First Draft Completed!

 Yay! Finished the complete first draft for my latest book:

As I first described in New Book three months ago, after doing all those dreadful ChatGPT stories (see Spanking Stories by ChatGPT and Me), I was really wanting to spread my creative wings in the short story format, and show Chatty how it's done. There's still a lot of revising to do, but I really think I nailed it!

The book comprises seven short stories in the F/M genre. It's currently around 40,000 words which is only about half the length of my previous novels. It will take 6 months in total to get it out. I think I'll keep it around this length so I can get it out quicker rather than making it longer and make everybody wait. With ChatGPT I wrote 140,000 pretty ok near-publication words in a week (!). Quality takes time, I guess. That extra little je ne sais quoi requires a kinky human being.

For this book, the themes of my short stories were all my original ideas. I sort of "workshopped" all of them with ChatGPT, and then completely discarded everything it output and re-wrote them entirely from scratch myself. As a little "homage" to ChatGPT, I start each story with a simple-minded banal paragraph, just like ChatGPT would have written, but then fly off into my usual flights of embarrassing fancy. So much better! You're going to want to pay your $5 for this collection, I guarantee!

I'm planning a volume two along the same lines, but with M/F themes.

This time I experimented with the "omniscient narrator" model of writing, and write in the present tense. All my other books were written as recollections by the main character. I was therefore limited to write only what made sense for the main character to know, and all in past tense. Very similar to my blog writing, in fact, where I am confined to recollections and giving you exclusively my take on things. I think that's why I defaulted to that style in my books.

It was hard switching, because I kept accidentally going back to past tense, and oftentimes it did not come naturally to me to make use of the omniscience in my story telling, but I think I really fixed that along the way. A lot of my revising will be exorcising all past tense out. I think the present tense brings you along in the moment better. The reader feels that things are unfolding for the first time with them as witness. It feels more exciting and moves the story along faster. As well, with the omniscient narrator, I can say what's going on inside everybody's head, and even jump forward and say what the outcome will be. It also feels a lot more voyeuristic, as if you were a fly on the wall hoping nobody will notice you as you witness these scenes play out. I think you'll love this style for spanking stories!

All of the short stories feature a man being punished for some misdeed. So they are all pretty Domestic Discipline oriented, as is my fetish. In all but one there are witnesses, reflecting my humiliation fetish. Finally, all but two feature intra-family dynamics involving fathers, daughters, sisters-in-laws, and nieces, the intra-family thing being another fantasy of mine. 

The reason I think these are so much better than the ChatGPT versions is that Chatty is not kinky and does not jill herself off to her own stories. I write a bit, then sit back and fantasize, and then write what pops into my head. Afterwards I re-read it, and if it's not turning me on personally, I discard it or rewrite it until it does. As I revise, I imagine myself in the shoes of the characters, and can accurately describe how they feel based on my own experiences, top and bottom, private and public. I can also imagine an extra little nuance or dialog that would make me blush with shame, and add it in. I had an orgasm to every single story in my book. That's my quality guarantee!

Here are the working titles and synopses of the stories, with some added notes.

Story 1: A Difficult Husband

Mary has enough of her husband John's verbal abuse and misbehavior. She comes from a spanking family and knows exactly what she has to do to cure it, though she never expected to have to do it to her husband! With the help of her two sisters, Sarah and Beth, and Beth's twin teenage daughters, Gabby and Becca, she cures his misbehavior once and for all.

Ah! Sisters-in-law and nieces. How embarrassing for poor John! The flashback to the sisters' brother getting it from their mom is one of the best parts, IMO.

The story starts with a serious hairbrush spanking between Mary and John only, and then timeout. It's the first time in his life John has been spanked, and it's a doozy. I try to really capture authentic dialog between the couple: what would a man in John's position say and do. At a certain point, he learns obedience is his best policy.

Midway through timeout, Mary's sister drops by. Oh my! She's been encouraging Mary to take John in hand for years, and so is very pleased to see his red ass in the corner. I try hard to capture the nuances of John's embarrassment at having his sister-in-law see him like this, and know he's now subject to childish spanking discipline.

Mary, however, is not done with John yet. She still needs to punish him for saying "well fuck you to!" to her after she told him he behaves like a child prior to his spanking. The sisters brainstorm what to with him. Mouth soaping seems too mild. The sister comes up with a great idea. Didn't Mary receive a joke gift at her wedding shower of a strap-on dildo? Fuck you? No, fuck you!

As a test of John's post-fucking promise to be obedient, they decide to invite their other sister over with her two teenage girls. High time the girls learned it was no longer a man's world.

I put myself in the place of the girls, and imagined how I would react at that age. I would think it was hilarious: Poor Uncle John! The girls also cannot help but laugh at their Uncle's diminutive penis size. More like a child's really.

As the ultimate test of John's obedience, Mary asks the girls to take their Uncle John upstairs and give him a very thorough bath. The girls cannot resist "pulling the tail on the donkey" and their Uncle embarrasses himself right into one of the girls' hands, much to their evil delight!

Embarrassment galore in this one, with a lot of "me" in all the female characters.

Story 2: Speeder Punished

A working man is caught driving recklessly. Instead of jail, the two lady cops agree to give him a belt whipping with their vintage police belt. They send him home with a very sore rear end, and confiscate his pants. His wife is none too pleased about his reckless behavior, and adds to his punishment.

The synopsis pretty much says it all. I try to make the unfolding of the events as realistic as possible to help the reader suspend their disbelief. Yeah, you will think, that could actually happen.

While both cops practice BDSM from on top in their civilian lives, they get off on the idea of subjecting a deserving hunk to a serious dose of CP for real.

When he returns to his wife and tells her all, she is glad the cops took him in hand rather that throwing him in jail. She also decides the cops have the right idea, and begins spanking her husband herself.

When the cops later drop by their house to return his confiscated pants and briefs, his wife invites them in to help her really drive the lesson home.

Story 3: Athletic Daughter Spanks Father

A College-age daughter, an athlete, lives alone with her verbally abusive father. One day, she decides to turn the tables on him.

Oh yeah! Daddy-daughter stuff! My fave. You know me. I'd be equally excited to be on either end of that belt.

This story features just the two of them. No witnesses other than us, the readers. The daughter, who is an athlete, forces her father across her lap. After his first spanking, he's very apologetic and emotional.

However, old habits die hard. When he repeats his bad behaviour, his daughter feels she has no choice but to strip him nude, clear the living room area, and then holding his hand, use his own belt to whip him in a circle around her. He makes many, many painful laps before she feels assured he will not repeat his bad behaviour in future.

Great story for the very taboo grown Daughter  / Daddy kink!

Story 4: Wooden Spoon Punishment

A husband misbehaves and is made to serve timeout in an unusual manner before his spanking: with the wooden spoon he will be spanked with lodged up his bum! Unfortunately for him, his sister happens to drop by midway through his embarrassing timeout.

Went back to the well on this one with a sister walking in during timeout. But let's call it instead a "running theme" of the book.

As I mention in the synopsis, his wife gets creative with his pre-spanking timeout. What a time for his sister, her sister-in-law, to drop by for a visit.

Again, I really try to capture the extreme embarrassment he feels being seen in such a compromising position. Something rendered ten times worse when she snaps a pic and posts it to the Family channel on WhatsApp! Sisters! Am I right?

She stays and livestreams the subsequent spanking to the family group. The messages back from parents, sisters, brothers, and nieces are just too good and need to be read out loud.

Story 5: A Bed-Wetting Husband

A racist husband has a medical issue that causes bedwetting. He refuses to address it, living in denial. His wife has had enough, and together with an occupational therapist, who happens to be a gorgeous young black girl, they set him to rights in a humbling manner.

Went a bit risqué with this one.  I recently met a stunning young black lady (jet black - former teen model) who is now an occupational therapist. Meeting her inspired me to write this story.

The husband wets the bed and is in denial. At her wit's end, the wife calls in the occupational therapist. They try it the easy way first, but when that doesn't work, they do it the hard way!

The husband is rude to the occupational therapist, and reveals himself to have racist thoughts toward her. Using a stout antique strap passed down to her, and with the wife's complete blessing, she exacts reparations from his formerly lily white ass, establishing herself firmly as his Mistress when in her presence.

With her newfound control, she diapers him as she would a baby, and casually jerks him off when his thing is too erect to fold down properly into his diaper.

Dangerous territory, I know, but he gets put firmly in his place, and she is clearly the brightest, prettiest, and most assertive of them all.

Story 6: Punished for Masturbation

A stay-at-home husband has been masturbating literally every day and neglecting his housework. When his wife and their niece come home unexpectedly in the middle of the day and catch him "red-handed", they waste no time in correcting his behaviour. He spends the next month in chastity and then receives the shock of his life when he's told his uncaging and subsequent sexual release will be done in the presence of his two sisters-in-law and their three daughters! 

Brought out the niece again. Another "theme" shall we say. This one is in her early twenties, though. How embarrassing to be caught masturbating by your wife with your niece barely able to suppress a laughing fit!

He's punished on the spot, not even allowed to pull up his pants, with the strapping of his lifetime. Immediately afterwards, he's locked into chastity for an entire month. All in front of the niece!

Desperate to be let out, on time if not early, he becomes the ideal house-husband, and even takes an online course to learn how to improve his oral skills in the bedroom.

At the end of his month, despite him having been the model husband, his wife decides he needs a further taking down a peg, so she invites both her sisters and their three daughters to watch his "unlocking ceremony".

The three girls are (of course) excited to see it. As part of his impromptu ceremony, his wife asked her eldest niece, the one who saw him punished initially, to print out some of his favoured porn from his porno websites. It's all F/M spanking, pegging, and cucking material, much to his embarrassment as this is revealed to all the ladies present, young and old.

His wife insists he jack off right there, looking at his porno, under penalty of a further month in lockup. She makes him stop each time he gets close. For the finale, rather than letting him cum the usual way, his wife takes him across her knee, oils her lap and his cock, and has him make a fool of himself as he desperately has to hump her lap as she hand-spanks him. He cannot help himself, so desperate is his body  to ejaculate!

He suffers the ultimate embarrassment, witnessed by all, across his wife's knee. She makes him lick it up immediately after to further humble him.

Throughout, the sisters compare their masturbation policies for their husbands. The girls, whose fathers are being talked about, are all ears!

The sisters recall that their mother had a zero tolerance policy as applied to their Daddy. They recollect the time their Mom discovered a dirty magazine at the back of the closet. She lined her three girls up and had them watch as she strapped her husband mercilessly and then put him against the porch wall to act as an object lesson to the neighbourhood on the evils of pornography and self-abuse.

I love this story! Something for everyone.

 

Story 7: An Extreme Wedgying at the Beach

When a fully clothed man visits a beach and uses his camera in inappropriate ways, the beachgoers strip him to his underpants, give him the wedgying of a lifetime, and then the lifeguard spanks him across her knee before sending him packing.

A short and fun little bon-bon to end the book.

A nerd gets his ass first wedgied, then beat, by all the pretty people at the beach. Intense embarrassment as he gets back a hundred-fold what he tried to do to the women at the beach with his illicit photos.

Not sure when it will be out. Probably sometime around September I'm loving the writing process, though, and the progress made to-date. I think it will become a classic in the F/M genre! 😉

Let me know what you think of my story ideas, and if you'd like to see any particular events added in. I also may consider adding one more story, so let me know if there's any particular theme you'd like to see me do.

Also, let me know your reaction to my black on racist story concept. Okay, or too sensitive and thus too much?