I was searching around for a new book project - I don't need the money, and certainly not the kind of money one of my books generate (see So, You Want to be an Author) - but I like a good meaty writing project to entertain myself and all y'all as well.
I've done Julie/david and David/julie, so that's it, right? Noooooo! I needed to come up with a new idea, and I came up with this sort of cinéma vérité idea of my province in Canada, called Ontario, leading the way and legalizing and normalizing domestic discipline arrangements between adults. It would totally be a switch book.
Here, for you US people, this is Ontario, where I live:
Because I don't want you US guys invading us and us winding up with Joe Biden, I feel I need to say it's not really as big as the map shows because of the Mercator projection. Here is Ontario's political "leader":
He is the brother of former Toronto mayor, Rob Ford, who, when video came out of him smoking crack with drug dealers, defended himself by saying "I was too drunk to know what I was smoking."
Anyways!
Back to my book idea. So rather than describe the book idea, I thought I'd do a "mini" version of it in my last post. I played it as if it was a genuine newspaper article where David and I were interviewed. I tried to make it slightly believable in the first few paragraphs, and then deliberately got more and more extreme so I could get feedback from you guys if any of those episodes are "too much" for the book and if I should keep it more "toned down" to make it seems more "realistic"; or never mind, let my kinky imagination roam, the more the merrier! Would love your feedback on that.
I maintained character in the comments. One guy legit thought I was trying to fool him, because he went all over looking for a link to the article. I gave him one, but all it lead to was a "rickroll" :-)
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There was another guy that legit felt that I was lying to him and trying to get away with it, but he had sussed me out, and now that brought into question everything on my blog.
I hear that about 1/3 of humans have no sense of humour at all (I suspect they are all Democrats). And then clearly, 1/3 of those are so gullible they will almost believe anything. For you dum dums, I'm sorry about the nafty twick.
Anyway, if you haven't already, please go look at it now and then come back here to read more about the book concept and give me advice: Consent Ring Gets Nod in Ontario
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So you get the idea. The book would be a sort of "investigative report" by practitioner Julie Delmar. Each chapter would be an extended interview with a different couple. I'd interview the founders of the movement and get some of the back history. Then I'd interview the people who directly lobbied for the law changes, and some of the politicians responsible for passing it. I'd interview Church and community leaders, the police chief, and so on. I'd interview some leaders and regular people who are opposed to it. I'd interview some teens who are watching all of this but not subject to it. I'd interview parents and relatives of people who practice it and what they think about it. I would have a personal story that I would get into as well. But the bulk of it would be a bunch of interviews with "real couples" and parents with grown children (18+, age of majority), and how they practice domestic discipline.
Some of those background interviews would be just sort of subtly kinky. E.g., an older woman saying "I really can't see how anybody can approve of a young woman, with her pants down in public, getting hit on her backside by a man. It's simple abuse!"
Feels like a good premise to tie together a bunch of kinky episodes. Given the premise, I could include open public scenes, family scenes, I could mix boys and girls, throw in a few alternative embarrassing punishments, like public diaperings and the like.
So what do you think of my book idea?
Go for it, or don't bother?
What kink level? Do you care?
Any suggestions that would make it a more fun read for you?"
Please let me know!
Sounds like a really fun idea! Definitely go for it, and you could include real couples who communicate with you. I can't imagine why some spanking sites have not adopted this as a theme already.
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Nice! Very encouraging, given the source!
DeleteI think you are off to a good start with your pilot post. I'd say keep it on the verge of barely believable at least until the reader gets at least half way through the book, then you can drop them off into the deep end. I'd buy this book, having read yyour last one, the book about Julie's spankings. And you can post bits of the book on the blog as you are working on it. Keep in mind that you might be creating a hypersigil and like Grant Morrison, discover that your fictional story was coming true in real life. So be careful what you wish for. - Frank
ReplyDeleteGreat advice re slowly puling the reader into the deep end a little bit at a time so they hardly notice. the boiling frog theory of kink writing!
DeleteI'm a writer and editor. National newspapers and stuff. 30+ years in the trade, and 10+ years reading the blog.
ReplyDeleteIt was obvious rubbish, as a few seconds on Google confirmed.
FWIW, I don't like the book idea, although there *are* ways it could be made to work. You need to get better at narrative and storyboarding, though.
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Oh dear, I was expecting literally nobody, I mean 0 people, to "fall for it", it was so transparently not a thing. No seconds on Google required!
DeleteYour comment seems a bit mean-spirited overall. Any constructive criticism?
Mister 'Writer and Editor' here needed google to make sure an obvious fiction was fiction, then criticises the author in the very next sentence he writes. Someone certainly has a grandeur impression of themselves, huh? Yikes.
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fwiw, I am with anon
Deletebut maybe because I didn't think it was funny: was it supposed to be funny?
No. It was transparently meant to be fiction, I'm sorry that you're gullible.
DeleteSorry you felt it to be mean-spirited -- I was trying to answer the questions that you posed.
DeleteYou write well, but my point is that it is difficult to sustain a narrative thread over 20-30,000 words (or however many you want the book to be) without some appropriate storyboarding. Otherwise you run the risk of it simply meandering and going nowhere.
Is that constructive enough? It's precisely the same point, though.
My last book, Julie's Spankings was 80,000 words and maintained a narrative thread throughout. Do you find fault with it, and if so in what ways? My ask is genuine. You may email if you wish (see about me box top right for address).
DeleteThis book being contemplated would not have as much need for the narrative thread as each chapter would be a separate "interview", each largely unconnected from the other. It would just need to follow the consistent set of rules I establish for this alternate world. No?
I think you're sort of making my point for me. A whole series of interviews is going to read like... a whole series of interviews. Just with different people, and different levels and types of kink.
DeleteWhy not impose a super-narrative on it, to sustain interest? So (and I'm just throwing stuff out here) you could have a naïve young married female reporter sent to do these interviews, and gradually being sucked into the lifestyle, for instance.
That way, there would be a link from one chapter to the next, as her story unfolds, with all the plot tension that brings.
I'm sure that you can think of heaps of other, better, ideas -- I'm just giving you an example of what I was thinking of.
Thanks, but I was thinking more as a "report style" format. A sort of retrospective where I am the author and I interview folks associated with the history of how the laws were passed, and gather multiple "lived experiences" (including my own).
DeleteSo you should think of it more as a collection of short stories with this over-arching theme and a shared universe. No plot narrative running through.
Many spanking books are collections of disconnected short stories, often with no overarching theme. My first book is like that as well, but with an overarching theme tying everything together. i thought it "worked" and feedback was positive.
Also, still a little stung by your "You need to get better at narrative and storyboarding, though." My run at that was "Julie's Spankings". Is your criticism based on your reading of that book, or an assumption based on the fact that I mainly write a blog?
DeleteSorry about that. In my world (I do a fair bit of mentoring) that would count as objective feedback. You hadn't asked for it, though, so I'll accept that it was out of order. Apologies.
DeleteMy criticism was based solely on your longer blog posts.
Thanks, totally accepted.
DeleteI make no attempt to storyboard or maintain a narrative in my longer blog posts. They are free association - it's why I produce so much.
Please do read my book, where I did make a concerted effort to storyboard and maintain a narrative across a novel-length book. Laboured over it! If you enjoy my more subby posts on my blog you will enjoy my book. Then please let me know your thoughts. I would welcome informed criticism!
OK, I've bought the book, and will read it. I'll reply here when I have. That will work, I take it?
DeleteAwesome! Thank you so much!!!
DeleteIf you have only good things to say, please feel free to share it publicly here!
But... if it's going to be a spanking, as much as I enjoy public humiliation, perhaps you should send it by email to strictjulie at gmail dot com ? (I write it our like that because if you use the "." and the "@" I understand bots scrape up your email and spam you mercilessly!)
On the basis that you can delete comments that you don't like (yes/no?), I will send it here, on privacy grounds.
DeleteOh sure, no problem. Not in my nature to delete comments, will just have to suffer the shame of going across your knee for a panties down spanking in the living room instead of alone with you in my bedroom. I'll live!
DeleteBut you should create a "kinky burner email" like the rest of us do, though often the older generation will dump their real names in there somewhere during the account setup. I let them know, help them to fix, and delete any emails with a hint of real name, and am very trustworthy. You can actually test it yourself by sending an email from kinky account to real account to make sure all personal info is hidden. Of course, the NSA will be able to suss you out, but the rest of us can't.
A quick fix would be to start the book like this:
Delete"It was a cold and stormy night. Journalist Julie Delmar sat at her desk. She took a long sip from her mug of hot coffee; she had plenty of work to do, proof reading the interviews she had conducted. They sat neatly in a pile on her desk. She lent back in the chair, stretched out her arms, and then got on with the job at hand.
She picked up the first article and perused it. It read as follows:"
Then you start each chapter a little like this:
"'Cor, blimey!' said Julie. 'I don't remember the interview being that naughty! Lawks, I'm all horny and my panties are soaking from the inside out! Well, time to read another!'
With that, she picked up the next article and began reading it in her head, studying every word with a well trained eye. It ran thus:"
Finally, you end the book like this:
"'What a great collection of articles' Julie thought. 'I see no reason to connect them with an overarching narrative. I'm going to send this to the publishers and have a nice long wank!'
And so she did, and then she lived happily ever after.
The End."
You can both be happy!
Well Julie, if you ever need help writing the book, I guess now you know where to turn. - Frank
DeletePlenty of "help"! :-)
DeleteTo identify myself, I'm the writer and editor guy. I've had a manic two weeks, and my Kindle's battery keeps discharging ridiculously quickly.
DeleteI've seen little in what I've read so far to really change my opinion, although the book is (of course!) very well written. Meanwhile, you're ploughing ahead with the new book anyway. So it all seems a bit irrelevant.
If I can give you one piece of advice (based on reading about 20% of the book) it would be to minimise the linear flow element. Granted, life happens like that -- but interesting plots don't.
Happy to proof-read -- feel free to reach out; I'd create a burner e-mail for that. But this exchange doesn't really seem to call for that.
Good luck with your endeavours; I look forward to enjoying them!
Ploughing ahead? No, flying ahead on wings of kinky angels!
DeleteYeah, writing a real novel would be tough. My book was more a collection of kinky episodes, but I could build on earlier narrative and character development.
This one no narrative at all. Collection of short stories really, all in the same universe. Am having most troubles deciding if I should go "interview form" as in explicit questions and answers, or something else...
I must admit, as I was reading it, it gave me a feeling as if it were... hrm...a gender neutral version of the whole female led society fantasy that's out there. I remember there being a website devoted to female led relationships, but I guess the creator of that website expanded on that idea and created an entire society revolving around it. Let me see if I can find that bad boy again.
ReplyDeleteOh boy that took a long time to find, but eventually I did find it:
https://flrworldjoy.com/Home.html
Anyway, your little article and the Consent Rings reminded me of this. Except of course it's inclusive of Male led and same sex relationships rather than simply female led. It's punitive, there is structure with clear cause and effect, humiliation is acceptable and even encouraged, so on and so forth.
I do wonder just where that devilish mind of yours could take this idea if you ran with it. I've got about a million ideas floating around in my head and you seem about a hundred times more creative than I.
As for how extreme can you get? I believe when it comes to kink storytelling, suspension of disbelief is key and your readers will be very, very lenient in that regard. I definitely don't think you should be holding back simply because something might be a little too edgy to be done in "polite society". Let's face it, by creating and normalising Consent Rings in society, you've already molded it and changed it from the norm, so running with that idea will have no adverse reaction from readers.
-Kasey
I wrote a piece of fiction along those lines, CE2047 "A story about a future society where women have taken charge and males need a female guardian and are kept in line by means of Registered Disciplinarians."
DeleteIt works because males are on the bottom, but I think it just gets a bit dystopian if it's applied to women. This time I'm looking at a consensual model that can work for all genders. And a bit controversial in that some people oppose it.
And thank you for your thoughts on the extremity of the kink. My modus operandi in my last book was to gently suspend disbelief at the start and then make it gradually more and more. Same thought here, I guess.
Oh, yes! I'd forgotten you'd written that. Very similar ideas to what I had linked, but yeah, entirely female dominated society is just so limiting! What if you're a gal who likes getting punished for being naughty every now and then? Cant do that if you rule the world!
DeleteI think your idea of starting small and slowly expanding into the realms of fantasy works for your previous books because they're more personal. Initially it's about either David or yourself so it kind of has that core of truth to it, but with this, from what I've read it seems to be much broader in scope. Sure, you and David have Consent Rings, but so did Amanda, and Fred, and Sam, and many, many others all throughout Ontario.
I feel this implies that this practice is more or less accepted in your province (despite some backlash with people opposing it) which means your starting point for this possible work of fiction is already deviated from the norm of society enough to make the starting point of the kinks shown more extreme than in your previous works.
Does that make sense? I know what I'm trying to convey but I'm unsure if I'm expressing it well, lol.
-Kasey
Totally get it! It's like in good science fiction. If you accept just one thing is different, then everything else just needs to be consistent with that one thing and were good. Insightful. Thanks!
DeleteGosh, this idea of yours has been on my mind all day. I wonder, since it was legislated and passed in your province, whether there has also been public spending in installing public disciplinary implement containers and punishment benches and such in restrooms and the like?
DeleteIf your Consent Ring partner acts up, you could take them to the restroom, pay to borrow their cane, for example, have them bend over the punishment bench and make them count their strokes out loud?
My goodness, this is a goldmine of an idea, Julie!
-Kasey
I don't see why not. But more likely private establishments would go first to attract customers. And "Ring Bearer" might become a new intersectional identity whose members we need to cater to and take care not to offend, such as trans has become.
DeleteI’d like to see a dystopian society novel Handmaids tale style. How about “It all began with the consent ring legislation which first brought the Delmars to public prominence. First the Delmars kinky stories and practices were a novelty but it caught on and they became elected to parliament. As the Delmars rose they formed the kink party. More and more legislation followed and society became divided apartheid style into the patrician dominants led by Ms Julie and the common plebeian submissives. But one day the submissives revolt and Julie is spanked and fucked by the people in Toronto’s main square. Viva la France.
ReplyDeleteMaybe the sequel! I do love the concept of the guillotine being replaced by the spanking bench.
DeleteInteresting that you mention science fiction. In 1938 an American radio station broadcast an adaptation of H G Well's novel "The War of the Worlds" about an invasion from Mars. The station presented the novel as fact in the form of news flashes. Many people believed that Martians really were invading the Earth, panic stricken listeners jammed phone lines trying to call the police and to call friends and relatives to warn them of the alleged invasion.
ReplyDeleteInstead of (or in addition to) writing a book, perhaps you could persuade your local radio or tv station to broadcast a news item about the new law coming into force. I can imagine the phone calls it would get! Maybe a company that sells spanking implements would agree to sponsor it, it would be very good for business.
Gordon
I could be the modern-day Orson Wells!
DeleteYes, 100% switch, with the negative reactions (1) integrated to have all the components, perverted, of a good small society. It will be really nice to discover some new places of your mind. If we stay in the metaphor, you are going to open your career again. Version "Julie quite naked pushes a wheelbarrow" or version, Sardax style, "queen, throne, whips, slaves at work". Good luck to you, all the pleasure will be for us. Surprise us.
ReplyDelete(1) find a role (and a ring) for the grumpy editor
Thank you! (And will do.)
DeleteWell, I feel well and truly gazumped! In all my years as a starship pilot I have never been so broadly lied to! I'm beginning to wonder about that bridge I bought from you!
ReplyDeleteObviously now that the Great Oz has been revealed the lady behind the curtain should be published in the most public and humiliating fashion the real law will allow. After that, the new book sounds very promising! I wouldn't worry about how kinky to make it or how realistic - treat it the same as good horror or sci-fi - set out consistent rules within your universe, stick with them, and everything else is fair game. If you're doing it for fun rather than profit then why focus group it? Get as daring as you like!
I'm not taking your swipe at the Democrats too seriously, but I did hear on a podcast that Democrats tend to lean towards what you might call cringe humour and satire grounded in the real world, whilst Republicans favour broader sight gags and slapstick like Airplane! or The Naked Gun films.
The best of luck with what sounds like an excellent endeavour!
Thank you Tanky.
DeleteAnd the bridge is on the level, it connects two of the boroughs of New York City, you will make a killing if you charge a toll.
It sounds great! And who knows bridges better than a troll?
DeleteI don't think that gradually drawing people in is really practical. We know you and so we will know that it is fantasy. I love the idea that you give readers the opportunity to present scenes and stories. Perhaps you could have chapters that focussed on specific men and women who consented to wear the ring and what it led to. Your story allowed me to create my own little scene. I had a great time imagning my fate. Tommy
ReplyDeleteYes, but maybe draw you deeper and deeper where every chapter you say, she can't possibly outdo this!
DeleteI trust your judgment. You may be the spanked wife but, on this site you are still the boss.
DeleteDarned tootin'!
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I think this is a great idea. I always enjoy the stories in the classic spanking magazines that purport to be research into real spanking couples and situations.
ReplyDeleteIt'll be interesting to see how you present it on Amazon. Do you admit upfront that it's fictional, or present it as factual along the lines of a shocking study into the ongoing corporal punishment 'problem'...
Good question! I would want to make it look 100% real, but am worried of running afoul of some rule or other. I'll write it that way anyway and maybe add a disclaimer at the end?
DeleteYou have an interesting concept that could be a titillating read if done properly. You are a very skilled writer with an eye for detail so I expect you could turn it into a good read.
ReplyDeleteI have written stories in my blog in a similar vein , where women become fed up with their male dominated society and make changes where they take over control and implement a legal system where women can use corporal punishment on their husband or boyfriend , and the courts can release a man into the custody of their wife for appropriate punishment for not respecting their wife and he is legally obligated to comply.
She must provide evidence to the court that the punishment was carried out.
Towns had special areas where a wife can take her husband for discipline if he acts up in public.
The possibilities are endless and it is fun to write.
I say give it a go and let that naughty mind of yours go wild....good luck!
Great minds think alike. I did a similar story called CE2042 you can find in my fiction with Julie link top right. Can you point me at one of yours in this vein, would love to read!
DeleteYou Naughty Naughty Girl , Confusing people like that LOLOLOLOL (smh) What are we gonna do with you ?? :p Why not do it , its a fun read and you could start each one with the subtitle " Real or Not? You decide .
ReplyDeleteNow get your nose in corner for 10 min for being such a naughty brat .... Yes bare bottomed ! "SWAT"
Paddle Daddy
Did I fool you Daddy? Maybe you SO MUCH want for it to be real that you got pulled in! :-)
DeleteNope, I figured it was a hoax pretty quickly. (1) why would Canada give a crap in the first place? However the premise of "real or not " would be fun to play with. You need stories both real and fake to make it work and let reader decide.. Now get your nose back in corner and stop talking or im gonna get the paddle !
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Nice book idea. You have one thing wrong: Republicans have no sense of humor. The proof is that they aren't laughing at Donald Trump, a sad joke who still believes he's president.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if it matters whether or not you are extreme in your book. I doubt most women will connect with the subject matter. Men, on the other hand, probably will.
No, we laugh WITH Donald Trump. Those who can't recognize Trump's sense of humour lack a sense of humour themselves.
DeleteI don't know if women won't connect. My blog has 25% female readership according to google analytics.
Only 25% female readership? Most spanking blogs are written by women. I would have thought there would be more women readers of spanking blogs too. What do you know about general demographics in the segment? - Frank
DeleteI'm not sure in general. I may have higher male ratio because I am better known as a femdom/malesub blog (see blog title, now a little out of date!). But my general observation is that men are more interested in explicit spanking content, whereas more women are more interested in a more Harlequin Romance style thing, maybe with a little sexy spanking thrown in? My blog is definitely the former!
DeleteDon't underestimate the Fords as a source of comedy gold. I remember a few years ago he tried to defend himself at a Jewish university after allegedly using an anti-Semitic slur by listing the Jewish people he knows... "My doctor, my Jewish doctor, my Jewish dentist, my Jewish lawyer-." At this point the crowd are booing so loud he has to motion for them to settle down before continuing with "My Jewish accountant…” This time the crowd erupts louder than before! The next day he tells the press his wife's Jewish. The day after that she goes on camera explaining she has Jewish ancestors but doesn't practice "Judism" herself. You couldn't write it!
DeleteTo be fair, our Boris Johnson goes out of his way to appear foolish and silly so you don't realise what a cold hearted odious little shit he is. Hanging from a zip wire waving the Union Jack, driving around in a double decker bus lying about how the NHS will benefit Brexit, deliberately fucking up his hair before interviews... He's like a razor blade hidden in candy floss; a solid laugh if you don't care about people getting hurt.
One of my favourite Rob Ford moments, almost made me like him, Rest In Peace, was this one:
Delete"Oh and the last thing was Olivia Gondek, it says it says that I wanted to eat her pussy. Olivia Gondek, I've never said that in my life to her. I would never do that. I'm happily married. I've got more than enough to eat at home. Thank you very much."
Mayor Ford was referencing former special assistant Olivia Gondek, to whom he has been accused of making inappropriate comments, according to CBC News.
Love it! That's how you talk to the press! Not like our Right Honourable Prime Minister, who ran and hid in a fridge on live telly rather than being interviewed on the day before an election! He's a total buffoon, but people find that endearing. It's all the spectacle of Trump without the edge; people treat him like he's Hugh Grant's doddery uncle in a Richard Curtis movie rather than a menace to society.
DeleteJulie, yes I remember that news episode with Rob Ford. Journalists aren't having as much fun these days with politicians who are pretty much a straitlaced bunch here in Canada nowadays. Trump provided a lot of this kind of entertainment for a few years down in the states, but Biden doesn't look to be as much fun. And as you suggest Tanky, Boris' public personna does seem rather artificial and made for publicity. - Frank
DeleteYes, he for sure was a disappointment. Somebody must have got to him.
DeleteTrump continues to amuse from his new "social media platform", a series of tweet-sized "press releases" posted to a c.2000 web site https://www.donaldjtrump.com/desk. Donald for the win! Trump2024!
DeleteIf you love Trump so much why don't you bear the ring for him?
DeleteThe Apprentice would have been a much different show in RingWorld™, you know "Mr Trump" would insist on competitors bearing the ring for him. He'd probably pay professionals to do all his spankings for him... Except maybe darling Ivanka's!
Oh yes! In a second!!!!
DeleteI think the "Julie the Reporter" premise is really clever and with the subject matter you're considering there are all kinds of fun possibilities, even just in domestic (family) discipline. But could the Consent Ring Bill be applicable in some form in workplace, school, etc. situations as well - or would that require additional action by the Legislative Assembly?
ReplyDeleteAlso, are you sure you don't want Joe Biden there in Ontario? The US wouldn't even need to invade your beautiful province, we could just send him there for you all by his lonesome.
I truly don't think he'd be missed much here. As for Joe, assuming he even noticed the change of scenery, he'd be ok with it too. He's pretty much a go with the flow (to put it kindly) sort of guy these days.
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Yeah, workplace discipline could be tricky... I am thinking that due to the power imbalance it's probably banned? But a workaround is for the boss to contact the spouse of a ring bearer.
DeleteSuch a hard choice, Biden or Turdeau. I think I'd choose Biden, at least he's not actively malevolent, just lost.
It would work in a family run business. A couple running a bakery, or a farmer teaching his grown up kids how to run the family farm.
DeleteI can imagine, following what they call on r/DirtyPenPals "porn logic," a bearer's guardian being worried that the ring wearer is not performing well as a breadwinner, and permitting an assistant to discipline them. The bearer being demoted or sacked would be bad for the family unit.
Yes! So many great ideas, I think I have a winner concept!
DeletePour moi tout naturellement c'est les fessées familiales qui m’intéressent puisque c'est ce que nous vivons...
ReplyDeleteDe façon à voir si d'autres personnes vivent la même expérience que la notre , des fessées avec mes 2 filles sans tabous...
les couches ne m’intéressent pas, mais je comprends parfaitement ceux qui la pratique, il en faut pour tout le monde...
Des l’instant que se sont des fessées consentantes, avec du plaisir, toutes les fessées sont excitantes...
l'on dis que les femmes sont très cérébrales, mais j'adore aussi des histoires bien écrites, qui me font durcir, bien plus que des vidéos ou se sont des professionnels qui jouent …
Bien sur, se sera toujours le réel qui sera le meilleur, du fait de la vision, ou du contact des parties intimes de chacun, qui donne les frisons du plaisir avant l'orgasme, qui nous font découvrir les moment inoubliables des plaisir de la fessée, et donc du plaisir de la vie...
Continuer a écrire pour notre plaisir, je souhaiterai que mes filles vous lise , mais je ne veux pas leur faire voir que je raconte nos fessées...
Yes, wouldn't they be surprised to read all about themselves here!
DeleteJe crois que je recevrais moi même une fessée ...
Deletec'est déjà arrivé et la première fois, ce fut un moment que je me rappelle comme si c'était hier ....
DeleteFesser ses filles c'est naturel, mais le papa qui reçoit une fessée par elle c'est pas banal, c'est extraordinaire, exceptionnel, mais surtout très bon ...
A. I’m all for anything involving diapers.
ReplyDeleteB. I’m all for diaper humiliation.
C. You need more diaper content, including, but not limited to, you FINALLY being diapered....by Sue. Or your mom. I’m good either way. A grown woman demoting another grown woman to diapers is so much sexier and hotter than a man doing it.
A. got it
DeleteB. got it again!
C. I agree - Mom diapering me would be the worst! I have a scene like that it my latest book. It was horrible imagining it. Also have a Sunday school teacher diapering me in front of two angry parents whose kid i smacked. you should definitely read my Julie's Spankings book for some great diaper content!
You do realize you are following in a literary tradition here, of authors like Will Henry, and his books such as "Modern Spanking" many of which are also collections of purported (or maybe real) journalistic interviews. - Frank
ReplyDeleteI did not! I will seek out.
DeleteONG, I did know, but not consciously! I googled it and found the first reference was from OurBottomsBurn blog and the first comment was mine!
Deletehttps://ourbottomsburn.wordpress.com/2020/11/11/modern-spankings/
No recollection at all. I guess that's how minds work, we sift through the detritus in our brains to put "new" ideas together. It will be a homage to mr Henry.
You’re such a naughty minx Ms Julie. I found myself watching Bewitched reruns recently and Samantha (she’s hot) reminded me of you. Darren needs a good magical spanking with Endora watching.
ReplyDeleteSamantha is the ultimate femdom!
DeleteHey it’s a worry that all these conservative politicians are smoking crack and trading hookers. That’s our liberal thing. Bloody republicans are trying to crash the party. They should stick to god and their wars on drugs.
ReplyDeleteI think you're describing power hungry politicians in general!
DeleteWC here
ReplyDeleteVery clever and fun!
Keep up the great work young lady
Your fan
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Thanks or the feedback!
DeleteThe trouble with using he uniting theme of the ring in your book will be that it will all easily be all identified as fiction, whereas if you leave the ring out of it and just tell stories of spanking in peoples and couples' lives you will be able to mix fact and fixtion and it will be more difficult for the reader to tell them apart. And if you're doing an overt 'homage to Will Henry you could just call it "Post-modern Spanking". - Frank
ReplyDeleteI don't want to actually fool anybody. I want a willing suspension of disbelief. If you strain that too much, it breaks. My whole idea is to write a book about the Consent Rings. Using real-seeming interviews (given you just suspend disbelief for the pretence), is the vehicle.
DeleteSo the person wearing the ring is telling others that he/she is being spanked. Is there a sign for the person who spanks?
ReplyDeleteThere is no doubt that there will be questions about who is this person, along with the embarrassment that comes with it. The wearer of the ring may be tempted to make it disappear in their pocket in certain circumstances.
Their initial is on the person's ring. Also I imagine there is a scannable RFID on the ring so bystanders can get more details from a public registry to make sure it's the right spanker and all that. And remember it is consensual, so if she takes the ring off, she's no longer consenting. It's like I have a safeword, even for real punishments, but won't use it because I want that relationship with my husband.
DeleteActive RFID technology that enables identification and tracking of individuals may be used in certain marital agreements.
DeleteThanks to the RFID reader, anyone can receive this type of message:
“Julie is available for a panties down spanking today anytime and anywhere from 10 am to 6 pm. It doesn't matter who's around."
Exactly!
DeleteThe fiction you have already written, both the stuff available on Amazon and the stories on your website, is better (in my opinion) than just about everything else in spanking fiction I've ever read. It's hot, hot, hot! I have no doubt your new book will be just as good. The severity level of CE2047 is where it needs to be. It's okay to back off a little from that in the beginning as long as you eventually go to CE2047 intensity later in the book. Descriptions of the reactions of the person as he or she is being spanked is especially important.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mark, that's great feedback for me. Keeps me going. My natural inclination is go intense, it's holding me back in the early chapters that is hard!
DeleteWell, you definitely had me convinced. and I was pretty impressed with the concept and your governing body codifying it into law.
ReplyDeleteNot disappointed with it being fiction, and I continue to thoroughly enjoy your writing and your fantastic kink.
Cool! I actually think it's a reasonable proposition.
DeleteFor some reason my comment didn’t go through. But, I’m starting to wonder how much of this blog is real and how much is fiction. There was no way you could keep your husband in the dark about the blog for years, given the amount of time you spend on it. Then, more and more post that are fictitious. You’re a great writer, but lately you’re making me think there is a lot more fiction mixed in with reality than you’re letting on!
ReplyDeleteI explained the situation with my husband a few posts ago. The fiction is clearly marked as such. As for the rest, you're welcome to make up your own mind!
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