Tuesday, September 29

Third Book Update

Once again, apologies for my relative silence on the blog. Most of my kinky energies remain dedicated to the book, even my kinky personal life is suffering!

I've been reading and revising and revising and revising.  I decided to shorten up the chapters as it made the book flow a lot better. I also removed all sorts of useless words, and any thoughts that really don't advance the plot. So the whole thing is a lot tighter now, and flows well from chapter to chapter. The current chapter count is 69, and the page count is 350, so it's averaging about 5 pages per chapter, which I find to be a nice tight chapter that propels you onto the next. I am currently happy with the flow.

Word count remains at around 80,000. I lost a lot of words in all the editing and cutting process, but then added back in some more scenes to get me back up there again.

In the following I'll refer to the main character as "me". There's so much of me and my life in there, while still being a work of fiction, that I identify as my character.


First 12 chapters are my early life, moving out, meeting David, dating David, us making sure we are compatible lifemates, me getting a marriage proposal and then us preparing for the marriage. There's romance, religion, sexy spankings, sex scenes, my first punishment spanking, some aftercare where David fingers me anally for the first time, and we also meet my Mom and Dad, and David and Daddy exchange joking innuendos about the need to keep me in line.

 

Next 8 chapters are the marriage and the honeymoon. At the marriage I include my "obey" vows and David's younger sister reads a blushy Bible passage, Ephesians 5:22-23:

Wives, submit yourselves to your own husbands as you do to the Lord. For the husband is the head of the wife as Christ is the head of the church, his body, of which he is the Savior. Now as the church submits to Christ, so also wives should submit to their husbands in everything.

There is the tossing of the garter and David has to go real high up my leg to retrieve it, to the hooting and hollering of the crowd. We drive off to a nearby inn for the wedding night. I asked him to give me a spanking before anything else, during which I completed my vows to him:

I pledge to thee, David Delmar, that I agree to be punished when naughty however and whenever you see fit. Thereto I give thee my troth.

After that, David gives me intercourse for the first time in our relationship. I cum hard from his cock in my pussy, experiencing my first ever vaginal orgasm (or at least what I imagine this mythical beast to be, as I have never had one 😢)

The morning after, a young bell boy delivers up our breakfast and I give him a little tease while David is still in the bathroom. David catches me and after the kid leaves he chases me around the room and spanks me amidst much giggling. On the way out of the hotel, David makes me apologize to the bell boy and tell him how I was punished.

We then fly off to our honeymoon in Tahiti. I get waxed so I look more like Daddy's little girl down there, which makes David a little uncomfortable. He takes me to a sex shop on the island and buys me plugs, lubes, and an enema in the drugstore to get me ready. Being a good Christian wannabe wife, I submit to my husband, but beg him to "make me" by whipping me hard first.


Next 10 chapters are after returning from the honeymoon and focus on my conversion to Christianity. I am sent to Sunday School where their plan for me was that I was supposed to assist the lady there as her teaching assistant prior to adult conversion classes beginning in a few months. But because I am a bit insecure and have a chip on my shoulder, there is a misunderstanding when I first get to the room and I storm out imagining I am being sent to Sunday School with the little kids. I swear at the lady on the way out, not giving her a chance to explain at all, and the kids hear my bad word. I send a text to David telling him I WILL NOT be FUCKING humiliated like this, and he can FUCK his FUCKING Church!

David looks into the situation and learns the truth. He comes home and explains it to me. Oh no! What have I done??? David washes my mouth out with soap and punishes me with the hairbrush. I am then forgiven, but will the Church? David goes and makes an arrangement. They say I have the sin of Pride, and I need to be more humble. They are right. They make me read C. S. Lewis, Mere Christianity, the chapter on Pride.

According to Christian teachers, the essential vice, the utmost evil, is Pride. Unchastity, anger, greed, drunkenness, and all that, are mere fleabites in comparison: it was through Pride that the devil became the devil: Pride leads to every other vice: it is the complete anti-God state of mind.

They also say my punishment will be to attend Sunday School, as a pupil, not a teaching assistant, dressed like a child, and obeying all the rules for the children. It is a hard pill to swallow, but I throw myself into making amends. I thought this a clever way (if I do say so myself!) to work in some age regression, which is a genre I enjoy.

I do really, really good at Sunday School and I even start taking on some teacher assistant type duties. But then I screw up and am caught sneaking a peak at social media, hiding my phone behind a picture book. The Sunday School teacher catches me and I have to go visit her after class with my husband. They agree I should be spanked at home. David wondered what happened to the tradition of punishing children at school as well? That has been against the rules for many years now, he is told. He asks if an exception can be made in my case, has me sign a permission note, and they get the approval of the Church for the exception. My palms are punished with the strap, and my bottom is paddled across the seat of my panties. I am then spanked at home as well.

Everything goes well again until an evil little six-year-old boy stabs me in the butt with a sharpened pencil. I lose my temper and give him a big SLAP across his face which sends him reeling. I instantly knew I had fucked up.  I am put in the corner in the classroom. The parents are called out of service and they want to press charges. The Sunday School teacher talks them out of it, but tells them about the special permission and promises them I will be given a very severe leathering across my bare bottom as punishment. As the wife taunts me about my punishment I lose bladder control and pee my panties while standing in the corner!

The teacher is called over and she makes me remove my shoes, socks, and skirt, while making me hold my blouse up high. She cleans up the mess with absorbent pads. I am not the first child to pee themselves in Sunday school and there is a rule for it: back into diapers. I am immediately taken to the changing station by the teacher with the husband and wife in tow. My panties are removed and I am wiped, powdered, and diapered in full view of the couple, then sent back into the classroom to continue my corner time until after class, in diapers, where all the Moms and Dads picking their kids can see.

After class, David arrives accompanied by the Pastor, and I am given a severe strapping across the Sunday School teacher's knee while the couple, the Pastor, and my husband look on.

For the next several weeks, according to the rule, I must attend class in a diaper. David puts me into it when we get ready. The Sunday School teacher changes me into a fresh one after class, checking if they are dry. The aggrieved husband and wife are there to watch the diaper inspection each week, which includes a diaper-position application of the paddle to my bare bottom.

I make it through all of that, but gaining the reputation of the 'spanked young wife' among all the parishioners who treat me like a teenage girl. I am eventually baptized, full immersion, but screw up by wearing a white shift that becomes transparent and clingy when wet. Everybody laughs as I desperately cover!

 

The next 11 chapters consist of a visit from David's younger sister Beatrice. We hear about David's rough family history, and how he wound up the legal guardian of Bea when she was 14 and he was 20. Some of Bea's childhood spankings are explored. It also comes out that even into adulthood, Bea wishes to be held accountable by her big brother until she gets married off to a loving husband willing to practice Christian Domestic Discipline. Bea accumulates a list of wrongdoings and presents it to David. As he is now married to me, my permission was requested and granted for the arrangement to continue. Bea is sentenced to three spankings over the next week. David delivers her first spanking that day. The next spanking is to be given by me, so I can practice for when I eventually have children. I am extremely earnest in wanting to do the best possible job on Bea's spanking and do go a little over the top.

While Bea is visiting I misbehave by surreptitiously snapping a photo of her spanked bottom. This is discovered and Bea, as the aggrieved party, is given leave to punish me. She decides to give me a switching next day. We go off to a woooded public park together and she makes me cut switches in the bushes with my pants off. Afterwards she switches me in a way deliberately designed to inflame the passions of her big brother. Afterwards she says she will retire to her room, put her headphones on, and play loud music while we do whatever comes naturally to a husband and wife in this situation.

Bea's third spanking is for a very big thing, and she gets the belt. It comes out that Bea is a bit bipolar, and beats herself up incessantly over her wrongdoings. the only thing that knocks her out of it is a very severe belt whipping from her brother. After doing this, David is a bit shook up and leaves to collect himself. I stay and comfort Bea, who is now feeling much better, and apply cold cream to her bottom. She scandalously and sluttishly gets herself off as I rub the cream into her bottom. She expounds on her theory that links sexual excitement to spanking. Here's an excerpt from the book.

"Thanks for letting me borrow your husband," Bea said. "I was afraid you wouldn't let me."

"Not a problem. But what's this afterwards things all about? Do you get turned on having your brother spank you?" I asked her.

"Oh yes. He doesn't know, of course. Big dummy," she said. "I mean, that's not why I do it. I do it for everything we talked about. To be held accountable and all that. And sometimes I just go off the deep end. I'm a little bipolar in case you haven't figured it out. Manic depressive. Mostly I'm up, but then sometimes I just crash into a depression, usually at the state of my life, especially after I do something epically stupid. I can't get it out of my head, and I keep cycling back to it OCD style. Only a whipping like this gets me out of it. I know, weird. And nobody has the strength to give me the kind of whipping I need except my brother," she said. "Although you weren't too shabby with the hairbrush the other night," she said.

"Nor you with the switches yesterday," I said.

"Yeah, that was fun whipping another girl for once. And was it worth it? Did I get his engines revving for you in the bedroom after?" she asked.

"Yes," I said, actually blushing.

"I always masturbate after he spanks me. Ever since the very first time when I was fourteen. He thinks I just need time to collect myself."

"My you are a naughty, naughty, little girl" I said, and reached over and spanked her sore butt once.

"Ouch!" she cried out and giggled. "Come on. Don't you find it sexy when he spanks you, even if it is for punishment?"

Interesting question. Like her I was not doing it because of any sexual excitement, but I had to admit that the sexual excitement of being justly punished by my man was an aspect.

"Ok, yes. It's not why I do it, though," I was quick to point out.

"It's never why we do it," Bea said, "but there is that side effect. I think God built us that way. It's like how He made sex fun so you want to make babies? Like that, but only with spanking."

"Go on," I said, intrigued by Bea's "interesting" theology.

"God wants men to lead and women to follow, right? So, he invented spanking to enforce that. I mean, think about it. The butt is about the only spot you can really hit a woman without any lasting harm, right? It's custom made for it. All that muscle and fat and thick skin so there's no damage. But then He put all those nerve endings right there near the surface, so you feel it. And He even made it so that it changes colour depending on how hard your man spanks you, like a gauge sort of thing. Tell me that's all accidental.

"But there's more. Then He also put your pussy and butthole right there, with all those sexy nerve endings, and He made it so good when all the blood flows down there. You literally get horny from getting a spanking."

Bea was on a roll. I was nodding and agreeing with her at all the right places. She kept going, encouraged.

"And He also invented shame, and even made shame a bit sexy for women. In the Garden of Eden, there's Eve running all around naked without a care in the world, and then she made the original sin, and suddenly she's all, 'oooh, don’t look at my tits and pussy, I need a leaf to cover them,' right? But then to have sex, she needs to get naked in front of her man and she's all 'no don’t,' but really wants it?

"For a spanking, you have to bend way over to get at the butt the best and show the man all that you should be covering up, right? And after you've waved all your private parts in the air in front of a man, and you just want to DO IT, you know? Get royally fucked. Please him anyway you can?

"Sure, the spanking hurts, and we dread it at one level, but afterwards there's a warm fuzzy feeling of being loved and forgiven, and a warm sexy feeling after all that blood flows down there. And if you're his wife, let's face it you're getting fucked afterwards and you like that, and you get babies out of it, so bonus. So, despite how much it hurts, you accept your next spanking easier as a result."

"That makes weird sense," I told her. She kept going.

"And it works the other way also. When a wife gets so excited, the husband gets that positive feedback later in the bedroom. Hubby also gets turned on seeing his wife waving that red ass at him and squirming for all she's worth, and basically making her pussy beg for a fucking. And so, your husband doesn’t mind spanking you again to correct your bad behaviour instead of throwing you out of the house and letting you starve.

"It's all God's design, I'm sure of it. Except in my case, because I haven’t found my man yet, I have to settle for diddling myself with my fingers and getting a little sexy massage from my new lesbo sister-in-law."

"Hey!" I said, "I'm not a lesbo!"

"Oh, of course not, my apologies," said Bea giggling, "I'm sure it was just a total accident that you brushed by my pussy lips."

Busted.

"Don't tell anyone!" I told her.

"We pinky swore," she said, "it covers it."

 

The next 11 chapters focus on me telling my family that I am now a spanked wife. After the cat is out of the bag, I do a very thoughtless thing at my Mom and Dad's house, and David gives me a spanking there in my old bedroom. Midway through my spanking, My Mom walks in on me and hands David the big wooden spoon. She has a lot of buried resentment over how I disregarded her advice after I moved out, and the incident today just brought that all to the surface. David used the wooden spoon until Mom was satisfied with the result. Afterwards, both Sue and Daddy came upstairs to look at how red my bum was during corner time.

Sue calls me up later and tells me that Nancy, my younger sister, screwed up in school just like I had in first year. As a result of my example, they decided that they should never have stopped spanking me, so they decide to enforce spanking discipline on 18-year-old Nancy. We hear all about Nancy's spanking.

Sue tells me that Mom had a lot of resentment towards me as a result of my reckless behaviour, and while that spanking seems to have cleansed Mom of it, that same resentment remains in her. She therefore asks permission to spank me herself, which is granted.

 

The next 15 chapters cover cottage life with me and David, Mom and Dad, and Nancy and Sue. Nancy and I accidentally wreck Daddy's boat and we are spanked together for it. Due to some initial defiance, Daddy sentences us both to naked corner time on the deck facing the wall. Our spanked bare bums can be seen by all the boaters who pass by. Daddy's fun comes to an end when a policeboat turns up, and while sympathizing with Dad's disciplinary methods, does let him know that it's technically not legal to have two naked girls standing on his deck.

Nancy and I both get a few individual spankings along the way that I describe. It seems to be open-season on us two youngest ones, with all our spanking being distressingly public after that first one. For one of my spankings (for not having a life-jacket with me when I went out in the canoe alone) David paddles me with a crudely fashioned wood panel. It was such a success that Dad and David decide to fashion lovingly varnished and engraved hardwood paddles for Nancy and myself and hang them on the cottage wall.

Those paddles get used when Nancy embroils me in a conspiracy to break curfew. After she gets home very late, she asks me to tell Mom and Dad that we had been sitting and talking on my side of the cottage ever since she got in, right on time. What could I do? I had to help her out.

Well, our shenanigans are discovered when the neighbour's security cam shows Nancy being dropped off well past her curfew. Mom and Dad are incensed that we lied to their faces. Mommy tells us to strip. The paddles come down off the wall and we are severely paddled by Daddy. Then Mommy makes us cut switches (while the neighbours watch!) and we are given a birching on the deck by Mommy who does not spare our most sensitive parts, and then a double switching while Nancy and I are made to hug one another, naked, as Sue and Mom wear out all the switches on our backsides.

One of my misdeeds is to sneak some tarragon from the pots outside the specialty butcher when I didn't  buy anything there. I needed the tarragon. When David discovers it he holds a family vote on how I should be punished. They unanimously agree to a naked spanking across David's standing knee. Next day, David takes me back there to apologize. One thing leads to another, and I get a panties down spanking in front of the butcher and his grown kids, much to their delight.

At the end of the book, the problem of my small bladder comes to a head. I lied to David about going potty before leaving the house and need him to stop. As punishment, David applies the Sunday School rule and will make me wear diapers for the trips to and from the cottage. If I keep it dry for 6 trips I will be free of them. David does not remind me about putting on my diaper before driving home, and I hoped he just forgets. But before we leave he does a check. Finding me in my panties, he takes me across his knee in front of the family and then diapers me in front of them. Mom wants to lend a hand, and takes over from David as he holds my legs up. Everyone is very amused.

The worst were the diaper checks at the cottage which the family always gleefully attended and congratulated me on my dry diaper. The very worst was when Sue did the check and noticed it was wet. But it wasn't pee... They all laughed when Sue held me open and showed everyone how well lubricated I was. Daddy told them not to tease me, and suggested David take me to the bedroom, for which I was again well-teased afterwards.

The book ends about a year later where I recap all the characters and tell how David decided it was time to give me a baby. We had baby-making sex and I got knocked up quick and live happily ever after.


I think it's a fun book and there are many, many exciting scenes in it. I obviously get to pretty extreme scenarios, but the way I build it up and flow it together makes each new level seem plausible, allowing you to suspend your disbelief and enjoy it as a real "what if" book.

What do you think? Sounds fun?


82 comments:

  1. The book sounds awesome. Any idea when it will be released for sale?

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    1. Coming to the end! A couple of weeks maybe.

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    2. Guess david spanks you every morning so you always got to have something on fire until your work is done.

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    3. I have been asking for spankings before sex, and then being very "obedient" in bed afterwards. Research!

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    4. Any progress on when you plan to release this? I am eager to read this story.

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    5. Still editing, but getting close now. Had a friend proofread it and incorporated a lot of fixes. Definitely before the end of the month!

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    6. Any progress on a targeted release date? The suspense to read this story is overwhelming.

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  2. I’m all in merely for the diaper stories. We need a pic of Julie in a diaper!

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    1. If you're a diaper fan you'll love the age regression, nervous bladder, peeing of panties, and consequent punishment diapering, legs held high and back, thorough baby wiping, and talcum powder application. Plus of course having the diaper checked so publicly. The neat thing is, the way the story evolves, it seems natural and everybody agrees the punishment is called for. Julie CAN control herself, she apparently chooses not to. Choices have consequences.

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  3. Your comment of “it’s a lot tighter now”. Made me think of your darling little bare butt in the corner.

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    1. True when the ginger root goes in!

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    2. Have you had a ginger plug in your bumhole before young lady?

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    3. I have tried it yes. Burny!

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    4. Really ??!!
      During what scene? Sounds like that is something I should as a long time fan.

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    5. I became curious after I tried it on my husband and did it to myself briefly. I don't think I ever blogged it.

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    6. This would make for a great Sue scene. It seems more like something she would do to intensify a wooden spoon trip across her knee and make your cornertime more “inflammatory”.

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    7. This is where we need that secret portal, direct line to your sister. When you have misbehaved and need actual punishment. “Ohhhh Sue, we have an idea for you and you need to pay your sister a visit.”

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    8. Ha ha! We have fun together, but she has her own thing going.

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  4. Up to Chapter 69 eh...? What happens in the sixty-ninth chapter - are you and Bea made to engage in a red-bottomed 69 while your husbands watch? ;)

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    1. I know. That was some coincidence, wasn't it?

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  5. This book sounds (reads) very interesting and very diverse, luckily for us "perverted readers", especially considering it's set in the oldest love-story arc of "boy meets girl"!
    From the excerpts you shared so far, there are "pairings" of: Husband/Wife (duh), Father/Daughter(s), Mother/Daughter(s), Older sister/Younger sister(s), Older Brother/Younger sister, Older sister-in-law/Younger sister-in-law, Younger sister-in-law/Older sister-in-law... All this, just in the taboo-y family setting! Not to mention the whole church scenes.

    And somehow the traditional love-story structure remains intact, beginning with courtship and ending with baby-making in a happy ever after ending...

    In contrast, I'm struggling to finish the supposedly "gay male erotica" I'm currently reading, because that author (blessed her little heart)is going on a rant every time either of the two heroes dares to even look at someone else with sexual, romantic, or even admiring interest! Consequently, painting the entire universe as filled with horrible, uninteresting, fake people, so her precious main characters can be "meant for each other" by rule of elimination!

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    1. Thank you max! Yes, lots of pairings to keep things interesting, and I'm always seeming to get in trouble somehow!

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  6. When are we going to see those lovely cheeks with a color matching those cute knickers ?
    B ;)

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    1. That photo is actually from a photoset I did with a husband-wife couple. Plenty of redness in my cheeks that time!
      See Schoolgirl Punishment

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  7. Wait, i thought you were a strict Domme who keeps her husband in line....

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    1. I used to be only that, but it was always "play", though realistic play - we called it a "Scening FLR". We started switching several years ago and now it's more 50-50.

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  8. Julie,

    I'm a professional writer and editor, and longtime reader. (7 years? 8 years? Something like that.)

    My take is that you're trying to cram too much in. It sounds like you've got three books' worth in there.

    Take your time, build out each chapter appropriately to its natural length.

    You can write, for sure (that's in no doubt), but structuring and narrative thread is a different skill. Doing it over 2,000 words isn't difficult (as this blog amply demonstrates), but doing it over 80,000+ words can be a challenge.

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    1. It reads really well. I'm very happy with the flow and the pacing. Super sexy! It builds and builds. Subtly sexy in places, overtly so in others. I think you'll be pleasantly surprised! (I was)

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    2. OK. I'll get it and see. All I'm saying is: sustaining a narrative flow over 80,000+ words is often difficult. If you've got the knack, fine.

      M

      PS Still "enjoying" the recent photo of the young lady communing with her Hitachi.

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    3. Looking forward to your review afterwards!

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  9. Is Julie going to be forced to go the store and buy her own diapers like you did to David IRL? Or will she be squeezed into baby diapers from the Sunday school supply?

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  10. Sounds great. I’d like to see Uncle John and the sjambok from a few years ago worked in somewhere. Could he be the pastor character? A sjambok wielding Afrikaans pastor that secretly has a hard on for Ms Julie. The rest of the Christian wives look on knowingly after the Sunday school incident when he takes Julie for a private punishment in Gods name to the old shed behind the church. They’ve all been there and felt the swing of the sjambok and the tip of his cock knocking on their devils door. Mr D

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    1. Sexy, though that sjambok sounds brutal!

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    2. Yes it’s made from leather usually hippopotamus or rhino hide and it’s about a meter long. Very flexible and durable. Used by the Voortrekkers to drive cattle. Similar to the Australian bull whips. Ms Julie you might like to purchase a stock whip which has a shot handle and a long tail which you can whirl and crack. Great fun and very good exercise. Males will tremble in your presence. Doesn’t take long to learn basic use. About an hour. You’d enjoy it. Perhaps check it out on YouTube.

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    3. Yikes! Ms. Violet has one and knows how to use it. She used it on me. Not as brutal as it seems (depending on whip and application no doubt), but scary as anything.

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  11. Found that portrait. Julie when she was a little girl? « Julie is an endearing little girl, shrewd and curious about everything. Tomboy, she says it bluntly, as she thinks it. She hates school, but she's very intelligent. Throughout the novel, she keeps her childish eyes despite the many questions she asks. »

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    1. So here is what happens to little Julie :
      "“You know I told you you’d get in trouble if you used words like that? I told you, didn’t I?”
      “Yes sir, but—”
      “Well, you’re in trouble now. Stay there.”
      I was debating whether to stand there or run, and tarried in indecision a moment too long: I turned to flee but Uncle J. was quicker. I found myself suddenly looking at a tiny ant struggling with a bread crumb in the grass.
      “I’ll never speak to you again as long as I live! I hate you an‘ despise you an’ hope you die tomorrow!” A statement that seemed to encourage Uncle J, more than anything."

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    2. Hey! Who's writing this book? :-)

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    3. “Mockingbirds don't do one thing but make music
      for us to enjoy" Harper lee

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  12. Different subject and letting you know, we may disagree on politics but it was you who first allowed the male to discuss and talk about being spanked, and that I'm grateful for. So sorry for taken it too far, was not intended. Jack

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    1. I never let a good political discussion interfere with my friendships, jack. I don't do "hate" for another point of view, though I won't back down in the face of it.

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    2. You don't pull punches have learned that from you and I like that. My wife was not happy at all with how I responded to you, not a bit happy. She was going to ground me from this sight, a period of time, but then took your advise, the spanking I got, that bath brush really hurt, and worse of all we went out to dinner. She had added this punishment in the past, this time squirming I could not stop. So Thank-You again, finding you was a God Send. For this male to admit to being spanked, admit that it is needed, and to share it, means alot. It has put to rest many thoughts I had.

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    3. That's very sweet. Thank you jack.

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  13. Congratulations Julie! This sounds like quite the feat and I look forward to reading it. I especially love that you including Julie & David's origin story - how romantic!

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  14. Hi Julie:

    I love your blog when it's about its target topic. Not so much when you go political. I find it amazing that you think Trump has been a useful president. While it's true that all politicians push the evidence to suit their point, Trump is beyond anything I have ever seen. He lies about everything, and baldly so. I am amazed that anyone trusts him. Maybe they don't: maybe they just like the show.

    Now that his lies have bitten him harder than before (with the positive covid test), we will see how he survives, both literally and politically.

    Best wishes to you in your land of sanity!

    James

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    1. Hi james,

      The President certainly exaggerates to make a point, but I find his untruths to be directionally accurate. Ie, he does not say one thing "read my lips, no new taxes" or "you get to keep your doctor and plan" and then do the diametric opposite.

      I don't thing his catching COVID-19 can be characterized as lies catching up to him. He advocated for states to not shutdown their whole economies for fear of a disease with an ever declining mortality rate, and led by example.

      His list of accomplishments during his 4 years is extremely impressive compared to other Presidents. See https://www.whitehouse.gov/trump-administration-accomplishments.

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    2. I am impressed at your willingness to publish skeptical comments (like mine). Not so impressed at the bias you show, but that's your prerogative.

      I certainly agree that the left does weird stuff, and gets behind odd things, but the right is much worse here in the US, in my opinion. The right down here is necessarily pro-life / anti-choice; pro-guns; anti-universal health care.

      While I agree that getting the details of universal health care "correct" is impossible, at least the left is trying to move towards socialized medicine. The stances on guns and abortion seem untenable on the right.

      So count me as a lefty, I guess. I would be centrist in Canada.

      I agree that Trump has at times been a good speaker. But I think he is very bad for democracy. Maybe he is just a symptom of a very divided country.

      Best wishes to you,
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    3. Hi J - I think we should avoid divisive language like "not so impressed with the bias you show". Anything along those lines that you say, with a moment's reflection, you would realize that the other side of an argument could say the same about you and with equal justification. "Bias" is defined as "prejudice in favor of or against one thing, person, or group compared with another, usually in a way considered to be unfair." I don't think my points are "unfair", and I don't believe you think your points are "unfair" either. Perhaps better phrased as "we disagree", and seeing that is implicit in the argument, best omitted altogether.

      I think the "pro-life / anti-choice" is a false dichotomy. There are many reasonable compromise choices. Likewise with pro gun / anti-gun and pro universal health care / anti. As soon as we setup false dichotomies, we become unable to compromise and we lose.

      Worse yet is to setup false dichotomies with moral judgments at the end:
      - "anybody who is pro gun want to see children die!"
      - "anybody who is pro choice wants to murder babies!"
      - "anybody who is against universal government controlled healthcare is for people dying in the street!"

      Nuance. Always. Compromise.

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    4. I agree that I didn't provide evidence of the bias that I claimed you show. Sorry.

      I do think it's a bit ironic that you are suggesting to me that I need to be careful about my language choices, given your support for the worst offender in modern history, Mr. Trump. He makes no apologies for his approach, which is planned to be divisive.

      I would love a coherent discussion of issues, but he has made it impossible. Look at his behavior at the debate: he had a clear strategy to intimidate Biden by constantly interrupting. He has no interest in engaging in "nuance" and thoughtful discussion. Perhaps you think the left is just as bad? I guess it's possible you do.

      Anyway, I greatly admire your ability to respond to anything in a coherent way. I know of no Republican down here that can do this. Your intellect is wasted on anything below a super high-powered job. And if you already do have a super high-powered job, then how do you have time to write so much on your sexuality?

      You are a fascinating puzzle, Ms. Julie.

      cheers, and good luck in getting everything you want (except Trump re-elected: I don't want to have to live through any more of his nonsense)

      J

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    5. If you review the debate, the first four interruptions were by Joe Biden in the 30 seconds starting 4 minutes in. Just saying that he set the tone. That's a fact.

      Joe was also slinging personal insults including calling Trump a "clown".

      As well, Joe continued insisting in the debate, and he launched his campaign in fact, on the very divisive lie that Trump said white supremacists and neo-Nazis were "very fine people" when in fact Trump said the opposite.

      Who's divisive now?

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    7. What an odd comment. I made very specific, very factual comments regarding the debate. Yes, I admit that after it got going, and after Biden threw the first punch, he was overwhelmed by Trump. But that is Trump's nature.

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  15. Have you included the nude beach spanking in Spain, when you spanked david with your beach sandal.

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    1. Not in this book. In the first book there is a scene inspired by that.

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  16. Is there a connection in your brain between what you call "mythical beast" (vaginal orgasm) and the name of the president's limo (more a tank)? :-)

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    1. Don't think so, but the subconscious works in mysterious ways. I've just always heard about this famous "vaginal orgasm" and wondered what the heck it is. I think it's maybe a G-sport orgasm from cock in pussy without direct clitoral stimulation? Maybe? Apparently some girls are just not anatomically built to experience it (me). But my orgasms from receiving clit stimulation via oral are much enhanced with my husband's finger up my pussy rubbing my G-spot.

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  17. Time to get a spanking from your real dad. You worked so hard on that

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  18. we need more video of your sexy cute butt being spanked hard same more video of you the Top punishing spanking David huabnd

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  19. This book seems to satisfy many tastes.
    Is there a mention of the clown feet issue in the book?
    A Spanish girl friend of mine had large feet compared to her body, one day I kept on commenting on that, so she told me, I will not forgive you and let you fuck my pussy unless my feet forgive you.
    I thought she wanted me to kiss her feet, but instead she took off her slipper in a maternal way and told me over my knee naughty boy, I am not much into spanking but her pussy, ass and tits were fabulous, so I thought why not, this spanking can't hurt much.
    How wrong I was, that damn spanish old real leather slipper hurts a lot, I tried to act macho but after what I thought to be few minutes, I had to ask her to stop because it really hurts a lot.
    She told me actually it was less than one minute and laughed a lot saying her mom's slippers are irresistible.
    Then we had sex.
    After that she would occasionally hit me a few times with her slipper, now I became into spankings and of course I am attached to the first implement that whacked my ass that is leather slippers.

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    1. I did add in a quick leather slipper spanking just for fans like you!

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  20. Sounds good. Instead of you and Nancy hugging each other naked while Mum and Sue use switches on your backsides while neighbours watch - how about you being tied together naked with plastic ties or some such and left standing alone for an hour. Bondage is sexier and there will be dual breast and pussy forced contact as well as some clitoris grinding and French kissing action as you console each other after your punishment. Readers love a bit of public girl on girl incest action!

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    1. I need to keep it in character for Mom ;-)

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  21. In Tahiti on honeymoon I hope you’re made to go topless in the beach wearing only a C-String that David also bought in the drug store. Shouldn’t be a problem after your pussy shaving. Red butt from a recent spanking too if course.

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    1. No, David is a bit of a prude that way... :-(

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  22. Discovered a little song for your corner time :
    Thumbs Up!
    Elbows back!
    Feet apart!
    Knees together!
    Bottoms up!
    Tongue out!
    Eyes shut!
    Turn Around!
    and energetic song you kid will love to dance on!
    Ph.

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  23. They found out that Pauls second letter is actually something called Deutero Pauline.

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    1. From Paul's disciples, not from Paul himself. Most of what one assumes about the origins of biblical stuff is quite different - so translated, edited, and so on. You need to e a super expert Aramaic and Greek scholar to keep up!

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  24. Some things I have been musing about:

    1. What was David’s hardest spanking? I think it might have been from Mags (https://strictjuliespanks.blogspot.com/2016/04/a-blistering-from-his-trainer.html).

    If I were in a similar relationship, I think that I would want (!) my hardest spanking ever to have come from my wife. I would think that she would want that, too.

    2. What was your hardest spanking? I think it may have been from Sue (https://strictjuliespanks.blogspot.com/2017/12/spanked-by-my-sister.html).

    If I were in a similar relationship, I would *definitely* expect to be the one who gave my wife her hardest spanking. If someone else gave her another, harder spanking, I would give her plenty of time to recuperate and then give her a harder one.

    3. What will ‘FICTIONAL* Julie’s hardest spanking be?

    I think perhaps this would have been from David, or perhaps Sue, at some point, but then when your father gets involved perhaps he delivers her hardest spanking ever. Afterward, of course, David would assert himself and deliver a harder one.

    “Hardest,” here, is a bit tricky to define, but I think you and I and other blog readers have a similar implicit understanding of the concept.

    I do very much like the idea of a “hardest spanking ever.” And, if necessary, a harder follow-up. I would enjoy it if you were to incorporate this into your new book. And, if I am correct about your nonfictional hardest spankings, perhaps the matter ought to be addressed IRL as well. I would suggest supervision by Sue to help judge adequate severity.

    I am looking forward to the new book very much.

    My fond regards as always.

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    1. 1/ Definitely not - he confirms that his hardest spankings were from me, with the Delrin cane.

      2/ Sue's wooden spoon was pretty good alright. But I think the hardest was when I asked David to put me through a week of submission - I was in the right mindset to absorb a lot.

      3/ I think Dad's paddle would be the worst...

      Still beavering away! Thank you!

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  25. My wife thought I had learned my lesson after my conversation with you over politics. Well I was good, but got into a heated argument with her best friend, a neighbor. Saturday morning, slept in, came to the kitchen, and saw the hairbrush on the chair. Young man my wife said sternly, once breakfast is over, your behavior is going to be addressed, understand, I just said Yes Mommmy. I finished breakfast, and told to get to the bedroom, and put on the little boy jammies she bought. I did as told, she smiled, said to the front room, and I saw a chair in the middle of the room, the hairbrush. She went to the kitchen, and to my shock when she came back from the kitchen her best friend was with her. She is going to witness your spanking, and standing before her, she pulled the bottoms down, and over her lap I went. She gave me a spanking that had me kick off the bottoms of my pajamas, and I was pleading, begging. When she stood me up, she told me to say I was sorry to her friend, rubbing, and dancing around I did as told. The friend stood up, my turn, and to my shock I was soon over her lap, and pleading, begging. I was then told to face the wall, no talking, no rubbing. Sunday, my bottom still hurting from the spankings, we went to church, when my wife was asked if I fell, she smiled and said, correcting his political comments. Jack

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    1. I hope you took your spanking for defending the President. :-)

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  26. Is it a coincidence if the selected excerpt is about bipolarity and manic depressive crisis?

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    1. Are there any coincidences?
      But I think not. I needed an excuse for David to go "over the top" with Beatrice, and "punishment therapy" (as requested by her and approved by her psychologist) was a good one!

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