Book Progress!

I've been making gang-busters progress on the new book! Past 200 pages already. I thought I'd do a chapter-by-chapter synopsis for you (the numbers at the end are the current page numbers).

David's Spankings

A young man's journey into domestic discipline at the hands of his aunt and her submissive lesbian love-partner

by Julie Delmar

Preface -- 3

The whole book is written in David's voice. The preface is a little one page teaser that leaps into the future with him freshly spanked, nose in the corner.

Chapter 1: A New Living Arrangement -- 4

David introduces himself. We learn he is a bit of a nerd and is a spanking fetishist that he keeps very secret. He is going to university in the big city, and his Mom would like for him to live with his Aunty Sue and her wife Chrissie (the aunt is a professor at the same university).

Chapter 2: A Conversation with Auntie Sue -- 10

Aunty Sue and Aunt Chrissie drive up north to visit over Easter. Aunty Sue takes David aside and confidentially tells him that she is in a domestic discipline arrangement with Chrissie who is a spanking fetishist. David conceals his own fetish, worried he might not be welcome, but is now super-excited to go.

Chapter 3: Moving In -- 20

David's family drives him down and moves him in. The space he is living in is described. There's a little bit of spanking talk at the end to ease us into it.

Chapter 4: Housewife -- 23

Aunt Chrissie explains to David that she will take care of all of the cooking and housework, trad wife style, including keeping David's room tidy and organized and doing his bed sheets and laundry. Chrissie admits that if she doesn't do her job properly, Aunty Sue will spank her.

Chrissie is friendly with David. She is closer his age than she is to Sue. She teases him about girls and guesses his sexual experience level. She teases him that if he makes a mess in his sheets, she'll know and be very cross with him.

Chrissie makes pancake breakfast Sunday morning and wakes David up for it. She warned him night before that if he wasn't up in time, she'll pounce on him and shake him awake! She does this, in a long T-shirt and panties, which results in an erection for David that she teases him about.

As Chrissie is cleaning up after breakfast, still in her T-shirt and panties, and is bending over at the dishwasher, Aunty Sue asks David if he's checking out her wife's ass. She teases him a bit and tells him to ignore her, she dresses like that deliberately to get a rise. Chrissie sticks out her tongue, flips up her long T-shirt to expose her panty-clad butt, and shakes it at the pair. Aunty Sue says "do that again and it will get slapped." Chrissie goes right up to her and does it again, in her face. She gets a single very hard hand whack to her ass that makes her jump and yelp and rub her butt. David is enthralled.

That night David hears their first lovemaking session through the thin walls.

Chapter 5: Soiled Sheets -- 34

Aunt Chrissie's maybe tongue-in-cheek warning about soiled sheets circulates in his mind. He's constantly thinking about sexy Chrissie. He gives in and masturbates to thoughts of her. He deliberately ejaculates onto his sheets and leaves them for Chrissie to clean up.

Chrissie is furious with him. He tries to shrug it off as an accident and a natural function. If it's so natural, do it right now, in front of me, she says. She threatens him with telling Sue and his Mom even. He capitulates and humiliatingly jerks off in front of her. She stops him before completion, telling him he's been punished enough.

Chapter 6: Aunt Chrissie is Spanked -- 41

Chrissie receives her first punishment spanking for failing to pick up Sue's dry cleaning for an important professional engagement (TV interview) she has. She is severely scolded in front of David. She is sent to their room to await her spanking. David hears the whole thing. Later Chrissie is brought out in T-shirt and panties and made to face the living room corner. Sue considers, and drops her panties to her ankles.

Chapter 7: Cold Cream and Hot Hands -- 53

Right after Chrissie's hour-long cornertime, Sue has to leave for an evening engagement. Chrissie is disappointed she can't apply some cold cream as she usually does. Sue tosses the cold cream to David to apply to Chirssie, telling him to keep her panties on and watch where his hands go. Chrissie has other ideas.

After she enjoys her cold cream massage, Chrissie provides David with some hand relief, revealing that in her younger days she worked in a naughty massage parlour.

Chapter 8: Caught Snooping -- 69

The ladies are out and David takes the opportunity to snoop in their bedroom.

Later on, Sue notices some things are out of place and confronts David. Under her withering questioning, he admits it.

Sue questions whether or not to send David home. He would have to pull out of university. He begs for Sue to handle it by spanking him, as she does Chrissie. He admits to being a spanking fetishist himself, which feels like an additional betrayal of trust. He says he's been doing poorly at school and can use the ongoing guidance of a domestic discipline arrangement.

Sue calls Chrissie who is out and asks her opinion. She is all for it. Sue then calls David's mother, much to his chagrin, and clears the arrangement with her, It emerges that both Sue and David's Mom were strapped by their Daddy growing up. Mom admits that she sexualized her spankings from Daddy, but that did not lessen their effectiveness in keeping her on the straight and narrow, and approves the arrangement.

Chapter 9: David's First Spanking -- 84

David gets his first ever spanking, from Aunty Sue, for betraying her trust. It's done in the living room, naked, and is of the 'all over' variety (see First Research Spanking). Afterwards he is stood in the corner in timeout. Chrissie arrives home and is not surprised to see him there. Chrissie volunteers to return the earlier favour and apply the cold cream to him. Aunty Sue allows it.

Chrissie notices David is hardening. She asks in a whisper if she should take care of it. David says yes, expecting it to be their secret once again. Chrissie calls out to Aunty Sue and asks permission. Sue enters and gives her permission, observing Chrissie's quick, clinical style (so unlike the first!), and approving of it. They ruin it at the end and watch him spurt all over himself,

Chrissie felt violated by David as well, but has not yet had a chance to punish him. Suspecting he masturbated after violating her panty drawer, she asks permission to punish him by making him swallow his own sperm. Aunty Sue allows it.

Chapter 10: Spankings Become Routine -- 105

David describes his new routine and the many spankings he is now subject to, mostly revolving around keeping right on top of his schoolwork (no video games, no porn surfing). Some are recounted.

After a living room spanking, and feeling he is looking a bit unsightly with all his body hair as he stands naked, Chrissie asks Sue if she can shave it all off him, from ankles to armpits. Yes, she may. He's completely clipped and shaved and brought back out, red as a lobster, for Sue to inspect. After that, David must maintain his hairless state under threat of the paddle. He uses as many razors for his legs as does Chrissie. After multiple paddlings for it, he learns to beg Chrissie to shave his ass crack for him to avoid any more.

He also describes how the women have decided that due to all the pent-up sexual energy in the house around the two spanking fetishists, it is best if David's balls are kept well-emptied to allow him to focus on schoolwork. His various ball emptying routines, which are always supervised by the women, if not handled by them, is described.

Chapter 11: A Visit From Mom -- 115

David's Mom comes for a visit. She brings with her Daddy's old handheld strap. She punishes David in front of Sue and Chrissie to indicate how displeased she was with his snooping.

Chapter 12: Mom Is Spanked? -- 126

Both David and Chrissie are out. David comes home irst and hears the familiar sounds of Chrissie being spanked in their bedroom. She supposes his Mom went out for a walk to afford them some privacy for this spanking. But then, Chrissie walks in next. Who is being spanked???

David's Mom walks out, disheveled, red-faced, and flustered, and scurries away like a mouse while Sue is seen grinning and holding the hairbrush. They had some old family business that needed taking care of.

Sue and Mom reminisce in detail about their childhood strappings.

Chapter 13: Aunt Chrissie Spanked in Front of Me -- 130

Up to now, all of Chrissie's spankings have been behind closed doors. However, this time Chrissie screws up and forgets to drop off David's final English Lit essay. The penalty is a 25% deduction. Fortunately, Aunty Sue knows the professor and tells her what happened.  They agree Chrissie will drop it off next morning and apologize in person. Chrissie is then given a severe and very humiliating spanking in front of David for the first time. It includes the 'all over' option, plus the 'fronts and tops' option. At the end of her spanking, Chrissie is made to straddle Sue's tweed-panted thigh and is humiliatingly spanked to orgasm in front of David who gets to clearly see her pussy spasming in orgasm with a slight squirting on Aunty Sue's thigh.

Sue makes Chrissie apologize to David for forgetting his assignment. Sue is not satisfied with her verbal apology, and orders Chrissie to take David to their bedroom and, behind closed doors, give him an 'oral' apology.

Chapter 14: Caned for Playing with Myself -- 154

David is slipping back into bad habits. He must maintain a work diary for Aunty Sue's inspection. He inflates the hours he spends working and salvages the extra time for video games and porn. Aunty Sue is suspicious of the amount of time it takes him to complete some simple tasks, and spanks him for his slowness. Still suspicious, she barges in on him when he least expects it and catches him masturbating to schoolgirl spanking and fucking porn with his dick in his hand.

She is furious over his deception and lying. She, for the first time, masturbates him roughly into the kitchen sink with dish soap and yellow rubber gloves. Balls emptied, she uses the Delrin cane to give him his worst beating yet. All of this is in front of Chrissie. Afterwards he is tucked and a belt is put around his thighs for humbled, balls-out timeout. Meanwhile Sue prepares a 'punishment mat' for him to sit on after timeout to write lines.

After timeout, Chrissie remarks that he looks like he has a pussy, tucked like that. She asks permission from Sue to draw a pussy on him in black and red marker. They get the idea to further feminize him in schoolgirl skirt, bra, and blouse. Sue sticks a dildo in the middle of her timeout chair and they make David first suck on it as his backside is lubed, and then sit on it, all the way down to the prickly doormat Sue installed on the high kitchen stool, balls still tucked.

He writes lines in that state. Chrissie realized the markers she used were intended for packaging and were indelible. Despite twice-daily scrubbings, David keeps his pussy for two whole weeks.

Chapter 15: Aunt Chrissie Spanked in Public -- 172

After Chrissie's first spanking in front of David, Sue decides all her spankings will be like that. Several are briefly described.

Chrissie has her hot friend Meghan over. They get a bit drunk and Chrissie neglects dinner prep. Chrissie is given her spanking in front of Meghan and David.

Afterwards, Sue suggests Meghan take her to the bedroom and apply the cold cream. She gives tacit approval for hanky-panky this once, as Sue cannot keep up with Chrissie's sex drive.

Chapter 16: A Revealing Visit -- 179

When Chrissie came to apologize to David's English Lt professor, Beverly, Beverly suspected there was more going on than met the eye, and made Chrissie admit she was spanked by Sue. She subsequently phoned Sue and more context was given. She also suspected some of what was going on with David, given his remarkable turnaround in her class, but this was not confirmed.

After final marks are tallied in English Lit, Sue invites Beverly, with her Genders Studies professor wife Joyce, over for dinner.

There the beans are all spilled, and the full extent of both arrangements is revealed and discussed at length.

Chapter 17: An Embarrassing Punishment -- 190

Before dinner, Sue wishes to check that David's final math assignment was done. It was not! Sue says she will deal with this after the ladies have left. Beverly and Joyce both express disappointment, and say they would love to see her methods in action. They get quite involved and egg on his punishment.

Chapter 18: A Dinnertime Figging -- 206

Beverly, knowing English Literature, brings up "figging". So happens Chrissie has a ginger root and they carve it and insert it into David's bum for the duration of dinner as an experiment.

After the ginger root has worn off, David is revealed to be sporting a massive erection despite himself. He is sent alone to his room to "take care of it" prior to dessert. The women tease him afterwards about his now shrunken penis which they take pains to inspect.

When the ginger root is taken out, David is revealed to have a messy bum. He is wiped in front of all the ladies. Chrissie points out that lately she has been seeing skid-marks in his undies as well. The women confer and decide David should be sentenced to potty inspection after every wipe for the next three days. If after that the skid mark situation does not improve, they decide he should be back in diapers for a week doing all his business in them, and they can redo his potty training from scratch thereafter.

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So that's how far I've gotten so far. I have a few more vignettes in mind to bring it to upwards of 300 pages.

1. An "outing" party for Chrissie where she outs herself as a spanking fetishist to all her friends. I imagine she's wearing a sexy maid sex store costume for the event, everyone else dressed normally.
   
2. Chrissie volunteers to get David laid by his choice of her hot friends. Along the way, David reveals he is somewhat male homophobic. Chrissie puts all the plans on hold until David experiences gay sex first, with her helping. The lure of losing his virginity to a series of Chrissie's hot friends is too much to pass up, and he reluctantly agrees to the gay sex threesome with one of Chrissie's best gay friends, Lance. When David appears reluctant in the moment, Chrissie tells Lance that David is a spanking fetishist also. Lance takes him in hand and spanks him into submission as Chrissie watches, loving every moment of it. Afterwards, David does indeed get the payoff.
   
3. Maybe a dreaded skid-mark makes a reappearance, and he is put in diapers for a week. Beverly is asked to babysit during this time and given spanking rights over him.
4. David meets and begins dating a  young lady his age from school. After a date, she drives him back home. They park in the driveway necking. She knows he has a curfew, but he tells her it's no big deal and they continue kissing. When they get onto the porch, they kiss one last time. The door flies open and it's an angy Aunty Sue with the strap in her hand. She scolds David for missing curfew. She scolds the girl as well, as she was told of it. The girl protests that David had said "it was no big deal", and now she is angry at him as well. They go into the house and David is given the strap as his wide-eyed date looks on. Later on, she reveals how turned on she was seeing him strapped. They begin playing boy-on-the-bottom spanking games. Sue and Chrissie are amused.
5. The girlfriend is integrated into the household, and becomes Sue's little protege. She expresses an interest in knowing more about strap-on play. The girl spanks David in the living room, makes him give head to her borrowed strap-on dildo, and then fucks him in the ass as Aunty Sue and Aunt Chrissie look on, giving suggestions.
   

 

That's all I have for now. Hoping some additional inspiration will come to mind to round things out, although what I have is likely more than enough. Have you guys any suggestions that might fit in with my little psycho-drama?

As I go I've been revising and revising and revising, making sure every part stays consistent with every other part, and shortening things up where I can.

I'm aiming for a big story arc that I'm sure will emerge. Maybe an Epilogue. David has graduated with top marks. He marries his girlfriend and they live spank-happily ever after?

What I've described I know is pretty "over the top". I'm taking pains to ease things in and make each progression logical to help suspend disbelief (you all want to come along for the ride anyways, right?). I find a focus on key details really helps, with zero inconsistencies. Is it too over-the-top you think? Ought I to tone it down? Not sure if I can. My brain gets controlled by my pussy! Help!