Wednesday, March 30

New Book Concept

As you no doubt figured out, I let my last book concept drop, the one I described in New Book - Rings of Consent. I wrote the first 50 pages, but it felt really disconnected without an over-arching plot and character development. An e-pen-pal suggested that might be the case and it turned out to be just so. But, I have a new concept for a book, one I feel like I can give a real story arc to.

The book title will be "David's Spankings".

It will be fictional and tell the story of a young man suddenly subject to domestic discipline from his Aunt and her younger lesbian partner.

The young man character will be inspired by the subby side of my husband David. His backstory, his kinks, his known reactions in the situations I will put his character into.

The Aunt character will be inspired by my sister Sue. Her attitude. Her no-nonsense. Her sexual preferences. Her kinks. I will of course mix a bit of my dommy side into the character as well.

The Aunt's lesbian partner will be an amalgam of various of Sue's girlfriends and various young lady partners David and I have played with over the years. I will of course mix a bit of me into that character as well (both dommy and subby).

I went ahead and wrote a first draft of an attention-grabbing Preface. Here it is:

David's Spankings

Preface

I was an eighteen-year-old boy, a freshman at a top University, and yet there I was, made to stand in the corner like a naughty six-year-old by my strict Aunty Sue as her partner Chrissy looked on.

I was sniffling and my cheeks were wet with tears. My pants and underpants were around my ankles. My well-spanked bare bottom was on full display.

I was being punished, and in Aunty Sue's home that usually meant a very sore backside followed by an hour of silent contemplation with your nose in the corner and your bare butt on display. That is, if you were lucky.

Privacy was not a consideration in Aunty Sue's house. Spankings were given on-the-spot, regardless of who was there to see them.

Aunty Sue's female life-partner, Chrissy, was subject to the same sort of discipline, and was every bit as likely to find herself in my position or worse. This time, though, it was me, and I knew Chrissy felt sorry for me. She knew what an extended trip across Aunty Sue's knee was like.

Aunty Sue was in her early forties, and Chrissy, at twenty-seven, was less than halfway in age between us.

It made for an… interesting… dynamic.

The story will be a young David going to the city for University and staying with his Aunty Sue. Sue is the top in a domestic discipline relationship with her female life-partner, Chrissy. David's Mom knew her sister was a lesbian, but did not know the rest. When she approached her sister asking if David could stay with them to defray expenses, Aunty Sue went to David privately and told him about the relationship, and that while he was welcome to stay, they would not alter their lifestyle for him. Secretly, David himself is a spanko from a young age, and was eager to accept regardless, agreeing to keep it their secret.

So many places to take it!

  • David can be a voyeur on Sue and Chrissy's domestic discipline arrangement.
  • David can take part in disciplining Chrissy.
  • David might be naughty with the women's panty and dildo drawer.
  • David can become subject to Sue's discipline himself.
  • Chrissy can assist Sue in disciplining David.
  • Chrissy may want a little cock on the side from David.
  • David might bring home a girlfriend and be disciplined in front of her.
  • David might be screwing up in a class given by a female professor friend of Sue's, and suffer some humiliating consequences.
  • Corner time, mouth soapings, grounding, diaperings, dildoings, forced feminization, forced masturbation, all possible.

I want to imagine being the Sue character, and imagine what I would do if a young nephew just like David came to live with my girlfriend and I, and I learned he was a spanko.

I think there's a great story to tell there that I can base on the reality of myself and some of the people around me that I know so well.

So what do you guys think? A worthy project? Have you any advice for me? Any kinks you would particularly love to see? Let me know in the comments!

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  1. I like! Of course, I am predisposed to enthusiasm about any story featuring “David”, even though it’s not me. I can make it about me with a few adjustments to characters’ names, relationships, and ages. As I remember being 18, I was of course a chronic masturbator, but my kinks weren’t really developed yet. I take that back. I did have a fascination and lump-in-my-throat attraction to spanking even as a child. So, I’m totally looking forward to what you come up with, and trying to find a way to read it. - david

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    1. My david was a spanko from a young age, and a chronic masturbator too. At 18 he says he would have gone along with anything those two woman characters would say!

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    2. The punishments for chronic masturbators need to be quite strict. Adding the element of embarrassment is very important. I think making a well spanked masturbator wear a sign indicating this behavior is the behavior he was punished for will be very effective.

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    3. My wife corrected that problem quickly. Got caught not once but twice, the second when her mother was visiting. I was caught on the toilet playing with myself, my wife said to finish, get undress and was taken to the front room, Her mother being told, watched as my bottom was soundly spanked. I then could not believe my mother-in-law told me to stand with my back to the wall, both hands holding my little toy as she called it. I hated that more than the spanking. Jack

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    4. I agree that strictness is called for, especially for a repeat offender who can't keep Aunt Chrissy out of his thoughts.

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  2. Can’t believe I missed this. I’m sure you didn’t. But if Chrissy wants a “little cock” on the side, I know someone. As for any other kinks I’d like to see, I think you already know them! -david

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    1. Not "little" that way, silly. No woman wants that... ;-)

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  3. I do hope you include the grounding. Either way, good luck to you on your project. I know you'll do awesome.with it.

    - Trent

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    1. There'll be a good grounding, just for you, Trent. We need to build to his first spanking after all.

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    2. I'm flattered. Thank you so much. I love a slow burn as well. Can't wait to read it.

      - Trent

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    3. Well there's one customer!

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    4. Also: "David might bring home a girlfriend and be disciplined in front of her." LOVE that idea. Not only properly humbling for him, but could even inspire this girlfriend to make their relationship an FLR after she see's how easily he folds to it and how well it keeps him in line.

      - Trent

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    5. Yes, that was my thought as well.

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    6. Maybe, and right now just tossing ideas out same as everyone else, an epilogue where David is a few years older and in an FLR or even WLM with his girlfriend/wife. She grounds him during a week he has plans with his friends, and he has to call them to cancel. Not only that, but she makes him tell them he's grounded, that she did it, and why. Maybe he calls her bluff and refuses to call the first of his friends, and she does calls to tell them instead. After this humiliation, he knows she means business and has no choice but to call the rest of them the truth. She stands and watches while he makes the calls, too. That was the book ends on a note where he knows what the rest of his life is going to be and accepts it. And she realizes the degree of power she has and couldn't be happier.

      - Trent

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    7. You certainly do have a well-developed "grounding fetish", Trent! Ha ha!

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    8. No other choice really. Lol. My wife is going to ground me and make sure everyone knows it anyway, so might as well learn to enjoy the spirit of dominance behind her doing that. I have grown to find it strangely alluring after the humiliation subsides. Besides, if the goal is to correct one's significant other using real punishment, that one does the trick. I get punished less now than ever before in our marriage because I try harder than ever to avoid such embarrassment.

      - Trent

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  4. That sounds like it has a lot of possibilities. Looking forward to reading it.

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    1. Hi girl! Thank you. How are things going with you??? Have not had an update in a while.

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    2. How are things going with you and Sue? It is rather quiet and apart from David’s Christmas gift there seems to be little going on. Any chance you got together and played?

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    3. No. I especially blog about all our Sue play dates. We all seem to be slowing down on our craziness!

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  5. Good thing about a book, you can explore each and every possibility.

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  6. Perhaps when Sue has David nicely trained up, she might decide that he needs a wife and introduce him to her bratty little sister ;)

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    1. Nice idea to get me into the book! I can be Sue's little step-sister or something to account for the age gap.

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  7. Now since this is fiction and the sky is the limit let your slut side take over.
    Could David have deeply hidden anti lesbian phobia or attitude and that is discovered by his Aunt.
    As part of his punishment and correction and adjusting his view, he is punished in front of a male and subjected to good and thorough fucking by this male....no Lesbian Phobia or homophobia to be tolerated.
    Of course this seen is rooted in my real wish of you cuckolding David in his presence and having your lover have complete control of David ass.

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    1. I like it! But maybe it's a male homophobia he needs to get over. Maybe they were watching a movie and David makes a bad comment.

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  8. Two ideas. David could be a virgin when his chastity is put on. Auntie could set him up to date with and older woman. Lots of possibilities

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  9. What can I add, you know me very well, I've told you of my life and looking forward to seeing what you create. I learned that a true spanking will have you doing as told, facing the corner adds to the punishment and in my case when my wife decided I will address her as Mommy, that was the straw that told me I was not an adult but a naughty little boy. Jack

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    1. I'll draw some inspiration from your experiences, jack.

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  10. One final comment, I was looking for a woman to be in charge, the spankings I get are truly spankings that a naughty little boy would get from his Mother. My wife when she is the Mommy knows how to give a spanking that leaves you feeling like a naughty little boy, facing the wall insures you feel this way. As for others watching or being spanked by others, is the decision of my Mommy. Naughty little boys do not have a vote in that matter. I looked long and wonder if I ever would find such a woman. The marriage is strong, she truly knows me better than myself, and once off her lap and facing the wall I feel like a naughty little boy, look like she states, and when my wall time is done, she hugs me, saids she loves me, and then allowed to get dress or if been a very naughty little boy told to put on my jammies, and will be going to bed early. Jack

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    1. I'll make sure Sue is gentle with David after his punishments.

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    2. Gentle but firm, must insure he knows he is a naughty little boy. Jack

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  11. Love the concept! A lot to play with for sure. Make David a virgin and have Chrissy take his virginity behind Sue's back. Eventually they're discovered sleeping together and Sue punishes both of them in creative ways.

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    1. Love the virgin piece. Perhaps Sue could catch them before he actually enters Chrissy. Punishment includes a chastity so, if he ever wants to have traditional sex with a woman, he will have to be a very good little boy.

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  12. Sounds hot

    Lots of possibilities

    Maybe she would enjoy dressing David in sexy ladies underwear and garters and letting guys paddle and use him to pay the rent:)

    WC

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    1. Fun concept!
      I think it's likely the girls will fem him up for a punishment

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  13. I'm a huge fan of the strict/loving mommy archtype. Long hard OTK spankings on the bare bottom followed by forgiving hugs, caresses and "breastfeeding".

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    1. I like the humiliation of a "forced" breastfeeding.

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  14. Great scenario, very much looking to read the book as I had loved your first two publications.

    I'm also a spanko from a young age and I have quite a sub personality with a high libido and I can also concur that like your husband if at the age of 18 I had a dominant and attractive woman in my life such as my aunt that wanted to discipline me I would have 100% gone along with everything so I think your scenario is totally plausible.

    A few ideas for your book (most of them inspired from some of your blog entries):

    - David gets caught watching porn. He's watching a spanking video with a girl getting severely spanked which of course leads to him getting spanked as severely by his Aunt Sue
    - David gets spanked for not doing chores
    - Sue has a good friend who is a professional domme and David gets punished by her
    - David gets spanked for not studying seriously enough

    I'm curious how the dynamic between David and Chrissy is going to be. I imagine David will be more a switch leaning sub, but what about Chrissy? Will she be 100% sub or will she have a dominant side? Will she be have a bisexual side that she wants to explore with David? A lot of interesting possibilities.

    Finally, if I were to suggest a progression in the kinks featured in the book (at least with David involded) I would say:

    - at first only non directly sexual kinks, just like a mom would discipline her unruly child so spanking of course, but also mouth soaping, face slapping, corner time, writting lines, hand strapping, imposed household chores, grounding
    - then there would also be kinks that are more sexual added such as forced masturbation, having to swallow cum, forced feminization, mild anal play, shaving
    - and finally more intense or very sexual kinks added such as pegging, facesitting / rimming, being tied to bed, gagged and caned, watersports

    While as I said before, I could have totally seen myself completely accepting to be dominated by a strict woman at 18, I still think that to keep the story realistic and enjoyable there should be a real progression leading to David experiencing various kinks and embracing his subby side.

    But again, having read your first two books, I'm sure whatever you come up with will be amazing. Hopefully we will get updates / teaser regularly ;)

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    1. Love it all! Thank you. I'm all for starting slow and taking it as far as I can!

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  15. Well this looks like fun. I don't have any ideas, except:

    David is caught pilfering through Chrissy's panty drawer. Obviously, such a transgression warrants feminization as punishment - panties, makeup, ribbons in his hair.

    Sue takes him shopping for a French maid's outfit and makes him try it on in the store. When he balks she pulls out her hairbrush spanks him in public. Sue makes David walk home in the outfit - ruffled petticoats and all. Having a French maid will be handy when Aunt Sue entertains her book group or other friends.

    David's domestic duties will include doing pedicures and washing panties and making breakfast.

    David is caught masturbating when Sue and Chrissy are making love. To stop this wanton behavior, David will be tied up during these times - sometimes permitted to listen or even watch but always tied up and helpless.

    In a moment of weakness, Chrissy allows David to lick her pussy. She's punished by Sue but insists Sue give it a try as the kid does really know what he is doing. Sue reluctantly gives it a try. When she has an earthshaking orgasm, she catches her breath then gives David the whipping of his life.

    As David is dressed in the maid's outfit and serving wine to the book club, the women began to tease him. They play a game - blindfolding David, sitting on his face and making him identify who is who by the scent of their pussies. They slap his balls if he guess wrong. After a bit of wine, one guest removes her panties so David can lick her. Then another. They all take their turns. After a bit more wine, they take turns peeing on his face.

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    1. Lots of ideas there. Thank you!

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    2. My pleasure.

      - Rosco

      Just gave Irene a 30 minute midday foot massage - not sure whether it was an honor to serve or she made me do it.

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  16. I'm not much on femdom, but if you are doing it julie i'm sure it will be a good read, best of luck

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  17. Wow, what an unbelievably sexy idea. I love every part of it, I think the dynamic will be amazing, so many different areas you can explore. Your stories with David and Sue and her girlfriends have always been my all time favourites. And the trainer stories. I hope at least once theres a lesbian book club or something that he crashes and her and Chrissy both have to spank him and more right in front of the entire group! You really nailed it with this idea, spanktastic!
    -Randy Red Cheeks

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    1. Maybe David and Chrissy can both be a little out of shape and Sue hires a STRICT personal trainer for them both.

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    2. Love that idea! The different trainers series were some of my favorites blog entries you published. There is just something about a woman that hasn't any spanking experience but that's completely OK blistering some butts given the opportunity that I find incredibly hot.

      I can imagine a young woman, perhaps just a bit older than David, that would take fitness very seriously and would be totally on board with using strict methods to make sure both David and Chrissy are following her training.

      And if they don't, well she wouldn't hesitate to put them over her knees and beat their ass severely.

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    3. Oh yes, I'm liking this more and more, and mainly because I have so many real life escapades to choose from and can make the trainer character an amalgam of my husband's kinky trainers.

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  18. Go Julie go!!!
    Knowing you, it will be a true pleasure to read!

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  19. How about this? David is caught masturbating, which is violation of Auntie's house rules. As punishment, he gets spanked to tears with a hairbrush over Auntie's knee in the morning and then over Chrissie's knee in the evening -- three days in a row. After that, he is placed in a chastity device for two weeks. During those two weeks, he must do all the house chores and submit to pegging by Auntie or Chrissie or both anytime they want during those two weeks. They can also make him eat them out anytime they want. Basically, David becomes their sex slave for two weeks.

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    1. Yes! Perhaps not after the first offense, or even the second, but a THIRD!!!?!!?

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    2. Yes, the third offense would correlate with the three days of double spankings. Of course, his bottom will get progressively more sore, making the spankings even harder to take and making him desperately beg to be let off the hook (which of course will be denied). One point that you get that a lot of people who write spanking stories don't get is that it's important to provide the reader with a lot of description of David's reactions as he is being spanked. wailing, begging, pleading for it to stop, crying, etc. Also, some sense of time and/or number of strokes helps the reader visualize what is happening better. "The spanking went on for 7 minutes," for example.

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    3. Yes! I love detail, especially inner emotional state detail, and I love when the spankee wails and begs (like me!)

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  20. Creating an alternate universe for the dropped book's concept is understandably a very difficult task.
    If I can give a layman's suggestion to an established author (with a very naughty, kinky mind 😉), it will be to try some short stories on that ring-consent universe, and maybe ending up publish an anthology first, then have a novel-length sequel/sequels later if you find your imagination going there.

    Oh, and I've said that before, but, personally, I'd be more easily immersed in a Superman (i.e. fantasy) than a Batman (science fiction) approach to that universe. You can even introduce the cliche virus that affected almost all of the world population and rendered everyone very susceptible to eroticizing corporal punishment. In a giving, receiving or both roles.
    Then, the whole ring of consent legislation would come afterwards as thinly-veiled facade for the sexual motive behind the power-dynamics. Which is low-key what we're doing in real life, if we're honest!

    On the new book's premise, I love it!

    Here are some suggestions:

    - For a title: There's a book in LSF titled "spanked by his two mothers"; also features a young man with a lesbian head of household.
    An aunt's wife/girlfriend can technically be Aunt too - similarly to an Uncle's wife being called Aunt; so, I suggest for a title, "spanked by his aunts".
    It will make for a nice surprise for the casual reader to find out that the aunts in question are not sisters but lovers.

    - The preface mentions David's mother being unaware of what goes on, disciplinary-wise, with her son. So, there's a possibility for the teasing cliche of him visiting home and surprising his mother (who's like any teenager boy's mom can fill a whole book with her son's shortcomings) by have been turned into the perfect young gentleman. It's a mystery for Mom, so she asks her sister of her secret to "motivate" David, yet Aunty Sue keeps her nephew's secret with evasive answers ... Or she could let her sister in on the time-honored recipe for a well-behaved boy, and poor David ends up getting spanked at home too. Or Mom can find out herself by seeing the "aftermath" on David's bottom by accident (cue the forgetting to lock the door while showering cliche).

    - Chrissy's side of the family can produce some supporting characters. A little brother who's David's age and ends up in a fight with him. Sue and Chrissy separately gets called to the Dean's office. After the initial surprise, and examining the incident to find out that both boys are equally in the wrong, Sue convinces her girlfriend to take matter into her own hand and not just relay her brother's misbehavior to their parents. Aaaaaand a four way FF/MM ensues to the readers' (me at least) delight.
    And even more to my delight, would be a bi-curious, cream-applying, soothing 'kiss and make out, ... I mean, make up' sleepover can happen next with Sue and Chrissy knowingly smile from the side, or even voyeuristically appreciating the 'enemies-to-friends' concluding scene.

    In any case, I'm sure it will be a perfect book, and I wish you the best embarking on the journey of writing it and finishing it.

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    1. I agree on the need for the short-story sort of style for Rings of Consent, but I found I could not get motivated the same way I did with "Julie's Spankings" without the big story arc, the character development, and my personal familiarity with my characters.

      I love bringing David's Mom and immediate family back into it midway through. Imagine the dropped jaws when David is rude to Mom on the visit home and Sue spanks him on-the-spot, in front of everybody!

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  21. Could David hold some Aversion to Lesbian life style and he discovered by the Ladies.
    To correct him and open his horizon a male could join them in punishment session culminating by a thorough fuck of David by the male guest.

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    1. I prefer if he's a bit male homophobic (which is more in my husband's character - he cringes at the guy-on-guy kissy scenes in the movies but loves any girl-on-girl). I think being any kind of homophobe would set off Sue and Chrissy. And then what better "therapy" than having to suck a real gay dick?

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    2. This being fiction I think that's a great idea and some forced bisexuality would be great to read. If David ends up being a bit of a male homophobic in your book, then I concur that being punished by a male would be a perfectly appropriate punishment. Perhaps a very good spanking followed by a strict ass fucking / having to suck dick until the man came would teach David a good lesson ;)

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    3. I agree totally! That'll learn him.

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  22. Great ideas Julie, a small idea from my experience, my wife always wears something that she has used in spanking me as a permanent reminder such as a belt, footwear (slipper, sandal, sneakers, flat shoes like the one you used on David) necklace (a relatively thick one made of stainless steel that looks good and quite innocent).
    In your story she can wear it and may sometimes make her lady partner wear it (it was a common occurring when I was a child for a mom to borrow her sister's or best friend's slipper if she happens to be not wearing one to spank her misbehaving child).
    Perhaps auntie Sue will be visiting some friends, David will misbehave and embarrass her so she will borrow the host's slipper/ hairbrush or whatever implement to discipline him.
    Or he may have been caught going through the host's soiled panties or even stealing one when he asks to go to the bathroom (not all houses have two toilets, small ones have only one toilet), so after borrowing something to discipline him, she invites the host to punish him herself as well.

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    1. My husband wears the belt he uses to spank me with literally all the time! Sometimes he just says, "Julie" and touches his belt buckle and it makes me tingle.

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  23. Please include a Philippino maid in the story, she can spank David as well.
    You can put all your fantasies about your maid in this story, I remember you once made an Internet search about Philippines domestic discipline methods that you put a link to.

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  24. The photo you used is the first one I found when I started surfing the Internet for spanking material long ago.
    I love it, look how beautiful and strong the lady legs and hands are.

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    1. It's a long time favourite of mine too.

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  25. Do you have a current source for the paddle in the first photo ?
    I have trying to find that exact paddle for years to use on my husband.

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    1. Use a bath brush you will like the results, and enjoy his spanking dance. Jack

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    2. No idea, but maybe home made? Try Etsy?

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    3. Asked my wife she did not know what Etsy is either. Jack

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    4. https://www.etsy.com/search?q=paddle+spanking&ref=auto-1&as_prefix=padd

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  26. Many years ago I was introduced to femdom spanking from my "Aunt" Kathy when I was in my early 20's. She was a friend of my parents from our country club but was about 10 years younger than them. I got roped into setting up her stereo and was offered either $100 for my help or a real spanking while she was dressed in black lingerie. Guess which I chose ? This went on all through college which I enjoyed very much. Before I married, Aunt Kathy had a talk with my fiancee, who has been spanking me for 20 years now.

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    1. Nice! Did it ever go further with Aunt Kathy?

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    2. Yes it went further with "Aunt" Kathy. I was never allowed inside her, but she introduced me to receiving strapon sex with enemas prior, being restrained during spanking/strapping, mouthsoaping, ball-gags to keep me quiet during punishment, and her lovely latex rubber-gloved handjobs during her strapon penetrating me. Still gives me a solid hard-on just thinking back to those times.

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  27. Hi Julie. Love your creativity. A few ideas:
    Since all boys are chronic masturbators, maybe the mom warns the aunt that he does this at home and mom has always tried not to embarrass him. The aunt has other ideas.

    Maybe the aunt then warns Chrissy and maybe they look at his internet history and see he has an interest in spanking.

    Perhaps Chrissy is the bate and is constantly teasing him by dressing seductively.

    Maybe he hears noises outside the aunts bedroom door. The door is cracked and he gets his first eyeful of Lesbian love. The aunt is moving around the bedroom grabbing toys or spanking implements to discipline Chrissy. David thinks she is going to the closet which is out of site, but she is sneaking towards the door and it flies open much to Davids surprise. He is grabbed and is made sit on the bed, obviously scared and nervous as hell. The aunt and Chrissy, still naked, stand in front of him. Instead of yelling they start to make out and move on the bed next to him and the aunt brings Chrissy to a violent orgasm. When done, the aunt explains the relationship, and the explains further that Chrissy was misbehaving earlier and was going to get spanked. She then goes to her dresser and picks up the Vermont country bath brush and turns Chrissy otk and spanks her to tears. After Chrissy is crying, she then turns to David and says true discipline starts when the tears start. She then proceeds to spank Chrissy to a blubbering mess of tears. David is speechless. The aunt asks him if he has learned anything and David says yes. Not to piss off his aunt he says. She say that’s right and smiles. Very good David she says. In a brief moment of silence, David thinks he is off the hook. He turns to Chrissy and asks if she’s ok and starts to exit. He turns and starts walking towards the door, leaving to naked women behind. He has all this in his masturbation reel in his head. His hard on has been raging the whole time. Just before he hits the threshold of the doorway, he feels his ear being grabbed and he is led back to the bed. The aunt says your turn now! He is stripped , spanked to tears, forced to masturbate ( which my wife does ) then given a true disciplinary spanking with no sexual tension. ( my wife has learned those are effective )

    I personally think David should not be subjected to real penis, but a strap on eventually should be introduced. He is a young man eventually being trained for his storybook Julie. At the end of several books , the book(s) should flash forward to your first post. A story book ending. You Julie are my fantasy. David is a lucky man

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  28. Julie

    I have been following your blog for some time and love it. Both the spankings you receive from David and those you mete out. So far as your book project is concerned I would like to see the following scenario:

    Aunty Sue and Chrissie enjoy a bit of role play in their love life and one afternoon when they believe David is out, Sue dresses in sexy black lingerie (stockings, suspenders, basque, you get the idea) to give Chrissie one of her regular maintenance spankings. It's OTK and Sue uses a nice oval leather paddle on Chrissie's bare bottom but with the emphasis on erotic rather than punishment. Unbeknownst to them, David has had a lecture cancelled and has come home early. Alerted by the sound of the leather paddle landing on Chrissie's backside he creeps up to the door of their bedroom to listen further. Unfortunately a creaking floorboard betrays his presence and Sue shifts Chrissie off her lap and flings open the door. There is clearly only one punishment for eavesdropping that is appropriate in the situation and David is soon over Sue's lap receiving a sound spanking with the very same paddle on his bare bottom. Sue consults Chrissie regularly on whether she is spanking him hard enough or whether there are any areas of his bottom that need more attention. Chrissie is delighted that someone else is getting the treatment she so recently endured and eggs Sue on. Meanwhile Sue is all too aware of a very stiff penis digging into her stocking tops and accidentally on purpose lets her hand brush against David's balls while adjusting her weight on the bed to cause friction against the head of his cock. By continuing a long slow spanking with frequent rearrangement of her thighs she manages to spank poor David to a climax, whereupon she feigns surprise and tells him to get off her lap so that Chrissie can see the results. When David has been despatched to his room Sue confesses to Chrissie how much she enjoyed the episode and they conspire to manufacture other situations in which David will have to be put over her lap for punishment while Chrissie looks on or perhaps participates. David for his part is hoping this wasn't a one-off...

    I don't know whether you ever read the site literotica.com but if you do you will find stories by me as "Eddie" on a spanking theme.

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    Ian

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    1. Thank you, Ian! Love the vignette. I would love to check out your work, but there's too much stuff in litoritica to find you based on just spanking and eddie! can you provide a link?

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    2. Here you go:
      https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5399009&page=submissions

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    3. https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5399009&page=submissions

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    4. Did you get the message Julie? Look for Eddie English

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  29. One day David's ass is very bruised but still needs to be punished, so Sue spanks the back of his legs and he screams in agony.
    One day Sue meets a Turkish friend who offers to try falaqa on David's feet.

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    1. There will be severe spanking!

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    2. Will Sue use the cane or the cord? Or worse a whip or sjambok?

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    3. More domestic, but with feeling!

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    4. So it will be hairbrush, slipper or wooden kitchen item

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  30. The lady in the photo, does she look like Sue?

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    1. Yes, a bit, it's why I picked the photo.

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  31. Yes, sounds great! Would love to see a well-written story along those lines.

    Anon C

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  32. Comme déjà expliqué il est navrant que amazone bloque la traduction sur les kindles, avant je pouvais lire les livres en anglais (en les achetant bien sur ) comme votre dernier livre mais maintenant ce n'est plus possible!
    je ne comprends pas les raisons de cette "censure" qui nous prive de nos lectures de fessées en anglais, ce qui est bien dommage car ils sont plus nombreux qu'en France ....
    Je ne pourrais donc pas acheter votre nouveau livre...

    Mais je suis réguliÚrement votre blog, qui est toujours un enchantement de vous lire....
    Surtout lorsqu'il s'agit de fessées en famille, ce que nous faisons nous meme
    Merci a vous pour vos Ă©crits dans votre blog, et la aucun problĂšme de traduction, avec le traducteur S3

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    1. Hopefully they fix it before I release the book!

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    2. j'avais téléphoné a amazone ils m'on dis que la traduction est illégal je ne comprends pas, des l'instant que l'on paye le livre , 'est pourquoi je dis c'est une sorte de censure... dommage ...

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  33. Very exciting, David should be strictly forbidden to masterbate in Antys house, and when he inevitably gets caught, and then lies about it, he should be given a severe caning, followed by the Victorian cock nettling punishment. Tied up naked on the bed, ankles tightly tied at opposite corners, wrists the same above the head. Then a drawstring pouch containing very fresh cut stinging nettles is placed over his proudly standing hard cock and tightened at the base. He quickly feels the stinging up and down the shaft of his cock as well as his sensitive penis head and he strains and arches his back to no avail and whimpers at the pain while the women snootily remind him of why he is being punished and tell him to be a good boy and accept his fate as they turn out the light and retreat to bed. His cock burning agony makes for a very long night and real tears, yet to his amazement his poor aching cock remains hard.......did one of the ladies slip an errection enhancement pill into his last drink before the punishment started?

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  34. As Jack's wife I find that the punishment is not complete until I know Jacks feels and acts like a naughty little boy. His begging not to be spanked, his spanking dance, pulling out all stops not to be spanked by my mother, facing the wall while others will see and comment. The best is when I have him put on his jammies after a spanking no matter the time of the day, the little boys comes out and he does what Mommy tells him to do with no talking back. Jack's Wife

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    1. We ow have Jack and "Jack's Wife". Will wonders never cease!

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    2. Would love to see Jack's wife instruct her little boy to start a blog? His story is the dream/nightmare for some of us. Please!

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  35. Ooo! We're going back to where it all started! Back to David and his poor, poor red butt! This time with a foot more firmly in the fiction category. I wonder how this one will go... I get a feeling this one might end up being the most extreme yet, a story about David and all the things "Aunt Sue" does to him. A place where all of Julie's most deviant of fantasies she'd wish David would consent to can be forced upon him.

    In other words I definitely see this David getting ass fucked by a big handsome man, then being forced to clean the ejaculate off of his cock when he's finished!

    Saucy.

    -Kasey

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    1. I wonder if "Aunt Sue's" sister "Judie" will make an appearance? Maybe she's the wife of the big handsome man about to plough David's tight little ass? :P

      -Kasey

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  36. My wanted to have sex, I was very sleepy and didn't interact.
    She took off her slipper and gave me a brisk hard spanking that got me fully alert and made love to her.

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    1. Got another one today but this time because she wanted a repeat and my pens won't get up again after the Cumming in her pussy.
      She grabbed her slipper from beside the bed and roasted my ass, this time was far worse as she had that damn jelly slipper and it was applied directly on the bare after I had cum.
      It was pure punishment and my penus could not get up to fuck her again because it was simply drained.

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    2. You boys are very pathetic in that regard.

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    3. I got another helping today with her mean jelly slipper, literally couldn't sit down for a couple of hours and even after still feels sore.

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    4. If you don't like hard spanking, Ask your wife to wear a lighter slipper at home. I find the haviannas suitable or if you are into hard spanking the Ipanema.
      But you enjoy getting a sore and even some how bruised ass keep the jelly slipper.
      If you really enjoy bruised ass, invest in a pair of wooden scholls or even 2 (one flat and one with a short heel).

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    5. No, scholls are expensive.

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  37. I would like David to have a rather round and plump behind that his aunt would take care of strengthening or the reverse...
    In any case, his asscheeks are a frequent subject of discussion.
    An idea: David's mother found his diary (when he was younger) and gives it to his aunt. She finds there a large number of compromising secrets about the boy's tastes and practices.

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  38. Miss Julie I would never be so bold as to suggest a scenario (you have quite the imaginative mind for that!), but I must say that I enjoy reading about the predicaments David finds himself in (usually courtesy of you) probably more than the spankings themselves. A little dose of Sue doesn’t hurt either! Good luck with the project!

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  39. What is David desire? What type of situation does he find the most sexual for him? Jack

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  40. Very excited about David being humiliated by Sue and her girl friend. Wow,getting spanked by Sue, worshipping her feet, licking her shoes clean, getting kicked in the ass & balls by her, being gagged with her socks and slipper, getting whipped by her using a domestic implement such as a hose or cord.

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  41. Well Julie, I don't know if this will be appealing for you, I live in a macho society and corporal punishment is the norm for children.
    This creates a weird thing, for example a boy in addition to being punished by his mom and aunts also older sister could punish him (usually a slipper spanking, as for major offences it is dad's belt) but as soon as he grows to be a man the tables are turned and he gets spanking rights over his older sister.
    So the same boy who used to get his older sister's slipper on his ass, a few years later could use his belt to discipline this same sister.
    What do you think about that between David and aunt Sue's girl friend in your book.

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    1. I think that is a a tantalizing thought. The little brother getting his revenge!

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  42. I find it much more exciting if it's the top telling the story.
    Like this :
    "My eighteen-year-old nephew, is standing in the corner like a naughty six-year-old while me and my partner Chrissy are looking on.
    He is sniffling and his cheeks are wet with tears. His pants and underpants are around his ankles. His well-spanked bare bottom is on full display.
    ....
    Privacy is not a consideration in my house. Spankings are given on-the-spot, regardless of who is there to see them."

    What do you think ?

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    1. My wife would agree, I've been seen many times facing the wall with a very well spanked bottom. I have also been seen getting a spanking, normally is happening when the person drops in. My mother-in-law will spank me, at her home, her rules. Have learned that my wife will insure I have learned my lesson, and if others see, just as good. Jack

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    2. sterny: Yes, I can see the appeal in giving it from the top's point of view, but I think the David character has a more rounded view, and it's about things unfolding to him. Plus, I am enjoying gender-bending myself into the role of a teenage male!

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  43. julie,

    love the concept. so many ways you can go. hope u work in the wedgie angle for david. so humiliating in front of auntie. by the way check out this couple. they are new but are posting awesome content. she is just starting to go down the rabbit hole with a more than willing partner. so hot.

    https://www.pornhub.com/model/karly-edgewood/videos?o=cm

    hope the big storm doesnt bother you tonite. looks like one for the ages.

    regards,
    sgirard

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  44. Don't forget, throughout your story, that a sizable number of 18 yo boys would be willing to offer their virgin anus or young penis to a man just to please him, in exchange for a little consideration or knowledge about life that he believes he has. Ask your david about that...
    w.e anders

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