choice of her hot friends. Along the way, David reveals he is somewhat male homophobic. Chrissie puts all the plans on hold until David experiences gay sex first, with her helping. The lure of losing his virginity to a series of Chrissie's hot friends is too much to pass up, and he reluctantly agrees to the gay sex threesome with one of Chrissie's best gay friends, Lance. When David appears reluctant in the moment, Chrissie tells Lance that David is a spanking fetishist also. Lance takes him in hand and spanks him into submission as Chrissie watches, loving every moment of it. Afterwards, David does indeed get the payoff.
- Maybe a dreaded skid-mark makes a reappearance, and he is put in diapers for a week. Beverly is asked to babysit during this time and given spanking rights over him.
- David meets and begins dating a young lady his age from school. After a date, she drives him back home. They park in the driveway necking. She knows he has a curfew, but he tells her it's no big deal and they continue kissing. When they get onto the porch, they kiss one last time. The door flies open and it's an angy Aunty Sue with the strap in her hand. She scolds David for missing curfew. She scolds the girl as well, as she was told of it. The girl protests that David had said "it was no big deal", and now she is angry at him as well. They go into the house and David is given the strap as his wide-eyed date looks on. Later on, she reveals how turned on she was seeing him strapped. They begin playing boy-on-the-bottom spanking games. Sue and Chrissie are amused.
- The girlfriend is integrated into the household, and becomes Sue's little protege. She expresses an interest in knowing more about strap-on play. The girl spanks David in the living room, makes him give head to her borrowed strap-on dildo, and then fucks him in the ass as Aunty Sue and Aunt Chrissie look on, giving suggestions.
That's all I have for now. Hoping some additional inspiration will come to mind to round things out, although what I have is likely more than enough. Have you guys any suggestions that might fit in with my little psycho-drama?
As I go I've been revising and revising and revising, making sure every part stays consistent with every other part, and shortening things up where I can.
I'm aiming for a big story arc that I'm sure will emerge. Maybe an Epilogue. David has graduated with top marks. He marries his girlfriend and they live spank-happily ever after?
What I've described I know is pretty "over the top". I'm taking pains to ease things in and make each progression logical to help suspend disbelief (you all want to come along for the ride anyways, right?). I find a focus on key details really helps, with zero inconsistencies. Is it too over-the-top you think? Ought I to tone it down? Not sure if I can. My brain gets controlled by my pussy! Help!
Magnificent Julie, perhaps they could go visit a friend of Sue's in a lake cabin (like yours Julie), her friend is also a lesbo with a Philippino partner. The four ladies could spank him and other things.
ReplyDeleteThis could involve a traditional Philippino spanking with the "tsinelas" like the research link you put under a previous post about your maid.
Perhaps her friend could be Turkish and give David falaqa and Chrissie remembers her Japanese grandmother who one beat the back of legs (calves area) with a thin cane. In short it could be an international spanking cultures Forum.
DeleteI really need more experience with these types of implements to write credibly about them. Any volunteers? ;-)
DeleteSure, lots of guys would line up to get a punishment from you Julie.
DeleteYou tried the Philippino way on David already Julie.
DeleteWhat is the Philippino way?
DeleteSlipper spanking, essentially.
DeleteIt could fit in a domestic spanking
DeleteI think a quick slipper spanking from Chrissie after David walks in tracking mud over the carpets she just so laboriously cleaned.
DeleteThis will be a scene within a chapter or you will elaborate further to make it a full chapter, I am obsessed by the idea of Sue giving a slipper spanking to both of them afterwards for Chrissie because of spanking David without permission and for David because she thinks he needs more punishment for soiling the carpet
DeleteSure! I want to keep each chapter short to keep the action moving along. I think that whole scenario fits well into a tight little chapter. Thank you!
DeleteThis sounds amazing! Really really good. Not over the top. I want more filth in my spanking porn, so long as it flows naturally, and I know you can do that from your previous venture.
ReplyDeleteInteresting that it's a switch book. Not too many like that.
Anxiously awaiting the release. (Pun)
Great storyline. Lots of possibilities. I don't know which blog it was, but I seem to recall you once taking your husband to a jeans store? And some interaction or hoped for interaction with the salesgirls? Maybe Chrissie can take him shopping like that and interact with the salesgirls in the change rooms as David is changing? Work a spanking in there somehow?
ReplyDeleteYes! I had actually forgotten that. It would be great to resurrect in this context. Thanks!
DeleteOnly permitted out in public in a chastity device and panties when he is with the two girls? A little shopping trip and some public humiliation with his cage and panties hidden under his boring boy clothes?
DeleteI'm going the other direction with forced daily masturbation rather than chastity. But maybe on that shopping trip, Chrissie not wanting to be embarrassed by Davids erection out in public? But maybe it sort of backfires as he has so much genital pain from straining against the cage that she embarrassed him anyways and it must be removed in the ladies room?
DeleteHmmm. Chastity belt for Chrissie? When left unsupervised with David? Sue having the only key to the elaborate, stainless steel belt?
DeleteI've already established that Sue is quite tolerant of Chrissie's libido being expressed outside of the marriage boundaries, she thinks its funny.
DeleteGreat.....publish...publish.
ReplyDeleteIncrease your book price,you are putting the effort and we are willing to pay.
Another milestone for your Noble literature prize .
I have been slowly chewing on your first book since it was published. You address SO many kinks and I have only a few. I stopped for a while when you did diapers. I see that is in this one also. I have been forewarned.
ReplyDeleteHa ha, yes, but you are remarkably kinkless for a spanko, Bogey!
DeleteLooks amazing! Can't wait to read it! And I don't think this looks over the top at all. It's fiction after all so it's not an issue if it stretch a bit the limits of what is likely to happen in real life.
ReplyDeleteI think a forced bi scene as you suggested is very hot. I'm a sub straight guy and I've been spanked by both women and men. While being spanked by a woman is always enjoyable (pretty much no matter how severe, I'm a huge masochist when it comes to being spanked by a woman I'm attracted to), being spanked by a man is quite different and not nearly as enjoyable for me, that way it's much more akin to a real punishment for me. I think a scene where david would get spanked and fucked by a man would be great and really teach David a good lesson about being somewhat homophobic.
A babysitter scene would be very hot too. Perhaps you could fit a good mouth soaping in there too ;)
Have you dropped the idea of having a scene with a strict trainer spanking both David and Chrissie into shape? I guess this could be hard to fit in the book without seeming rushed.
And finally I also do think that David meeting a naturally dominant and kinky girlfriend to wrap up the story would be great.
Again, can't wait to read the book. It truly looks amazing!
The "forced" bi scene is definitely in.
DeleteI'll get a mouth soaping in there somehow. Maybe a dual one!
Thinking maybe Lance the gay dude could be a trainer also. Observe that both David and Chrissie could benefit from a few sessions...
Girlfriend thing I am very excited to write!
Julie’s Magnum Opus. I hope it becomes for you everything you imagined it would. You’re stirring up memories and fantasies of a lifetime. Wishing I could rewind and give this david, who didn’t know what he wanted or what was available, what your David is living. I would have been so easily led. - david
ReplyDeleteI know! I keep asking my husband if it is realistic that he would go along with this or with that at that age. Is there nothing an 18-year-old spanko boy would not do for a pretty woman???
DeletePerhaps there could be a trip to the nude beach (similar to the one you did during your Spanish vacation.
ReplyDeleteYes, he could embarrass them by becoming erect. A little ice along with a cock cage Sue brought along worried about this should fix it.
DeleteAnd punished with a quick spanking as well as you did with David there
DeleteOddly enough, I'm questioning whether the thing i actually did with David on the beach would be "believable" in a novel :-)
DeleteIt would because you didn't bring a special spanking implement to the beach but simply used your sandal like many mother would do to their naughty boys
DeleteThe people around me knew it was a kink thing despite our acting our parts, and were kind enough to tolerate and enjoy. Could easily have gone another way!
DeleteA question Julie, I am confused about my perception of different ladies, a lady I feel a urge to have sex with, another lady I feel an urge to go over her knee for a spanking from her.
ReplyDeleteInteresting. My husband says he would go over the knee of any woman who told him to, but he would be more selective about sex (except if he's told to have sex, in which case he would feel he had to).
Delete"2000 mules" attracted many criticisms, and several points have been discussed in your blog, except for one minor point: alleged ballot harvesters would have worn gloves because they didn't want to leave their fingerprints on the ballots
ReplyDeleteFirst, cold weather and Covid-19 are far more likely reasons for glove-wearing, then, in the movie, it is told that voters in Georgia started wearing gloves to prevent their fingerprints from touching the ballot after 2 women in Yuma Arizona were indicted for alleged ballot harvesting in that state’s primary election. But, according to AP, the Arizona indictment didn't mention anything about fingerprints (?).
The AP on the other hand documented several examples of Covid-cautious voters wearing latex gloves to vote.
It is therefore likely that these gloves were not necessarily worn to hide the prints.
All this to bring us to a scene you could maybe insert into your book where David would be forced by his aunt to deliver ballots to drop boxes wearing the yellow gloves she used for him, with a throbbing red ass under his light trouser, after he was given two hard spanking, the first one because he refused to do ballot stuffing for Trump and the republicans, the second because he asked to be paid to do that. Maybe a way to introduce some politics in the book with a sub nephew with left-wing views...What do you think?
You have to see the videos, it was not cold weather. They were surgical blue latex gloves taken off and discarded immediately after handling the ballots. But sure, maybe.
DeleteTrying to keep politics completely OUT of the book! Except I do have Sue and Chrissie and their friends being very woke about male toxicity and LGBT issues, as it provides for some great situations!
I can see David messing badly with his girlfriend, perhaps thinking she isn't going to punish him too severely only for her to ask aunt Sue for help to give an epic punishment to David so he knows to never fuck up like that ever again.
ReplyDeleteYes! Thank you for that inspiration!
DeleteFun. My book is being "crowd-sourced" I think is the word!
DeleteForce him to wear bras and panties prior to getting the strapon. I have kept my hubby in women's undergarments for years. He gets a "trip to the woodshed" at least once a month for a session with the paddle and strap whether he needs it or not without fail. He complies with my wishes regarding undergarments and is careful to select tops that do not reveal his bra. He also knows his bare bottom will have hell to pay if I ever catch him braless. He has been subject to a strict pegging regime for years as well and is ONLY allowed to ejaculate with my stiff rubber strapon cock inside him. He has a very small clitty and we both agreed early on in our relationship that he needs to be the "girl" in the bedroom.
ReplyDeleteSome males love being treated as the girl in a relationship. I'm sure yours loves it! My husband likes to vacation there every now and then.
DeleteHe tries to protest when I call him my "Sissy Hubby" but his erections give him away when I fasten his bra or appear in front of him wearing black lingerie and my strapon. We both enjoy it, he just doesn't like to admit it. I think he truly dislikes having a "monthly cycle" to match mine, but that is NOT optional. If I let him get away with only wearing pads instead of tampons he might change his attitude, but that's not happening. I have tried rectal wearing of tampons myself to see what it's like for him and only found them mildly annoying, which is what was intended anyway.
DeleteOh yes, part of the fun for him (for you both) is his "objecting" yet 'being made to".
DeleteWow, that's quite the spanking epic! I see no reason to tone it down, it is all grounded in reality after all.
ReplyDeleteYou certainly have a lot of research to do ;)
"Reality"
DeleteBut great, thank you for that encouragement!
You should add a strict babysitter scene. Maybe auntie sue and Chrissie have a trip they have to go one and can’t take David. But they also can’t trust him home alone so they hire a babysitter who knows all about David and his spankings. (Not speaking from experience or anything 😉) but that can be great fun.
ReplyDelete-Grace Marie
Yes! Babysitter incoming!
DeleteDamn Julie I've already masterbated twice to the cliff notes I can't wait. Hope my wife doesn't catch me jacking off when I get your book lol.
ReplyDeleteDan
If it's twice to those notes, it'll be, what 50 to the book? You'll be all drained of cum!
DeleteAs an earlier comment mentioned- there are so many kinks included in this; your books go places that the vast majority of the many spanking books on Amazon don’t. I enjoyed your last book immensely but sort of fast forwarded through the diaper stuff and will likely fast forward through the diaper stuff and forced bi parts of this one.
ReplyDeleteHaving said that, one I guess ancillary kink that you do really well, and that I enjoy, is adding a touch of family/taboo dynamics to spanking scenes- not outright incest, just a pinch of that flavor as you’re cooking up the stories.
Obviously the whole set up is involving David’s aunt, so there’s some of that already. But what if you expanded the Mom’s visit?
Maybe David peeks and sees his mom getting spanked? Maybe he likes what he sees but is ashamed of himself for it? Maybe mom notices a reaction when she punishes David? That would be humiliating for him if she notices and points it out. Maybe a follow up or visit home?
Just throwing some ideas out there. If you go by the plethora of porn titles involving stepmoms, the family/taboo kink is pretty broadly appealing and it is to me.
There's definitely an erection in front of Mom already. David is mortified with embarrassment! I was wondering how to get Mom spanked in front of David, but none of my ideas felt right...
DeleteSomething of this sort… ?
DeleteDavid committed, in the presence of his mother, something a little serious (he hit another student for example) No one else attended the scene and it is word against word. His mother gives false testimony in front of the university administration to protect her son, but it turns out that a video has been shot that shows what really happened. At the instigation of Sue, contacted by the headmistress, it is agreed that David's mother will be punished in front of her son in the principal's office so that he understands that she has set a very bad example. Six of the best by the headmistress and an "all over" spanking by Sue - if she refuses, the police will be called. David, at first contrite, is quickly embarrassed with a growing erection... After the spanking, her mother is made to blow her own son till he cums (don't miss the eyes contact)
j.stern
Good plot line! Won't work in this book because of the ages and situations. I think I'll keep Mom unspanked to give the book more a femdom feeling (other than poor Chrissie)
DeletePerhaps an outdoor episode, where David would be humiliated in front of a group of cyclists, hunters or long-distance runners in the countryside or swimmers in the swimming pool. And it always ends with a spanking (but this time, very public!)
ReplyDeleteI love the great outdoors that way. But more realistic if they think they're in private when out of the blue a large group of cyclists appear!
DeleteI love the "oral" apology part. Perhaps if Chrissie is naughty enough she might get threatened to have to submit to a "getting fucked" apology. Or even a "anal" apology is she's especially bad. Now that would be humiliating for her... and enjoyable for David I imagine ;)
ReplyDeleteThe anal apology. Love it! Am very familiar with them, having had to give out more than a few of those as a spanked wife.
DeleteI agree you have encompassed a great number of kinks here. I for one love the diaper punishment idea. I hope it involves a humiliating trip to the store much like you did with David IRL.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, I've ramped up the humiliation to all new levels in his store visit, while keeping it plausible, I think.
DeleteDo the book preparations involve Sue giving David a test slipper spanking like you did, I imagine Sue trying all her shoes closet on David's ass till she finds her perfect spanking slipper as you did Julie for example based on the advise of a Philippino friend / maid
ReplyDeleteNope. That research has already been done!
DeleteBetter she takes him to a small shoeshop owned by a Philippino lady to buy herself a beach slipper/sandal where she talks about having a naughty boy, the lady recommends some "effective" slippers that asks to try on David's ass. The lady offers them the store room.
ReplyDeletePerhaps even the lady could teach Sue how to swing a slipper so that it hurts
Would need a beach vacation for that, but set in the school year
DeleteHappy to do a pre-publication review for typos etc.
ReplyDeleteW&E
Thank you!
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ReplyDeleteAn afternoon scene at the pool could be fun.
Chrissie could take David, completely shaved, to a naturist swimming pool like Bare Oaks Family Naturist Park(sign at the entrance: " spankings forbidden to under 18.
Lance could take David to a gay pool like Summerville Olympic Pool.
(Sign: sexual acts only in cabins, spanking around the pool accepted, if disciplinary)
David would have to wear this kind of swimsuit :
https://www.v2mshop.com/?product_id=167320394_37
and the young man would be highly coveted.
sissystrapon
Sounds like good short stories, but won't fit the plot arc.
Deleteyou should do a spanking book signing tour where we can but book get spanked spanking from you or get spank you
ReplyDeletebet you become famous spanking author for sure. give you more publicity but only your decision
i would honor a sign book and you sign my butt with spanking
I would be first in line especially if she wears beach outfit 👙 🩴, spankers get a clear target, and spankees get a spanking, feet lovers get a nice view of her feet and a sting from her beach sandal.
DeleteThat would be fun!
DeleteNo grounding? *pout* lol
ReplyDeletePlenty of room for a good grounding yet!
DeleteI'm not really into any kind of gay sex. All I can say is I won't buy this if the sex is forced in any way. Other than that, it sounds pretty hot.
ReplyDeleteEverything totally "of age" and everything completely consensual. I actually make a big point of it in the dialog. Of course the consent is a blanket one to be subject to the lifestyle (with a safeword), patterned after my own. So David does not "want" to be spanked when he earns a spanking, but he respects his consensual arrangement and does not safeword out.
DeleteI find many guys totally NOT into gay sex become very turned on by the humiliation of a "reluctant gay" scene. In the book, David agrees to gay sex in exchange for Chrissie lining him up with a bunch of super pretty, sweet and willing girl partners. What a dilemma, eh? Would you hold your nose and suck a real cock if it meant you could get amazing sex from 3 cute and willing young ladies any way you want?
"Would you hold your nose..." Believe it or not, the answer is no. Now COULD I under ANY circumstances? Someone's life in danger, maybe my own? Perhaps. But the visceral sexual feeling I get is one of pure disgust and wanting to vomit, while my penis stays limper than noodle. I think it's true that women are generally more apt to be 'bisexual' than men. And contra the ridiculous idea that sexuality is malleable , I believe it is pretty much 100 percent pure biology, straight or gay. And since I've never been a man to insist I need blowjobs, I'm not even a hypocrite about this subject. Always have preferred vaginal sex to both the alternatives. Now, if you want a reaction from me and that is more like your fantasies and something I was and am (under certain circumstances)willing to do it's the letting another man spank me part. As I said to you once before I let it happen to me once (actually twice but I only told you about the first and worst time) and I felt literally emasculated though later on I looked at it as being brave to push a boundary. I get nothing sexual from it, you are more likely to cry if its a guy (triple humiliating to me compared to if a woman does it for some reason and its more humiliating than normal if another guy is just watching me get spanked by a woman unless I know he gets it too) and then you have to add in the normal amount of macho posturing (that even older guys like me now do to small extent, its really big when you are younger ) or if you had an abusive dad or most of your bullies were male or something. So there. Maybe that will help you with your book as far as the Male/Male spanking part. In my case, I was shy and clueless in many ways the first time it happened which made it all the more memorable. Like it said, it made some female friends happy which was what mattered to me at the time :)
DeleteBy the way, I want to emphasize my reactions are my own. Sure I have plenty of anecdotal evidence that some of my reactions to gay sex are shared by at least some of my fellow heterosexual male friends and acquaintances, but I realize there are bi and gay men and there are other straight men who, while having no real interest in gay sex aren't actively repulsed by it, and would find your bargain acceptable.
DeleteI totally respect any and all sexual preferences, including an extreme male heterosexuality. My husband is like that as well and won't cater to my long standing desire of being the top in a forced bi scene. I once accused him in the blog of being "homophobic" for having that attitude, and instead got my attitude adjusted across his knee! His extreme heterosexuality turns me on, I must admit. But a guy who allows himself to be coerced into a forced bi scene also turns me on.
DeleteI can absolutely understand the extreme humiliation for a strongly heterosexual guy to be spanked to tears across another man's knee. That extreme humiliation is what turns me on, as I have a humiliation fetish that goes along with my spanking fetish.
Yeah, but probably my most embarrassing fetish (given that I'm a switch and can be a 'daddy' too) is my 'mean spanking mommy' one. There's a little bit of ABDL stuff that I don't actively like or fantasize about that I'd be willing to go along with too (and that whole scene ESP in front of another man would be the most humiliating I could think of) . I don't think I'll add anything to that, I've said enough. I have to get the guts to try to experience it once before I die though. Anyway, good luck with the book!
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DeleteA man goes off on a woman, swearing at her, insulting her, and so on at a private pool party. A larger well-muscled traditional man nearby, who does not know this jerk, decides to put him in his place. He takes him across his knee, strips his swimsuit right off him, and severely hand spanks him. The man's ass is bright red, going to purple, he is kicking his legs, crying real tears, begging, and apologizing desperately. He's stood up, nude, to face the woman he insulted and must abjectly apologize with his tiny limp cock out for all to see. He's placed with his nose against the wall, his bare spanked ass on display, until the party is over. He's told that if his nose leaves the wall, he'll be belt-whipped. He is forced to stand there for the next three hours.
The above was a follow on to my earlier. Our responses crossed in the night.
DeleteIn response to your latest comment, Clarence, in the book, Aunty Sue feels obliged to get her sister's (David's Mom's) blessing for the domestic discipline arrangement with David. When Mom comes to visit, she brings the strap Sue and her Daddy used on his girls. Even though she's never spanked him as a kid, given his new arrangement she takes David across her knee and straps him severely in front of Sue and Chrissie to express her displeasure at David snooping in their room.
Does that qualify as a "mean spanking mommy" scene in your mind?
"Does that..." Sort of. Though someone who has never spanked him before probably should find a reason to give him another before she goes back maybe because she was hurt by him or felt he was owed one for a few things , some of which go a few years back. Or maybe he gets a very busted butt to show him in no uncertain terms it wasn't a one time thing and she CAN and WILL. But more to the point, the overall scenario has mom or mommy substitute (extra humiliation if wife, friend, or whoever has him CALL her mommy when being spanked ) deciding a strict spanking regime is now in order, maybe to make up for lost time. Sort of like Sue is already doing. Normally at first, there's a few for 'past dues' (maybe this also makes son or hubby ..the bottom) feel forgiven or just to reinforce the new roles. This kind of fictional scenerio esp works with teen boys who are 'out of control' either due to resenting or not respecting a new Stepmom or because their mother never spanked them and now wishes she did. Or for mostly the same reasons (lack of respect or someone who has no sense of consequence) when it's wife spanking her husband, esp if he 'pushed her around' before. The point is someone is taking over the disciplinary chores of the mom or maybe the mom herself is taking them on. And as extra ways to 'put him in the right mindset' diapers or other babyish or little kid things and rituals (maybe she bathes or feeds him, this stuff doesn't necessarily include scat or anything gross) are employed which, if she wants to humiliate him more (and in my fantasy she always DOES) she either lets others participate in or at least in on the knowledge of. Not necessarily full on 'sissification' stuff or some real intense adult baby stuff...but imagine how easy it is to humiliate a teen boy or a 'macho' adult man with even the wearing of a panty or a diaper ? One more thing:"Mean" means some anger at least at first, and some desire to overspank (meaning more intense or frequent or both) at first either due to some latent sadism OR just pure revenge (He needs/deserves this , "I" need and desire this)
DeleteOne other thing: Not to tell you how to write (do as you want) but if I could suggest at least ONE 'spanky dance' by David and maybe some cruel teasing or taunting at least once when he cries? I know it's VERY hypocritical esp since most females do not take spankings as well as most males (yes, exceptions...I could tell you about this one LITERAL 'pain slut') but if his spanker (esp if its his mom or aunt or girlfriend) makes it known she wants tears or doesn't care that's even better.This stuff should never get to feeling 'humdrum' to him and I want to see it affect him emotionally in maybe both good and bad ways.
DeleteAs for your male - male spanking thing, it's realistic I guess. And as 'hotly' described as any scenerio can be. My only change would be to have the woman he aggrieved spank him as well, either right before everyone goes, or RIGHT after the man (so even if she'd normally be unable to really hurt him she can in this instance) spanked him. Cornertime and all that would be the same.
DeleteYes, I like to add extra emotional context for the spankee. And definitely the super embarrassing spanky dance, hands clutching butt, feet dancing, penis flopping, as the women look on and laugh.
DeleteAnd yes, good extra. The man makes him crawl across the woman's knee and submit to her spanking, someone passing her a bbq tool to better make her point,
Well, Julie, I already talked (wrote) to you about your fantasy regarding your hubby and (nothing WRONG with it) read your blog post and the follow up or ups ( I think there were 2 for a total of 3 that dealt that with this issue and your punishment concerning it), that's why I'm not really commenting about it right now. I know you remember me, if at all, as your Baltimore MAGA guy but I have occasionally ventured out of the political posts into your more Kinky posts. I've actually been reading your blog since 2013 or 2014, mostly silent. Heck, the only reasons I usually speak up in your political posts are 3: They are mostly interesting and even sometimes informative,even though we share some of the same sources such as Viva Frei. Secondly,I hate to see you getting 'dogpiled' by zillions of "Progressives" many of whom don't even have the guts to use a name or a blog handle (yes, my real first name IS Clarence), because you often only get one or two others besides myself to comment 'on your side', and lastly, because there are so few Kink adjacent blogs with political posts where it is safe for someone like me TO post. Either I'd quickly be banned or doxxed (Vanessa tried both with me) or both.
DeleteAnyway, thanks for letting me defend myself against that other commenter in the other thread, and thanks for your replies today which have made today very interesting.
My pleasure, Clarence. You're a thinker and a kinkster. My kind of guy!
DeleteThe same "adventure", more or less, happened to my husband a few years ago. It was also a private pool party. I always like to tell this story when we are invited or receive new acquaintances. I think that served as a lesson to him and that he deserved what happened.
DeleteIt has left a deep feeling of shame in him.
What is most humiliating for some men is that a woman tells them this story, not only without compassion but with a smirk of satisfaction.
DeleteFor real? Cool.
DeleteRegarding the poolside spanking scene you described, it reminds me quite pleasantly of a bit of erotica i read online years ago that was an early doorway to realizing i was bisexual: in which the narrator entered a mixed-gender sauna/hot tub and through a series of events was de-Speedoed and spanked by a man with a flip-flop sandal in front of two sexy women the man accused him of leering at. The end result was him ending up belly-down on the slick floor, each powerful spank sending him sliding on the smooth wet tiles and being dragged back again for another spank, until the friction of his forced sliding back and forth stimulated his awkwardly erect penis past the point of no return, and as he helplessly ejaculated in front of the man and two girls he left a slimy, telltale snail trail of semen behind him.
DeleteWow! What an awesome story!
DeleteI hope my other comments show up. I made an expanded one on the Mean Mommy thing, but alas did not save it and I'd hate to retype. Maybe its in spam?
ReplyDeleteLooked for your comments, but found nothing unpublished... :-(
DeleteI for one am very much looking to read some forced bi action. I view it as the ultimate punishment for an heterosexual submissive male. It's something I fantasize about and while I'm not sure I would actually dare to try to make that fantasy happen in real life, it sure is fun to read a fictionnal scene about it. And well, how bad can it really be if you'll get to have sex with 3 beautiful and willing girls after? ;)
ReplyDeleteIt is a matter of tastes Julie, personally it is not my cup of tea.
DeleteI would take a strapon from a lady not not a guy.
Why not make it that he gets funked by a Shemale instead.
DeleteImagine David get in a mood for sex with lovely girl and keeps fondling her breasts and ass, then in bed he is shocked to be faced by a real cock not even a strapon.
Imagine David after being funked by a man to get the three girls, the girls turnout to be shemales.
DeleteGirls and boys are enough for this book.
DeleteThank you for the sneak preview. This is thoroughly hot and hits a lot of my kink buttons. The anal and underwear inspection part did come a little as a surprise, but not in a bad way. I can only imagine if I was in poor David’s shoes. Due to some “issues” down there it can be hard for me to keep my bum clean 100% of the time. Which is embarrassing as I’m a 29 year old guy not some 70 year old. I’d be in serious trouble if I were in that poor boys shoes and not just for that.
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Well David has no excuses for poor hygiene back there, except his mother did not believe in any form of discipline for children so he was never properly potty trained. Aunty Sue and Aunt Chrissie (and a few droppers by) will correct that.
DeleteThere could be also on the spot spanking if he farts
DeleteYeah, I used to get spanked with a slipper on my filthy ass by my aunt whenever I farted while in her house, she said she can't spank a filthy ass with her hand and as she won't wait till a wooden spoon or brush is fetched, she just took her slipper and proceeded to spank me.
DeleteThis taught me to hold it till I go fart in the toilet and to go to the toilet whenever I feel the need to and not hold it to avoid accidental farts.
Ouch, those spankings focused on the bum hole in case of soiled panties or farting are very painful, she used to do them with the heel part of her old fashioned mule or scholls sandals.
DeleteFart fetish?
DeleteNo, slipper spanking fetish.
DeleteI did it once and my aunt was furious, she warned me several times but eventually got mad and spanked me with her slipper.
I liked it, so kept provoking her whenever I could, but when she used the heel part of those heavy hard soled slippers, I stopped as I enjoy common spanking on the ass cheeks.
For me, the first anonymous, it was genuine discipline spanking and I didn't enjoy it as I am into light hand spanking not harsh spanking with implements.
Deletewould you ever out David or make him tell his friends & famliy that youi spank him or he get Spankings from you
ReplyDeleteDo you think Guys should confess to friends that They Get Spankings from wife or Girlfriends when they misbehave
like when they explain why have go home early or has chore to do that must be done or when make plans or other reason
No, not unless he asked me to, and maybe not even then. But friends of mine and strangers are a different question.
DeleteI have found out that women I don't know give me such a look when my wife and I are out after I've been spanked. Don't know why, but my wife told me women know. As mentioned a few of her best friends know, my mother-in-law I know have told some of her friends. My wife also reminds me, Men think they are in charge, Women let them think that. Men are just little boys and wives must be a Mommy just to remind them who is in charge. Jack
DeleteChrissie could give David a swat on his ass whenever she sees him and while he his in the shower she could finger him as well.
ReplyDeleteChrissie is very mischevious!
DeleteGreat, then Sue could punish her for that
DeleteI send most of the day in the mall during summer to enjoy ladies feet thanks to the fashion of wearing flip flops, slides and open toes sandals.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy watching feet as ladies as unlike the streets, ladies wear them encouraged by the clean mall floors. My favourite is near a beauty salon with ladies coming out wearing those disposable slippers after getting pedicure.
My wife caught me collecting disposable salon slippers thrown by ladies in the car park, I got an immediate punishment in the car with her converse sneakers that hurt a lot, then at home I got 30 hard whacks with the 3/4 inch thick 6 inch wide and 20 inch long wooden paddle that made my ass like raw hamburger.
I get this one laying one the bed so that there is nice padding to receive this heavy paddle, unlike other implements that I have to bend over.
Be careful to not freak out any women as you practice your kink!
DeleteGot a paddling from my wife before bed for being sleepy despite her wearing a baby doll.
ReplyDeleteShe went to the kitchen to retrieve the wooden bread board and roasted my ass with 24 zingers with this sturdy paddle.
I can't sit comfortably this morning.
Did you "perform" after your paddling?
Deletei absolutely adore the sound of this novel and I’m extremely excited to read the final version. The family relationships, as always, are an intensely erotic element to me and i love “Mommy Domme” arrangements. i love that David’s aunts have a lesbian marriage and that David is placed into a position where he’s humiliated and dominated by his submissive Aunt! i’ve always been aroused by the thought of being dommed by another woman’s sub, it intensifies the feeling of being REALLY submissive to me. That said i love that David and Aunt Chrissy get to switch sometimes, too.
ReplyDeleteOne of the parts i found most arousing was when David was forced to wear a schoolgirl uniform, especially as it happened after being caught masturbating to schoolgirl-themed porn. Forced crossdressing, emasculation, and feminization are some of my favorite aspects of humiliation play, so i was thrilled by its inclusion. Some aspects i would love to see, if it made sense for your narrative:
* Aunt Sue makes David wear panties under his clothes at all times - perhaps with the words “Property of Aunt Sue” across the front or the seat - and tells him that he will be subjected to random “panty checks” by his Aunts. If he’s ever found to be wearing boy undies (or going commando), no matter where he is when the panty inspection takes place, he will get his pants yanked down and receive a bare-bottomed spanking. Aunt Chrissy is probably quite enthusiastic about the idea, and might even seize an opportune moment to threaten to expose David’s panty-wearing to someone he’s crushing on or wants to impress…
* Perhaps another instance with Lance in which David is dressed in women’s lingerie?
* i’m very much in favor of David’s girlfriend at the end becoming initiated into his Aunts’ routines with him, and becoming another member of the family who will help enforce his spankings and panty punishments. i would love for David to be subjected to more extended periods of enforced crossdressing by his girlfriend, Aunts, and Mother, but of course i know this isn’t the focus of these stories - it’s certainly where i would lead things, though!
* Lastly, i would love to see at least one scene in which David’s Mother assumed the responsibility for masturbating him to orgasm, perhaps in a situation where his Aunts were unavailable and time restraints required her to take matters into her own hands. The intense humiliation he would feel would only be made the stronger from his growing realization that his experiences with Aunt Sue have trained him to harden and ejaculate uncontrollably for his own Mother. And perhaps he would want to keep this hidden from his crush for as long as possible, only for his shame to be exposed to her under deeply emasculating circumstances…
I'm thinking of working a bit of forced cross-dressing in...
DeleteI love the idea of Mom masturbating son. Perhaps David is not allowed to until bedtime, and it is midday and he's horribly distracted by his big boner which his Mom notices after she has to spank him. I think an 18 yo boy would ejaculate even if (especially if?) it was Mommy doing it.
I would purchase this just for the Lance, Chrissy, David scene alone. Looking forward to reading!
ReplyDeleteGreat!
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